The Bicycle Fic

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Redbird
Redbird Gatchamaniac posted 29 May 2017 08:14 (edited 29 May 2017 08:34)
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ChrisW
ChrisW Gatchamaniac posted 29 May 2017 11:58
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Aw I love this. Smile It's kinda adorable. Smile
Redbird
Redbird Gatchamaniac posted 29 May 2017 13:29
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It was a lot of fun to write-- Ken and Joe being bratty kids! Tongue
GrumpyGhostOwl
GrumpyGhostOwl Master Boardie posted 29 May 2017 16:15 (edited 29 May 2017 16:16)
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Another nice little slice of life. It is fun to write the characters as kids, and I find your portrayal of Nambu incredibly comforting in that you are able to describe an individual with even less of a clue about small children than me. (I'd quite happily take the Jesuits at their word when they say, "Give me the child until he is seven and I will show you the man," because that means they'd have to deal with all the potty training and everything.) PS: When I read the title of this fic, Queen's Bicycle Song immediately began playing in my head.
Ebonyswanne
Ebonyswanne Gatchamaniac posted 29 May 2017 16:19
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The fight over the bike. So it begins! Lol. Such a kid thing to do. I could imagine Joe as a kid being a bully if left unchecked. He would have been hard work at times. Ken... yep hard work too just different angles.
Becky Rock
Becky Rock Gatchamaniac posted 29 May 2017 18:14
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You nailed it on he head, RB. That's boys all right. I love how you used them speaking their own languages yet they seemed to understand a little of what they were telling each other.
Redbird
Redbird Gatchamaniac posted 30 May 2017 15:27 (edited 30 May 2017 15:28)
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GGO: While Nambu knows little of raising kids, I know even less! Unless it's 4 legged furry kids, with tails. LOL Ebony: I could just see Joe being a brat. I always imagined him being a little hellion on BC Island. Always thought his parents were never around, preoccupied with Galactor, until they defected. Little Joe left to his own devices, could be a very bad thing (probably also very humorous!) Tongue Becky: Thanks! That was one of the things I was shooting for--that even though they didn't speak the same language, there was something that they both understood about one another, on some level--even though they didn't realize it,etc. I think in real life, this does happen with people. Sometimes you just "click" with another person.
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