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Last post by Redbird 30 May 2017 15:27
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It was a lot of fun to write-- Ken and Joe being bratty kids!
Another nice little slice of life. It is fun to write the characters as kids, and I find your portrayal of Nambu incredibly comforting in that you are able to describe an individual with even less of a clue about small children than me. (I'd quite happily take the Jesuits at their word when they say, "Give me the child until he is seven and I will show you the man," because that means they'd have to deal with all the potty training and everything.)
PS: When I read the title of this fic, Queen's Bicycle Song immediately began playing in my head.
Ebonyswanne
Gatchamaniac
posted 29 May 2017 16:19
The fight over the bike. So it begins! Lol. Such a kid thing to do. I could imagine Joe as a kid being a bully if left unchecked. He would have been hard work at times.
Ken... yep hard work too just different angles.
Becky Rock
Gatchamaniac
posted 29 May 2017 18:14
You nailed it on he head, RB. That's boys all right. I love how you used them speaking their own languages yet they seemed to understand a little of what they were telling each other.
GGO: While Nambu knows little of raising kids, I know even less! Unless it's 4 legged furry kids, with tails. LOL
Ebony: I could just see Joe being a brat. I always imagined him being a little hellion on BC Island. Always thought his parents were never around, preoccupied with Galactor, until they defected. Little Joe left to his own devices, could be a very bad thing (probably also very humorous!)
Becky: Thanks! That was one of the things I was shooting for--that even though they didn't speak the same language, there was something that they both understood about one another, on some level--even though they didn't realize it,etc. I think in real life, this does happen with people. Sometimes you just "click" with another person.
Becky: Thanks! That was one of the things I was shooting for--that even though they didn't speak the same language, there was something that they both understood about one another, on some level--even though they didn't realize it,etc. I think in real life, this does happen with people. Sometimes you just "click" with another person.
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It's kinda adorable.