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Last post by ChrisW 4 Aug 2017 16:33
Hi all! This week the prompt word is
Fired
I hope it sparks some creative responses!
GrumpyGhostOwl
Master Boardie
posted 30 Jul 2017 02:45
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GrumpyGhostOwl
Master Boardie
posted 1 Aug 2017 17:16
Jun really needs to get out and meet other people. Which would probably result in this story turning into a really complicated ensemble-cast rom-com.
Yeah more "South Park."(It would take a bit of work to plot out properly make it more complex.)
That's the thing with Gatchaman. there was more emphasis on them being "secret" about identities.
Less people knew who they actually were in the first series if any. Of course, there is the contradictions that make cannon so much fun. Mmmm...
It really was a crappy cover, can you imagine closing the place in peak hour lunch break!
GrumpyGhostOwl
Master Boardie
posted 1 Aug 2017 18:24
Actually, I just had a crazy idea which could work in with your plot: have Jun decide to go out with Silvia. *
You could play it straight (pun intended), invoke the 'battle of the sexes' trope, or boldly go wherever you think the laughs might be.
Either way you could have a lot of fun.
* Diversity and inclusion!
Ebonyswanne
Gatchamaniac
posted 1 Aug 2017 20:05
That would be funny. Take both of them by surprise, and their egos. lol Wonder what puns Jinpei could make out of that one.
Do the ending re-write in another BBJ. Alternate...
I love how Jun's upset that Ken's being exploited by a woman, when she exploited him by pimping him out for dates.
Ebonyswanne
Gatchamaniac
posted 2 Aug 2017 20:10
Originally posted by ChrisW I love how Jun's upset that Ken's being exploited by a woman, when she exploited him by pimping him out for dates.Its often how things happen. Blinded by their own actions and will be angry at others for the same things. Hear it all the time... takes a bit for some people to take the plank out of their eye.
Yup! I read this book, I think it was "How to get the love you want," and one thing they pointed out is that the thing that annoys you the most about your partner could very well be something you dislike about yourself. It really stuck with me.
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