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Last post by Shiratori 7 Jan 2016 17:38
This is a really nice story.....one full of trust and hope in others!
Really liked it!
There's some great one-liners in here. 
This one could have come right out of an episode! Well done!
This one could have come right out of an episode! Well done!
Lovely story. I'm pleased Jinpei and Joe found a common interest in the Harry Potter books
Transmute Jun
Queen of the Bird Missiles
posted 21 Dec 2015 13:14
I can completely understand Jinpei wanting to escape his reality and be a kid, enjoying the rich HP world. But it's also great to see him realizing that the real world can be just as wonderful.
Loved reading about Jinpei's newfound love for reading! And I agree with CW--it does sound like it could be the basis for an episode! 
This was a really fun one! Trust Jinpei to find a way to relate to and put the children at ease. And trust him to see the magic that exists in everyday life.
So cute- I love that Jinpei is an HP fan, too! I agree...this would be great as an episode!
Nice! I like the theme that there is magic in the world, even if we don't always see it that way.
I confess I had to cheat to understand the title...
oooh, good work LB!
(I wish I'd thought of that)
Transmute Jun
Queen of the Bird Missiles
posted 1 Jan 2016 17:43
Props to you for figuring that out!
DaniellaT, thank you for writing this story for me. I enjoyed the way Jinpei got everyone to calm down by pretending to be a wizard, and the way you remembered the little girl in the end.
The part with Joe and Jinpei being badasses was also awesome. 
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