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Transmute Jun Transmute Jun is a Female

Queen of the Bird Missiles

I am a Swan.

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quote:

Originally posted by clouddancer
Huggles

Awwww
More kind words from TJ.
You really knows how to encourage a gal.

*I know, you are only doing it to get my story*
After my story is posted you will stop.

Are you saying that I am fickle and shallow? Very Tired

quote:

Until I tell you I am writing more, from another prespective. Adding a bit of background with it.

Yay!!!!!!!!

FTR, CD, I like having you around the boards no matter what. But having more fics to read just makes me oh so excited! Bounce2

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12-09-2007 21:58

clouddancer clouddancer is a Female

Gatchamaniac

I am an Owl.

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quote:

Originally posted by Transmute Jun

Are you saying that I am fickle and shallow? Very Tired

Please, TJ I hope you know I don't mean that.
I would Detonate

if I really thought you did.

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12-09-2007 22:13

Transmute Jun Transmute Jun is a Female

Queen of the Bird Missiles

I am a Swan.

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quote:

Originally posted by clouddancer

quote:

Originally posted by Transmute Jun

Are you saying that I am fickle and shallow? Very Tired

Please, TJ I hope you know I don't mean that.
I would Detonate

if I really thought you did.

I know you don't... I was j/k.... Huggles

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12-09-2007 22:43

clouddancer clouddancer is a Female

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I am an Owl.

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Cloud gives a dramatic big sigh. drama

I would never want to upset the person who has been spending so much time boosting my ego.
And writing such nice smuty and angsty stories. giggle

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13-09-2007 00:45

Transmute Jun Transmute Jun is a Female

Queen of the Bird Missiles

I am a Swan.

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quote:

Originally posted by clouddancer
Cloud gives a dramatic big sigh. drama

I would never want to upset the person who has been spending so much time boosting my ego.
And writing such nice smuty and angsty stories. giggle

Awwwww..... Blushing

I guess I'll just have to keep writing those smutty and angsty stories, then. Wink

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13-09-2007 01:27

clouddancer clouddancer is a Female

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Keep it up TJ, then I can keep praising your writing. first

BTW I enjoyed today's three chapters of Nice.
I like how you use the flash backs to deepen the angst.

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13-09-2007 02:21

Transmute Jun Transmute Jun is a Female

Queen of the Bird Missiles

I am a Swan.

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quote:

Originally posted by clouddancer
Keep it up TJ, then I can keep praising your writing. first

Well, as you say, that's good motivation... Big Grin

quote:

BTW I enjoyed today's three chapters of Nice.
I like how you use the flash backs to deepen the angst.

Anything to deepen the angst... Wink

Don't worry, tomorrow the angst will begin anew... As if it ever really stopped. Can you see now why this one took so long to write?

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This post has been edited 1 time(s), it was last edited by Transmute Jun on 13-09-2007 at 03:48.

13-09-2007 02:41

clouddancer clouddancer is a Female

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That and the fact that your stories are much longer than mine.
Many, many pages longer than mine.
But, maybe mine will get longer the more I write.
Or maybe me being an Owl of few words will keep my stories shorter.

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13-09-2007 02:47

Transmute Jun Transmute Jun is a Female

Queen of the Bird Missiles

I am a Swan.

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LOL... I have a problem with brevity. I can't just write a scene, I have to have all of the setup and everything that goes with it... it can take awhile. Just look at Springie is in the Air. That was supposed to be Ken/Jun PWP... and I spent 10 pages just setting up the smut!!!

It's a sickness, I tell you...

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13-09-2007 03:50

Firebird
Princess Firebird..... Goddess of Swannie Fics

I am a Swan.

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quote:

Originally posted by Transmute Jun
It's a sickness, I tell you...

An incurable one I hope as I love your fics Luvu3

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13-09-2007 11:55

Transmute Jun Transmute Jun is a Female

Queen of the Bird Missiles

I am a Swan.

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quote:

Originally posted by Firebird

quote:

Originally posted by Transmute Jun
It's a sickness, I tell you...

An incurable one I hope as I love your fics Luvu3

And they do tend to go on and on and on and on... blah2

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13-09-2007 13:30

clouddancer clouddancer is a Female

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but you use words so well.
The stories do not feel like they are going on and on.

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This post has been edited 1 time(s), it was last edited by clouddancer on 13-09-2007 at 14:28.

13-09-2007 14:28

Firebird
Princess Firebird..... Goddess of Swannie Fics

I am a Swan.

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ITA Cd they dont have that feel, in fact they leave you wanting to know what happens next!"

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13-09-2007 17:14

clouddancer clouddancer is a Female

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I am an Owl.

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Or wanting more........

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13-09-2007 17:49

Ebonyswanne Ebonyswanne is a Female

Gatchamaniac

I am a Swan.

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quote:

Originally posted by clouddancer
That and the fact that your stories are much longer than mine.
Many, many pages longer than mine.
But, maybe mine will get longer the more I write.
Or maybe me being an Owl of few words will keep my stories shorter.

It's good to start with a few short ones!

I guess it just depends on the story.

I like flashbacks in a story at times, it deepens the plot and the content of the story...

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13-09-2007 21:49

amyltrer

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I am an Egoblosser.

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Yup, CD, short stories are much more easier to write, and you don't need a whole plot and the action can spin around a small event.

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13-09-2007 22:16

clouddancer clouddancer is a Female

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I am an Owl.

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I have started writing a continuation of the story I will post. Or another point of view. It gives some background to my world in it. It is not really a flashback, not as I think of them anyway, just the Chief talking to Cronus and bringing up information in conversation.

He has revealed a lot of information but I can not get the story to where I want it, or to where I thought it was going. So am now trying to decide if I should leave it for a bit, try to force it to where I want it, or let it take its own course.

I am going to look at it later tonight and then see what I decide.

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13-09-2007 22:30

Transmute Jun Transmute Jun is a Female

Queen of the Bird Missiles

I am a Swan.

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Let it go where you feel most comfortable CD. You don't want to force anything.

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14-09-2007 03:34

Transmute Jun Transmute Jun is a Female

Queen of the Bird Missiles

I am a Swan.

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Registration Date: 04-04-2007
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quote:

Originally posted by Firebird
ITA Cd they dont have that feel, in fact they leave you wanting to know what happens next!"

quote:

Originally posted by Cloud Dancer
Or wanting more........

You guys are so sweet! And because you are, I posted more... Wink

Okay, I would have posted more anyhow, but it makes me feel wonderful to know that you are reading it and enjoying it! Blushing

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14-09-2007 03:37

clouddancer clouddancer is a Female

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I am an Owl.

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No I do not want to force it. But I do want to make it go where I want to.

I know how I want it to end. It is taking that last step to get there that is the problem.

I know what Anderson and Cronus finish up saying, it is how I get the conversation there that I am having problems with.

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14-09-2007 15:39

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