For Springie: Love in an Elavator

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Transmute Jun Queen of the Bird Missiles posted 29 Dec 2016 12:19
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This was great! I was getting annoyed at first, when it kept switching back and forth, because it felt too contrived and unbelievable. But then the author found a reasonable explanation at the end for everything, and it worked! What I really want though is to see this fic from Ken's and Joe's POVs. Ken feeling all protective of Jun, and then indignant when he realizes that Joe is being possessive as well. And Joe feeling frustrated that Ken just assumes that Jun's only feelings are for him, and thrilled when he realizes that that's not true....
lborgia88
lborgia88 Gatchamaniac posted 29 Dec 2016 18:49
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I really enjoyed this -in so many ways, the ultimate impossible decision, Ken or Joe. I was thinking that the back and forth meant that none of it was really happening, but wasn't sure whether it was dreams, hallucinations, or insanity. Hey, though maybe *none* of it is real, and Jun lost her mind after a mission where both Ken and Joe were dying and she could only save one of them, and now she's retreated into a delusional state where she never has to choose...
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Springie Her Royal Fluffiness...Swan of Swans... posted 29 Dec 2016 21:03 (edited 29 Dec 2016 21:06)
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Oh, how I LOVE, LOVE, LOVE "Love in an Elevator!" I was a bit confused at the switch of scenes at first... but as TJ said, it all made sense! What an interesting twist! She has a very difficult decision ahead of her! It seems her brush with death knocked some sense into both of the guys! *swoon* This is one of my new favorite fics! Thank you!!!
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adrianag Boardie posted 30 Dec 2016 01:26
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Hola! What a story!!!! I love it! Finally Joe has a real role play in Jun's affections. Confusing at the beginning but like the girls said before, it truly made sense at the end. Decisions, decisions.....even when Joe is my favorite number one, Ken is not far behind. Especially the way is described here: so lovely and caring! I truly enjoy it and congrats to the author!!!! (I already have a clue who wrote it jeje) Luvu 5 Condor
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Daniella T GatchaFreak posted 31 Dec 2016 08:28
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One of the reasons I love the Christmas Gift Exchange is the many different styles and storylines that we get to read, all in one go. This was definitely one of the most intriguing ones -- had no idea where it was going for a while, and definitely worth keeping up with the comings and goings -- what a ride (pun intended)!
ChrisW
ChrisW Gatchamaniac posted 9 Jan 2017 15:13
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Maybe she doesn't have to choose at all. Wink Both guys seem pretty comfortable with her being interested in both of them!
Katblu42
Katblu42 Forum God posted 10 Jan 2017 02:38
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Originally posted by ChrisW Maybe she doesn't have to choose at all. Wink Both guys seem pretty comfortable with her being interested in both of them!
That's what I thought too Chris! I loved the story.
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