Bradbury's Jar 212

15 Replies 140 Views 0 Likes 8 Participants Last post by KT1972 2 Feb 2016 23:47
ElectricWhite
ElectricWhite Gatchamaniac posted 16 Jan 2016 20:53 (edited 16 Jan 2016 20:54)
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RIgirl
RIgirl Gatchamaniac posted 17 Jan 2016 11:49 (edited 17 Jan 2016 11:52)
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Redbird
Redbird Gatchamaniac posted 17 Jan 2016 12:34
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Originally posted by RIgirl She could see Joe being like that as a child, more interested in anything with wheels and an engine than even food itself.  Had he been like that? 
She could see Joe being like that as a child, more interested in anything with wheels and an engine than even food itself.
I thought that too, while reading it. Smile Interesting (and very poignant) reflections on Jun's part. Keep going! Smile
ChrisW
ChrisW Gatchamaniac posted 17 Jan 2016 12:55
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I like this introspection, how odd watching such ordinary scenes must be for a girl like Jun. Poor RI isn't gonna know what hit him now that Madge knows he's a widower, LOL.
mylari
mylari Gatchamaniac posted 18 Jan 2016 22:05 (edited 18 Jan 2016 22:07)
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KT1972
KT1972 Gatchamaniac posted 19 Jan 2016 00:02
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Awws, that is sweet, Mylari Smile Animeluv
Springie
Springie Her Royal Fluffiness...Swan of Swans... posted 19 Jan 2016 07:02
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RIgirl- you really got into Jun's mind in this one...we take so much for granted. Interesting seeing this scene from her perspective! Mylari- So sweet! I'm glad Ken got up the courage to show her what she means to him!
Transmute Jun
Transmute Jun Queen of the Bird Missiles posted 19 Jan 2016 10:07
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This is very sweet, Mylari! Perfect! FWIW, this is the kind of thing the Bradbury's Jars were designed for. someone decided to use them to continue a weekly story, and that idea caught on, but the drabble idea was the original intention. Regardless, anything that gets us writing is welcome, right?
ChrisW
ChrisW Gatchamaniac posted 19 Jan 2016 12:20
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Aaaaaaw! I like the unheard line, hehe. Very sweet, Mylari. Smile
Redbird
Redbird Gatchamaniac posted 21 Jan 2016 17:47
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So sweet, Mylari! I know you usually write BOTP, but this came out very well. Smile
mylari
mylari Gatchamaniac posted 21 Jan 2016 20:58
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Originally posted by KT1972 Awws, that is sweet, Mylari Smile Animeluv
Originally posted by Springie Mylari- So sweet! I'm glad Ken got up the courage to show her what she means to him!
Originally posted by Transmute Jun This is very sweet, Mylari! Perfect!
Originally posted by ChrisW Aaaaaaw! I like the unheard line, hehe. Very sweet, Mylari. Smile
Originally posted by Redbird So sweet, Mylari! I know you usually write BOTP, but this came out very well. Smile
I'm sensing a theme... Wink3 Wink1 Glad you all enjoyed it!
KT1972
KT1972 Gatchamaniac posted 21 Jan 2016 21:01
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how could we not, Mylari? It's such a SWEET story! Tongue
ElectricWhite
ElectricWhite Gatchamaniac posted 22 Jan 2016 14:33
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Heck, my blood sugar level went up when I read it!
KT1972
KT1972 Gatchamaniac posted 2 Feb 2016 11:54
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ChrisW
ChrisW Gatchamaniac posted 2 Feb 2016 16:21
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KT: Helpful, or too conveniently helpful? Hmm. Smile
KT1972
KT1972 Gatchamaniac posted 2 Feb 2016 23:47
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Well, she is his Personal Assistant, just how personal does that go?
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