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Poor Jason yet again. he just can't catch a break! a great rewrite. I hope Daniella enjoys reading it as much as I have

Great rewrite! It gives a nice look into Lucy's and Jason's relationship. I always thought it was funny that Lucy seemed jealous of Princess from just a little peek during the checkpoint.

Great story! I like the way some aspects from Jason are explained. Sadly he always was emotionally in the losing end I'm glad to read another story from him!

An interesting look behind the curtain for this episode.

I bet they would have made a great match, with the intensity she's capable of (a bit dialed down of course from cyborgness!)

Originally posted by Transmute Jun An interesting look behind the curtain for this episode.

I agree!

I agree - this was a great peek inside Jason's head during the episode! Nice work

Thank you thank you to my Secret Santa! This is one my favourite eps ever -- both because of Jason and because I ve been on safari, and you did a great job with Jason's feelings and emotions! I especially liked the part where he explains that he doesn't like feeling helpless, and this explains his actions. These are just a few comments after a quick read -- I m travelling, with limited access to the internet. More to follow!

Originally posted by Daniella T Thank you thank you to my Secret Santa! This is one my favourite eps ever -- both because of Jason and because I ve been on safari, and you did a great job with Jason's feelings and emotions! I especially liked the part where he explains that he doesn't like feeling helpless, and this explains his actions. These are just a few comments after a quick read -- I m travelling, with limited access to the internet. More to follow!

I guess it's time to 'fess up. I wrote this and Kritter beta'd it for me. Thank you, Danielle. I'm so glad that you liked this. I was happy to have "episode rewrite" as one of the prompts you gave me because I've wanted to do one for awhile now. I rewrote this particular episode to fit into an alternate universe that mostly exists as works-in-progress and in my head.

Good job msann! I actually thought Amethyst wrote this one.

MsAnn, you certainly have a talent for episode re-writes!

Excellent, msann, excellent!

Great writing, msann! I agree...episode rewrite was a great fit for you!!

Thank you MsAnn! I love all your ep rewrites

Great job, Ann. DT, you're so lucky! This episode always confused me regarding the team's ages. If Jason raced with Lucy before, just how old had he been? The Gatchaman episode had Joe telling Lucy 5 years had been long time. So Joe was racing at 13?

I've been watching NASCAR off and on for background noise at times and there do seem to be racing leagues that start that young, or younger.

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Thank you all for the comments. I really had fun writing this.

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