Light of the World

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Redbird
Redbird Gatchamaniac posted 26 Jan 2016 17:37 (edited 27 Jan 2016 14:59)
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Dunno where this one came from. All mistakes are my own. Hope you enjoy! ******************************** Light of the World The hot sun beat down upon them, made hotter by the exposed roof they were currently trapped upon. He could hear the screams of the populace at the edge of his hearing, as if he were in a dream. The terrifying shrieks, gradually being drowned out by the explosions that rocked the city. Dust and debris clogged the air, momentarily blocking out the sun. Thick, dark smoke rising in long plumes, reminiscent of skeletal fingers. The city leaders had ordered an evacuation, but the order came too late. There hadn't been enough time. No, he thought grimly. There never was enough time. It was Saturday. The city was teeming with people enjoying the bright sunshine and outdoor shopping. There was a free afternoon concert in the park, people wading in the fountain in the middle of it to cool off. Kids on bicycles and ice cream vendors. Sidewalk cafes with wrought iron tables, colorful umbrellas, and frou-frou named drinks. A typical, idyllic weekend-- before everything went to hell. The five of them had been scattered about, enjoying some well earned time off. But the two of them were together, close to where the attack had started, and currently fighting to get to specified coordinates. Jinpei and Ryu were already aboard the God Phoenix; Jun was on the way. That left only the two of them. When the warning sirens had blared, the citizens panicked, there came shouts from the crowd, calling for them. Calling for Gatchaman. Begging for help as the city crumbled and burned. Gatchaman would come. As he always did. At times he wondered just how many propaganda pieces had been written about them. How many times had their doubles been paraded before the media? He had lost count years ago. But the masses ate it up. The accolades, the "in-depth" reports full of false information. Stories about their private lives, which were so ludicriously wrong, it made them all cringe. They never saw the struggles, the blood and anguish. The sacrifice. The pain. They saw a shining image, a paragon. Like the perfect image of the man before him, striking an unconsciously majestic pose. Perched high above the city, wings pulled back by the breeze, bird rang clenched in his fist. A symbol of justice and freedom, for everyone, everywhere. It was so easy for them to believe ; because they needed something to believe in. He understood, because sometimes....he believed too. Another blast echoed in the distance. He glanced up and glimpsed eyes as blue as the sky itself, before gossamer strands of sunlight broke through the clouds, reflecting off the tinted crystal visor, briefly obscuring his vision. And he watched as the figure silently flashed a hand signal at him, then gracefully launched off the rooftop and into the air, wings billowing out, carrying him upward. Like a prayer whispered fervently to the Gods. Hope buoyed on white wings. With a growl low in his throat, and two shuriken clenched between his teeth, he took off after the Eagle, spiraling down through the smoke, before being lifted skyward. While Ken lived they still had hope. And live he would. He would make damned sure of it.
ChrisW
ChrisW Gatchamaniac posted 26 Jan 2016 20:08
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Wow ... protective, admiring brother or crush? Either way, powerful. Smile
mylari
mylari Gatchamaniac posted 26 Jan 2016 21:04
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nice Smile Joe's always got so much more going on under the surface than it seems...
KT1972
KT1972 Gatchamaniac posted 27 Jan 2016 00:03
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Wow, great piece Redbird. Never mind wondering where, we're just glad it came from somewhere and you shared it with us. Thank you. Smile
Springie
Springie Her Royal Fluffiness...Swan of Swans... posted 27 Jan 2016 07:16
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Very nice, Redbird! I love the imagery you used and it was such a great peek into Joe's mind!
Daniella T
Daniella T GatchaFreak posted 27 Jan 2016 07:59
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Very interesting -- and different -- portrait of Joe, I really enjoyed it.
Redbird
Redbird Gatchamaniac posted 27 Jan 2016 14:59
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Thanks for reading and commenting everyone! Smile (And good to see you here DT!) Thumbsup
Becky Rock
Becky Rock Gatchamaniac posted 27 Jan 2016 16:16
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A wonderful short piece, RB, with a lot of imagery. That would be a hard thing to face all the time.
Redbird
Redbird Gatchamaniac posted 29 Jan 2016 17:20
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Thanks, Becky. Glad you liked it! Smile
E.D. Darling
E.D. Darling Boardie posted 1 Mar 2016 17:11
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Evocative, lovely work! The tension is palpable!
Redbird
Redbird Gatchamaniac posted 3 Mar 2016 04:20
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Thanks E.D. Happy you enjoyed it! Smile
RIgirl
RIgirl Gatchamaniac posted 6 Mar 2016 07:52
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Very evocative of mood and place, Redbird -- nice job!
Redbird
Redbird Gatchamaniac posted 30 Mar 2016 14:59
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Thank you for reading it, RiGirl! Smile
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