Bradbury's Jar 230

19 Replies 170 Views 0 Likes 7 Participants Last post by ChrisW 12 Jun 2016 14:43
ElectricWhite
ElectricWhite Gatchamaniac posted 21 May 2016 20:53
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blablabla You know how it is. I start off with some lame attempt at humor, give the prompt, and then end with some pathetic appeal to get some responses. I mean, really! You could easily use the most general form of all Generalizations to describe this!
Daniella T
Daniella T GatchaFreak posted 22 May 2016 10:00
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I don't want to resort to generalisations, EW, but I really enjoy the introductions to the weekly prompts!
ElectricWhite
ElectricWhite Gatchamaniac posted 22 May 2016 10:50
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In general, DT, I appreciate that type of comment! Wink
Transmute Jun
Transmute Jun Queen of the Bird Missiles posted 24 May 2016 06:10
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Generalizations... wasn't that a Star Trek movie? Grin
Daniella T
Daniella T GatchaFreak posted 24 May 2016 09:03
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//Jason was ogling the blond girl as she was ordering drinks at the bar. He slowly, surreptitiously made his way closer to her. Boy, was she gorgeous. Tall, leggy, mini-skirted, tube-topped and all the rest. He squeezed his was next to her, back turned as he was trying to find an opening to speak to her while she was busy regaling her two girlfriends with tales of her escapades the previous night, along with her very strong views about the boys she had met. "I'm never, ever going back to that bar near the racetrack, ever again! I don't want to see any of those boorish drivers. No more talk about cars, yak yak yak about engines, yak yak yak about their scores. They are strictly off my list from now on!" Jason turned, a big grin on his face. "Well, sweetheart, let's not resort to generalisations about racetrack drivers now, shall we?"//
ChrisW
ChrisW Gatchamaniac posted 24 May 2016 12:13
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DT: LOL
RIgirl
RIgirl Gatchamaniac posted 28 May 2016 18:55
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Daniella: LOL! Hopefully, Jason's luck with girls will improve!
RIgirl
RIgirl Gatchamaniac posted 28 May 2016 18:58
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ChrisW
ChrisW Gatchamaniac posted 28 May 2016 19:45
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RIgirl: I wouldn't be surprised if when Jun goes home she slips a candy bar into his pocket or something. Smile
RIgirl
RIgirl Gatchamaniac posted 29 May 2016 18:01
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LOL, Chris! Maybe a Three Musketeers *snerk* then he could share with Masaki and Oniishi! pound
ChrisW
ChrisW Gatchamaniac posted 29 May 2016 20:56
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LOL too perfect!
KT1972
KT1972 Gatchamaniac posted 3 Jun 2016 09:59
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ChrisW
ChrisW Gatchamaniac posted 3 Jun 2016 10:22
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KT: At least she knows where she stands, and now the others do too. Smile
RIgirl
RIgirl Gatchamaniac posted 5 Jun 2016 07:04
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KT: Aww, how sweet! A protective Condor!
ElectricWhite
ElectricWhite Gatchamaniac posted 11 Jun 2016 21:42
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ElectricWhite
ElectricWhite Gatchamaniac posted 11 Jun 2016 21:43
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"And if he wasn't damaged," Princess joined in, "he might become traumatized when he finds out that the shuttle from Quanto-Tobor Labs was hijacked and then crashed on Shui." "He was whining a lot about having to leave Center Neptune to get his regular overhaul..." Jason mentioned. "Alright." Mark sighed, "Princess, contact Post Auerbach." ********** "It's a shame you weren't able to uncrate me when the transport was hijacked, Keyop." 7-Zark-7 said to the Swallow, "I would have gladly shown that villain a thing or two!" He then proceeded to demonstrate his form of martial arts. The rest of G-Force stood in the corridor just outside Post Auerbach's sick bay with Dr. MarĂ­a Azeriaren, who specialized in Zeruda society. "The physicians say that your friend has a form of epilepsy, very much like a human being." she said. "Can he be treated like a human epilepsy patient?" Princess asked. "They believe so." Dr. Azeriaren replied, "A simple procedure should set him right." "Great!" Mark cried, "As soon as he's recovered from the procedure, we can drop him off where Keyop found him, and he can head on home." "Uh, I'm afraid that isn't as simple as you think, Commander." "And what does that mean?" Jason chimed in. "Since he was out in the open during the most dangerous time of day, and since he was having seizures, I believe he was banished from his family group." Dr. Azeriaren answered. The response was several small gasps. "This isn't unique to the Zeruda," the scientist gently countered, "Earthling considered people with seizure disorders to be demon-possessed for centuries." "But where does that leave our guy in there?" Tiny asked, jerking his thumb toward the sick bay, "We can't just dump him out there to die, especially since he saved Keyop's life!" "We can't just take him back to Earth with us, either." Mark added, "He might not be able to adjust." "Well, all of the scientists here discussed this. He can stay here -- if he will stay -- and maybe Qabil's group will adopt him." "Good." Mark replied, "We need to get moving. Jason, you and Princess see to peeling Zark away from his Zark-fu demonstration so Keyop will have a chance to say goodbye to his friend..."
Redbird
Redbird Gatchamaniac posted 12 Jun 2016 08:38
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DT: So Jason's gonna set her straight right? Wink1 KT: Very sweet KT! Love the descriptions of the taloned princesses waiting to get Joe in their clutches! Tongue RiGirl: Ugh the fuss over the food. I was waiting for Jun to turn to RI and say "Yes, Dad" LOL. EW: Poor Quiver being abandoned by his family. But I'm glad to see that there's hope for him Smile
RIgirl
RIgirl Gatchamaniac posted 12 Jun 2016 12:46 (edited 12 Jun 2016 12:47)
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EW: Aww, poor Quiver! But he gained a bunch of new friends and now has help - yay! Hmm, everyone not really eager to unpack Zark .. can't imagine why ... although I am surprised that they unpacked him at all! ("What? No, Chief, really. He was completely destroyed in the crash ... honest ....") Zark-fu ... pound
ElectricWhite
ElectricWhite Gatchamaniac posted 12 Jun 2016 13:09
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Originally posted by RIgirl Hmm, everyone not really eager to unpack Zark .. can't imagine why ... although I am surprised that they unpacked him at all! ("What? No, Chief, really. He was completely destroyed in the crash ... honest ....")
That was the main reason this response took so long -- each time I let Zark out of the box, the story would crash! (A couple of times he even triggered seizures in Quiver!)
ChrisW
ChrisW Gatchamaniac posted 12 Jun 2016 14:43
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EW: Well all that hard work paid off. The Zark part totally worked, LOL.
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