Somebody thought it would be a good idea for us to come up with a backstory for the latest masterpiece by Springie: Let's see if this was a good idea! =========== The planetoid Fieron was one of the galaxy's most popular tourist attractions. 95% of its surface was lush forest that exploded in the most brilliant colors whenever the tiny sphere entered its autumn cycle. And this year was no different. That is, until Spectra decided to hold Fieron and everyone on it hostage, demanding an unconditionl surrender as ransom. It took some effort, but G-Force was able to evacuate the planetoid before defeating Spectra. Unfortunately, Zoltar and his gang of goons got away. leaving G-Force to face a disaster. Mark stood on top of Fieron's highest hill, watching the fires below burn brighter than the sun. He turned to face Princess and stopped -- the reflection of the flames on her visor...the way her skin had a slight flush from the heat...the way the only surviving tree seemed to shower her with love by dropping its leaves on her -- he had actually forgotten to breathe. "Princess?" he finally gasped. "Yes, Mark?" she answered, her voice dripping with anticipation. "If the chief asks, Zoltar started the fire." "What?" "He doesn't need to know that we transformed to the Firey Phoenix too close to the trees, does he?" ========== Okay, who's next?

Hola! Siiiiii.......yesssss......that's a great idea ElectricWhite! Thank you! Let's see the response......you started it great!!

ROFL! EW, I knew you'd put your special spin on this...I cannot look at this without thinking of the Firey Phoenix now! I would love to hear anyone else's interpretations! They do say that a picture is worth a thousand words...

Mark, Mark, Mark, this isn't gonna go well for you ...

Thank you, ladies! It had been a while since I let my silly side show, so I was glad when the opportunity presented itself.

EW, that is just too funny! Brilliant!

Hola, I want to try.....I have been reading so many stories in English that maybe I should take the challenge and give it a try. This would be my first contribution, please don't be severe with me. I'm an experience writer in Spanish not in English......any comment will be welcome. Thanks!

Hola, Here is my first contribution ever.......let's begin! "So, are you actually saying that we should blame Zoltar for this?" was her prompt response at what it seemed a cover up. "Well, not exactly...." his response was vague. Indeed, he was more nervous at the fact that she looked to ethereal against the reflection of the flames in the distant, than her comment. Whatever was the cause, Mark wasn't sure about himself now. Maybe it was the pressure he felt because of the consequences of his decisions earlier on, or maybe there was something about this place that just made him feel a bit estrange. One thing was certain, all the he wanted to do at that moment was to tell her the feelings he had been keeping for so long. Little both know that the tree in front of them was a especial one. It only survived because of its peculiar properties........

fantastic, Adriana! I love that you made him want to confess his feelings! And I want to know what is special about that tree!

adrianag: You might have just saved Mark's life. Well done!

EW: adrianag: That was a great first prompt response! I've got something floating around in my head for this one, but not sure it's totally taken form yet.....

adrianag -- First, I admire the courage you showed by writing your first English piece! It can be difficult enough to write in the language you have known your entire life, let alone write in a language as tricky as English. Second, you did an excellent job of saying so much while using a small number of words! I can tell Mark and Princess have a complicated relationship. Finally, what is the deal about that tree? I'm dying to know, too!

Originally posted by Springie fantastic, Adriana! I love that you made him want to confess his feelings! And I want to know what is special about that tree!

Hola! Coming up.....you really inspired us with your art! Thank you!

Originally posted by ChrisW adrianag: You might have just saved Mark's life. Well done!

Hola Chris, I think so but there is so much more to come....to soon to say it!

Originally posted by Redbird EW: adrianag: That was a great first prompt response! I've got something floating around in my head for this one, but not sure it's totally taken form yet.....

Hola! Thank you! Trying as I'm not used to write in English.....work on your idea and let us know!

Originally posted by ElectricWhite adrianag -- First, I admire the courage you showed by writing your first English piece! It can be difficult enough to write in the language you have known your entire life, let alone write in a language as tricky as English. Second, you did an excellent job of saying so much while using a small number of words! I can tell Mark and Princess have a complicated relationship. Finally, what is the deal about that tree? I'm dying to know, too!

Hola my dear! Thank you so so much. Believe when I say that it's not easy for me. I'm so used to write in Spanish that this afternoon it took me a couple of hours to just think and write this small part. I'm so happy you all liked it and it will be the first of many contributions, I hope. In this extended part of the story, you will know more about the tree.....something it came to mind looking at it.

Hola! This is the continuation of my contribution. I included the first part as I realized some mistakes. Please help me to improve, all comments will be welcome! Enjoy it! "So, are you actually saying that we should blame Zoltar for this?" was her prompt response in disbelieve at what it seemed to be a cover up. "Well, not exactly....." his words were vague indeed as he was more nervous to the fact that she looked so ethereal against the reflection of the flames in the distance, rather than her comment. Whatever the cause was, Mark wasn't sure about himself now. Maybe it was the pressure he was feeling because of the consequences of his decisions earlier on, or maybe there was something about the place they were in. Regardless the cause, something made him feel a bit strange as he was not acting as usual. One thing was certain, all that he wanted to do at that moment was to tell her about the feelings he had been keeping for her for so long. Little both knew, was the fact that tree in front of them was a especial one. It had only survived the inferno surrounding it because of its peculiar and special properties. Approaching with certain reserve but with his intense gaze fixed on her, the distance between the pair was reduce. It was then when he placed firmly his hand on her shoulder. At this moment, several leaves from the tree started to fall gently around the couple and some of them brushed past her wings. She was looking at him with curiosity, expecting something totally different from what he intended to say, not knowing his true intentions, ".....Princess, I think it's time for me to talk to you about something that I have kept deep inside me and that for some reason I can't longer wait. I must confess that I...." A voice came from behind, interrupting their private moment, "what's going on here?" both of them turned to look at the arrival of their friend "why both of you are not helping with the rescue?We are desperately trying to evacuate the few citizens living in this remote area and let me tell you that we are hands-full" his voice sounded with a bit of sarcasm. All of the sudden after standing there for a moment, Jason feelings changed as he realized something else. He was also hypnotized by the image of Princess lighted up by the flames and a strong feeling inside of him voiced out. So, as he also wanted to approach and talk to her about something deep inside him, he realized that his commander was on his way. Without warning, the Condor felt infinite rage and resentment burning inside him and with one rapid movement he moved away Mark's hand from her. "Now I see" he said with anger "you are taking advantage here because you are in charge while the rest of us are trying to fix over your wrong decisions. I told you that it was dangerous to use the Firebird technique in such a dense forest, but as always you never listen what others have to say". Almost pushed aside by his second, the Eagle was so fury that his reaction was to retaliate with harsh words "I don't have to explain myself to you or anyone else for the matter. In fact as all of you were aware, this was the only solution we could possibly had done to save this planet. Admit it Jason, the only reason you are saying that it's just because you can't take orders, your ego can't handle being number two" A fist went directly to Mark's face as a response to this statement, "and yours" the Condor was panting for the intense of his next statement "it's that you are so full of yourself. Being the team commander has clouded your mind, the number one is not worthy of a man who can't even confess his inner feelings. Like just now, you were just playing with her, she...." he said pointed at the Swan "she has been waiting for you to make up your mind for so long, sometimes even crying for your indifference, always trying to hide it from anyone. Even so, I'm fully aware of this because I've seen her hiding the sorrow not knowing that I always noticed. I'm sick and tired of your stupid games and the way you treat her, I'm going to proved not only her but everyone else that you are not longer fit to be our leader" then both of them prepared themselves for a collision course. The only witness to this confrontation was just standing there, clueless of what was really going on but she didn't dare to do anything about it. Both men were just hurting each other with their hurtful arguments and now they would continue to do so with their strength. Surprisingly, she all she could do is to stand and watch them tearing themselves apart. And the real cause of all this, was right in front of them. The mountain legends talked about the existence of a magical tree, one that could bring out the deepest and most kept secrets out of anyone looking at it. Strangely, only the one who is touched by its leaves would be immune to its spell but eventually, she would also be affected in another bizarre way.....

I have a huge grin on my face! I get so excited when a picture of mine inspires your wonderful writing! Thank you for spending so much time and effort on this! And now Jason is being affected by the tree! It reminds me of Wonder Woman's lasso- the truth will come out! I am dying to know how it affects Jun!

You know, as I was reading it, I was thinking that it was just a little too much 'Gatchaman' in character for your BOTP setting... and then you explained it all beautifully with the tree! I love how you brought Jason into this... and I'm curious to see what Princess feels in her heart.

Needed to take a break at work today and this just kind of popped into my head... The flames of the bonfire flick at the darkening evening sky, roaring as the logs fueling it crack and break apart while being consumed. Around the fiery spectacle, crowds have begun to gather, drawn by the cheery glow. Summer was ending, fall taking hold and bringing with it a chill crispness to the air. Watching from a distance, a group of five figures in winged suits take in the sight, smiles tugging at their lips. This was the result of their doing; their protection today meant that instead of a town in flames, the local youth could celebrate the changing seasons on the sandy beach. Longing to join the frivolity, they know that such is not their lot in life. One by one, the teammates take a last look at the festivities, turn slowly, and melt like shadows into the trees lining the secluded cove. Before long, only two are left; still standing, still watching, still yearning to shed their uniforms and blend into the crowd. "C'mon, Princess, we should get going before someone sees us." His voice is soft, trying not to break the tranquility of the moment. She moves slowly, turning her body toward him, her face still basking in the glow of the firelight. After a long moment, she breathes deeply and brings her head around to find him watching her intently. His face a jumble of emotions that even she can't completely untangle. Sadness, longing, hope, desire, regret; they are all there along with something else that she can't quite place, fear maybe? She couldn't be sure, fear was not something she'd ever seen from her commander. She opens her mouth to respond, to acknowledge him, but a knot forms in her throat and she knows speech will prove impossible. Nodding slowly, she breaks eye contact, steels herself for the trek back to their warship, the trip back to base, debriefing, waiting for the next attack. Mark watches as Princess lowers her gaze to his boots and can feel the resignation flowing from her in palpable waves. Maybe, just this once, he can let down his guard for a brief moment, pretend that they were not who they were, imagine that they were merely two teenagers at a bonfire. Before he can change his mind or she can turn away, he places a hand on her shoulder. Raising her head, Princess risks meeting his gaze once more. "Mark?" He doesn't answer, instead he looks all around them, pushing the limits of his cerebonics to make sure they are unobserved. Returning his focus to her, his right hand still on her shoulder, his left arm sweeps in a wide arc, the command "Trans-mute" uttered quietly. Lights swirl around them, lost in the glimmering reflections of the fire and suddenly, they stand facing one another without helmets and visors between them. Princess opens her mouth, a question poised on her tongue, but he shakes his head and holds a finger to her lips. "No words, Princess. They will have to wait until the war is over. This will just have to be a moment outside of time." As his words fade, he leans down, eyes closing, hand sliding around to cup her head, fingers tangling in her hair, lips brushing hers ever so gently. The moment is like magic, timeless and instantaneous at once. And then, just as quickly as it started, it's over. He is standing rigidly before her once more, his hand replaced on her shoulder as he transforms them back into the winged warriors of G-Force. "We need to go now before Jason sends the hounds to find us." A mischievous twinkle glints in his eye as he turns to head back to their ship and their duty. She reaches up, caressing her lips in the spot that his had touched and smiles. They begin walking away from the beach, through the trees and away from their private moment, promises bright in the air around them like the falling leaves. Swept up in the possibilities before her, it takes her three strides to realize that he is still holding her hand. The realization bringing a smile to her face that puts the bonfire to shame.

OMG! Mylari that was gorgeous! I loved the way you had them change into civvies to avoid the masks. I am swooning here...thank you for sharing that lovely little vignette with us!

adrianag: Uh oh, that tree is true mischief! Poor Tiny and Keyop, off by themselves trying to save lives while these three are caught up in their drama!

I love how these two stories are so opposite in their moods. mylari: Such a sweet moment. I love the imagery of the leaves falling like promises!

Oh, adrianag, I was grinning the whole time I read your contribution! I like the way you are bringing the personality conflict between Jason and Mark to the surface. I wonder how this will work out... There is one small part, though, that you might want to change.* It's where Mark says to Jason:

Originally posted by adrianag your ego cannot longer hold number two.

Some people might think Mark was saying, "su ego tiene diarrea." (Just a little American slang can cause so much trouble!) Saying something like, "your ego can't handle being number two" might work better. *I point this out in case you post your contribution where the people don't know that you just started writing in English. Also, there are a lot of people who think like a boy who is 13 years old. However, the people on this site understood what you meant. ========== mylari -- *sigh!* How romantic! If only we could have seen something like this on an actual episode....

Originally posted by ChrisW adrianag: Uh oh, that tree is true mischief! Poor Tiny and Keyop, off by themselves trying to save lives while these three are caught up in their drama!

Hola ChrisW, Yes, pity them......all by themselves jeje Thanks for commenting!

Originally posted by ElectricWhite Oh, adrianag, I was grinning the whole time I read your contribution! I like the way you are bringing the personality conflict between Jason and Mark to the surface. I wonder how this will work out... There is one small part, though, that you might want to change.* It's where Mark says to Jason:

Originally posted by adrianag your ego cannot longer hold number two.

Some people might think Mark was saying, "su ego tiene diarrea." (Just a little American slang can cause so much trouble!) Saying something like, "your ego can't handle being number two" might work better.

My dear ElectricWhite, Jajajajajaja......you really made laugh! It was so so funny the way you translated it into Spanish! I guess it's how it sounded in English. Thank you so much for pointing out that, it's already edited. As I said, I'm not afraid to try but as any beginner I want to do it right and any help to improve is appreciated! Muchas gracias! Well, those two have a lot of issues and even as they might sound like Gatchaman rather than BOTP, I want to explore a bit this situation. Have a great day and I hope you are enjoying the weekend!

Originally posted by Transmute Jun You know, as I was reading it, I was thinking that it was just a little too much 'Gatchaman' in character for your BOTP setting... and then you explained it all beautifully with the tree! I love how you brought Jason into this... and I'm curious to see what Princess feels in her heart.

Hola TJ! Yes, you are absolutely right. I guess I like Gatchaman so much that I was writing without paying much attention to BOTP. But I have some explanation in the next part.....the tree has something to do with it! Thank you for commenting!

Hola Mylari, Like the others said already......it's so romantic!!! You really described it in detail for us to imagine the emotions, the surroundings and the feelings trapped inside both of them.....ahhhhh

Thanks everyone! Glad you enjoyed my take on the picture. Looking forward to reading more of the story that Adrianag is telling

Hola everyone, Here is the second part......I included the first one as I spotted some errors. Please enjoy it! "So, are you actually saying that we should blame Zoltar for this?" was her prompt response in disbelieve at what it seemed to be a cover up. "Well, not exactly....." his words were indeed indeed as he was more nervous to the fact that she looked so ethereal against the reflection of the flames in the distance, rather than her actual comment. Whatever the cause was, Mark wasn't sure about himself now. Maybe it was the pressure he was feeling because of the consequences of his decisions earlier on, or maybe there was something about the place they were in. Regardless the cause, something made him feel a bit strange as he was not acting as usual. One thing was certain, all that he wanted to do at that moment was to tell her about the feelings he had been keeping for her for so long. Little both knew, was the fact the that tree in front of them was a special one. It had only survived the inferno surrounding it because of its peculiar and special properties. Approaching with certain reserve but with his intense gaze fixed on her, the distance between the pair was reduced. It was then when he placed firmly his hand on her shoulder. At this moment, several leaves from the tree started to fall gently around the couple and some of them brushed past her wings. She was looking at him with curiosity, expecting something totally different from what he intended to say, not knowing his true intentions, ".....Princess, I think it's time for me to talk to you about something that I have kept deep inside me and that for some reason I can't longer bear. I must confess that I...." A voice came from behind, interrupting their private moment, "what's going on here?" both of them turned to look at the arrival of their friend "why both of you are not helping with the rescue?We are desperately trying to evacuate the few citizens living in this remote area and let me tell you that we are hands-full" his voice sounded with a bit of sarcasm. All of the sudden after standing there for a moment, Jason's feelings changed as he realized something else. He was also hypnotized by the image of Princess lighted up by the flames and a strong feeling inside of him voiced out. So, as he also wanted to approach and talk to her about something deep inside him, he realized that his commander was on his way. Without warning, the Condor felt infinite rage and resentment burning inside him and with one rapid movement he moved away Mark's hand from her. "Now I see" he said with anger "you are taking advantage here because you are in charge while the rest of us are trying to fix over your wrong decisions. I told you that it was dangerous to use the Firebird technique in such a dense forest, but as always you never listen to what others have to say". Almost pushed aside by his second, the Eagle was so furious that his reaction was to retaliate with harsh words "I don't have to explain myself to you or anyone else for the matter. In fact as all of you were aware, this was the only solution we could possibly had done to save this planet. Admit it Jason, the only reason you are saying that it's just because you can't take orders, your ego can't handle being number two". A fist went directly to Mark's face as a response to this statement, "and yours" the Condor was panting for the intense of his next statement "it's that you are so full of yourself. Being the team commander has clouded your mind, the number one is not worthy of a man who can't even confess his inner feelings. Like just now, you were just playing with her, she...." he said pointed at the Swan "she has been waiting for you to make up your mind for so long, sometimes even crying for your indifference, always trying to hide it from anyone. Even so, I'm fully aware of this because I've seen her hiding the sorrow not knowing that I always noticed. I'm sick and tired of your stupid games and the way you treat her, I'm going to proved not only her but everyone else that you are not longer fit to be our leader" then both of them prepared themselves for a collision course. The only witness to this confrontation was just standing there, clueless of what was really going on but she didn't dare to do anything about it. Both men were just hurting each other with their hurtful arguments and now they would continue to do so with all their strength. Surprisingly, all she could do is to stand and watch them tearing themselves apart. And the real cause of all this, was right in front of them. The mountain legends talked about the existence of a magical tree, one that could bring out the deepest and most kept secrets out of anyone looking at it. Strangely, only those who are touched by its leaves would be immune to its spell but eventually, will suffer in other ways. Princess would also be affected and unfortunately, it would turn up to be in a bizarre way. The two warriors stood up in the open field with defiant movements. Contemplating the scene it looked like their advance are those on a real battle field. With the inferno in the background, the flaming- red reflections covered their uniforms and their beings. Jason with his menacing movements, was trying to spot his commander weaknesses. On the other hand, the Eagle was observing his opponent with his acute skills trying to take advantage of his second's impulsiveness. The first one who attack was the Condor as he jumped high to kick his opponent not only with his strength, but with the help of his momentum. It was easy for Mark to avoid this maneuver but he didn't expect the rapid advance from Jason when he bounced back and grabbed him by the neck, actually that was his true intention. The Eagle tried to release himself but it found difficult as the Condor grabbed him tightly. So they began their struggle, one trying to set free while the other making sure that his "prey" didn't do so. In the meantime Princess was trapped in some kind of slumber, not knowing the reason why she couldn't move. At the beginning she was paralyzed but when the two men in front of her started with their retaliations, slowly she began to feel the consequences of their acts. At the same time Mark was grabbed from behind, she felt the lack of air in her throat and when the Commander hit Jason with his elbow, she was feeling the effect of the blow in her own stomach. So, as the fight was developing in its full scale, all the pain caused by the blows and that should be feeling by those two opponents, was progressively projected in her. Unaware of this fact Jason and Mark were so concentrated in their tactics to defeat the other, not realizing that there wasn't any pain present at all or even the lack of it. Therefore, they carried on with their own battle ignoring this vital factor. As the combat reached in its climax and they were ready to attack with all their might jumping high in the air with their weapons in hand, both of the men stopped abruptly when a loud scream was heard all around the place: it was Princess crying out loud in pain. It was the Eagle the first one to notice it and avoiding the Condor maneuver, immediately went with no delay to her side. Taking her by the waist before she collapsed, his eyes opened astonished when he could see the intense pain that was reflected in that beautiful pale face. Something was wrong with her and there was no apparent reason......

Oh...the plot thickens...The guys are going "alpha male ", and only stop when they realize that Princess is hurt. You've given the tree such interesting properties...it has become a character of sorts, too! You have a great imagination, adriana!

Originally posted by Springie Oh...the plot thickens...The guys are going "alpha male ", and only stop when they realize that Princess is hurt. You've given the tree such interesting properties...it has become a character of sorts, too! You have a great imagination, adriana!

Dear Springie, You are the one inspiring us with yours!!! I'm just following where my imagination is taking us.....wait for the rest!

adrianag: Uh oh, now they've done it!

Can they figure out what's happening to her without hurting her more?

Originally posted by ChrisW adrianag: Uh oh, now they've done it!

Yeap......those two are so busy that they are unaware of what's going on there......typical "alpha guys" jeje

Originally posted by ElectricWhite Can they figure out what's happening to her without hurting her more?

It seems like it. Wait, there is more to come

Yes, I can only imagine their feelings of guilt when they realize that they are the ones who have done this!

This is certainly an interesting plot Adriana, can't wait to read more

Originally posted by Transmute Jun Yes, I can only imagine their feelings of guilt when they realize that they are the ones who have done this!

Hola TJ, Yes and I'm still working on that! Thank you for commenting

Originally posted by KT1972 This is certainly an interesting plot Adriana, can't wait to read more

Hola KT, I'm glad that you like my little story. Still working on it and about to publish the ending. Thank you!

Hola everyone! I'm back with my story. Sorry if it took me a while to finish but I was busy at work. Also, it seems that I'm better understanding Gatchaman than BOTP plot as the later is hazy in my mind. Here is the complete story with some modifications. Thanks to my dear TJ, I realized that I was focusing more in Gatchaman. Sorry....can't help it! Jeje Thanks again for your patience and please don't be so severe with me. I'm still learning......so enjoy it! Special thanks to Springie for the lovely image and ElectricWhite for the challenge! "So, are you actually saying that we should blame Zoltar for this?" was her prompt response in disbelieve at what it seemed to be a cover up. "Well, not exactly....." his words were indeed confusing as he was more nervous to the fact that she looked so ethereal against the reflection of the flames in the distance, rather than her actual comment. Whatever the cause was, Mark wasn't sure about himself now. Maybe it was the pressure he was feeling because of the consequences of his decisions earlier on, or maybe there was something about the place both were in. Regardless of the cause, something made him feel a bit strange as he was not acting as usual. But one thing was certain, all that he wanted to do at that moment was to tell her about the secret feelings he had been keeping for her for so long. Little both knew, was the fact the that tree in front of them was a special one. It had only survived the inferno surrounding it because of its peculiar and special properties. Approaching with certain reserve but with his intense gaze fixed on her, the distance between the pair was reduced. It was then when he placed firmly his hand on her shoulder. At this moment, several leaves from the tree started to fall gently around the couple and some of them brushed past her wings. She was looking at him with curiosity, expecting something totally different from what he intended to say, not knowing his true intentions, ".....Princess, I think it's time for me to talk to you about something that I have kept deep inside me and that for some reason at this moment I can't longer bear. I must confess that I...." A voice came from behind, interrupting their private moment, "what's going on here?" both of them turned to look at the arrival of their friend Jason "why both of you are not helping us with the rescue? We are desperately trying to evacuate the few citizens living in this remote area and let me tell you that we are hands-full" his voice sounded with a bit of sarcasm. All of the sudden after standing there for a moment, Jason's feelings rapidly changed as he realized something else. He was also hypnotized by the image of Princess lighted up by the flames and a strong feeling inside of him voiced out. So, as he also wanted to approach and talk to her about something deep inside him, he realized that his commander was on his way. Without warning, the Condor felt an infinite rage and resentment burning inside him and with one rapid movement he moved away Mark's hand from her. "Now I see what's going on here" he said with anger "you are taking advantage because you are in charge while the rest of us are trying to fix over your wrong decisions. I told you that it was very dangerous to use the Firebird technique in such a dense forest, but as always you never listen to what others have to say". Almost pushed aside by his second, the Eagle was so furious that his reaction was to retaliate with harsh words "I don't have to explain myself to you or anyone else for the matter. In fact as all of you were aware, this was the only solution we could possibly had done to save this planet. Admit it Jason, the only reason you are saying that it's just because you can't take orders, your ego can't handle being number two". A fist went directly to Mark's face as a response to this statement, "and yours" the Condor was panting for the intense of what he was about to say "it's that you are so full of yourself. Being the team commander has clouded your mind, the number one is not worthy of a man who can't even confess his inner feelings for her. She...." he said pointed at the Swan but somehow he couldn't continue so he added something else instead "I'm going to prove not only her but everyone else that you are not longer fit to be our leader" then both of them prepared themselves with a defensive pose for a collision course. The only witness to this confrontation was just standing there, clueless of what was really going on but she didn't dare to do anything about it. Both men were just hurting each other's ego with their hurtful arguments and now they would continue to do so with all their strength. Surprisingly, all she could do is to stand and watch them tearing themselves apart. And the real cause of all this, without any of the members of the team realizing it, was right in front of them. The mountain legends talked about the existence of a magical tree, one that could bring out the deepest and most kept secrets out of anyone just looking at it. Strangely, only those who are touched by its leaves would be immune to its spell but eventually, will suffer the consequences in other ways. Princess would also be affected and unfortunately, it would turn up to be in a bizarre way. The two warriors stood up in the open field with defiant movements. For anyone contemplating the scene it looked like their advance was like those they performed on a real battle field, with the inferno in the background and the flaming- red reflections covered their uniforms and their beings. Jason with his menacing movements, was trying to spot his commander weaknesses. On the other hand, the Eagle was observing his opponent with his acute skills trying to take advantage of his second's impulsiveness. The first one who attack was the Condor as he jumped high up to kick his opponent not only with his strength, but with the help of his momentum. It was easy for Mark to avoid this maneuver but he didn't expect the rapid advance from Jason when he bounced back and grabbed him by the neck. Actually, that was his true intention from the beginning. The Eagle tried to release himself but it found difficult as the Condor grabbed him tightly. So they began their struggle, one trying to set free while the other making sure that his "prey" didn't do so. In the meantime Princess was trapped in some kind of slumber, not knowing the reason why she couldn't move. At the beginning she was paralyzed but when the two men in front of her started with their retaliations, slowly she began to feel the consequences of their acts. At the same time Mark was grabbed from behind, she felt the lack of air in her throat and when the Commander hit Jason with his elbow, she was feeling the effect of the blow in her own stomach. So, as the fight was developing in its full scale, all the pain caused by the blows that should be feeling by those two opponents, was progressively projected in her. Unaware of this fact, Jason and Mark were so concentrated in their tactics to defeat the other, not realizing that there wasn't any pain present at all or even the lack of it. Therefore, they carried on with their own battle ignoring this vital factor. As the combat reached in its climax and they were ready to attack with all their might jumping high in the air with their weapons in hand, both of the men stopped abruptly when a loud scream was heard all around the place: it was Princess crying out loud in pain. It was the Eagle the first one to notice it and avoiding the Condor maneuver, immediately went with no delay to her side. Taking her by the waist before she collapsed, his eyes opened astonished when he could see the intense pain that was reflected in that beautiful pale face. Something was wrong with her and there was no apparent reason. "Princess, what's wrong with you?" he desperately asked her at the moment she lost consciousness in his arms. It was then when he noticed the strange bruises all over her body. As far as he remembered, none of them were present earlier on so, what was the cause? Upon being left by his opponent in midair, Jason landed not far from them. Even at that distance, he could also notice the black patches in the otherwise flawless white skin. Uncertain about the reason behind it, his first thought was that of concern followed by an uneasy and sudden feeling: fear. Realizing with horror that something or someone was attacking the Swan, his defensive instinct told him to be in his guard for the unseen aggressor and placing himself in front of the pair, he took his weapon and got ready to attack while his keen sight was monitoring the surroundings. Desperately, the Commander kept on calling her and with horror he could see that the bruises were just appearing. Not knowing the cause, he kneeled down placing her gently on his lap and tried to find a possible explanation. It was in vain, apparently there wasn't a visible cause. It was only after a while that she could slowly open her eyes, sadly the sharp pain she was enduring was reflected on those bright emeralds. Without any delay, he question her again, "are you ok?". At first, the Swan was confused not knowing what was going on and it was only then she wanted to move, when she realized that her entire body was sore. She attempted to stand up but it was in vain, her apparent wounds didn't allow her to do so. "Jason", he called his second who was still on his guard trying to find the invisible enemy "we need to go back to the Phoenix immediately. Call Tiny and ask him to be here as soon as possible. Princess need urgent medical attention".

It was then when the Condor forgot about their previous hostility and with concern, turned to face them both with anguished expression and asked the obvious, "did you see the attacker?", "no" was the blunt reply. Narrowing his eyes, then he commented "the enemy mustn't be far, wait until I find it.....whatever it is, it's going to regret attacking her". The Eagle turned to look at the man facing him, whatever was the cause of rivalry between them, had to wait as there were most urgent concerns. For that reason, immediately he stood up with the girl in his arms and started walking towards the open plain to wait for the rest of the team to arrive while his second was still making the call. In no time the Phoenix landed and the three of them flew to its top, few seconds later they were on the deck and then descended to the bridge. A very concern Keop came to their side and after looking at her, asked with dismay, "is she.....going to be ok?". The Eagle only looked at him and nodded, he had a more important task at the moment. So he gave the order "Tiny, let's get out of here fast and take us to the nearest city" After checking the controls, before replying the Owl was maneuvering the ship to its fastest speed "the nearest one is only 5000 miles, but with our top speed I guess I can reach there in no time". Another voice added, "in the meantime, I will call the emergency services to get medical attention ready upon our arrival", it was the voice of the Condor who was at his station already trying to make contact. As the Phoenix was flying at top speed, the Eagle left the bridge with the Swan still in his arms and headed for the medical bay. Over there, he placed her gently on the bed and it was then under the intense light, that he could see the extension of her wounds all around her limbs: they were all over. Just like if they were the result of an intense fight. It was at that moment that he realized that a beautiful pair of green eyes were looking at him. After releasing a deep sigh, he sat at the edge of the bed and taking her hand on his, asked her "how are you feeling?". She was totally confused as didn't know exactly what happened earlier on, but looking at his distress, her reply came with soft voice "I think.....ok but.....I'm not so sure what went on there. One moment I was fine and the next.....I felt like something was attacking me...." "Did you see what or who was the aggressor?", she turned her head aside "no, there was no one on the surroundings. Only the three of us" then she closed her eyes. It seemed to him that she didn't want to talk further about it. With steady voice trying to hide his distress he reassured her "I'm sure everything will be ok, now you are safe with us and I promise that whatever was hurting you, won't do it again" and a gentle smile was seen in his otherwise authoritative expression. Her reply was to face him back with a another smile. Still with his mind trying to understand everything, the Commander stood up and gave her the order to remain there and rest until they arrived in the city. Until then, he would ask Keop to be by her side to keep her accompanied. So after calling the Sparrow and the boy arrived, immediately he left the place. On his way to the bridge, Mark tried to recall every detail of the events previous at her attack while his mind was trying to find the answers. He stopped in front of the door and just before entering the bridge, he placed his back against the wall crossing his arms and setting his gaze in an undefined point on the floor....he felt completely lost. This kind of attitude was the very same way that his second used all the time. It was indeed was ironic. Deep in his own thoughts, he only realized that someone was right next to him when he heard the opening and close of the automatic door. It was Jason on his way to the medical bay. He was so worried about the girl that instead of just calling the emergency services, he decided to call Professor Anderson and informed him of the situation as well. He wanted to inform Mark. Somehow the Condor felt partly responsible for what had happened. Instead of putting aside his personal issues with the Eagle, he went ahead with his arguments that eventually engaged them into a serious flight, not realizing that Princess was at the mercy of an invisible enemy. At this moment he was blaming himself for being so careless. The air could feel tense between them as it was an uncomfortable moment. Nevertheless one of them took the initiative to break the tension, "I'm sorry for what happen earlier on" it was Jason's apology. Mark only turned his face to look at him, "......I don't know what happened to me, I felt so much anger burning inside me that I couldn't contain it......I just had to said all those terrible things, couldn't stop myself......" For few moments both of them remained silent as they were trying to understand everything that really happened and what was the cause of their earlier aggression. Then, without saying anything, Mark faced him and after placing his hand on his shoulder, he finally responded, "I understand perfectly what you mean" his expression was very serious "you were not the only one who felt that way, somehow I couldn't control myself either. There was an estrange urge for me to let you know how I really felt, all those deep feelings were just too strong to the point I couldn't handle them. I'm truly sorry for all that was said out there. As your commander and friend, I shouldn't had uttered anything like that....for all we know, something was controlling us." It was then clear to both of them that it wasn't their true intention to attack at each other. Their confrontation came out as a result of something or someone taking the control of their emotions and even their minds. For what they could see now, they weren't theirselves. At that particular moment, all was understood in silence and finally all rivalry ceased between them. Even though their deepest thoughts were already exposed and now they were fully conscious of them, the friendship somehow managed to remain the same as it had always been. Aware this, it was then when the Condor extended his hand to shake it with his longtime friend. Mark was so pleased to reach an understanding with Jason that gladly took his hand in sign of peace. Nonetheless, the emotive moment came to an end when Tiny's voice was heard on the speakers informing that they were approaching the city. The Condor just smiled before re entering the bridge while the Eagle took a minute to do so. Deep inside him he knew that whatever Jason told him over there, were in fact his true feelings and that made him feel concerned.....if his second believed that he had feelings for Princess, maybe he should be more careful from now on. Especially when she was listening everything that was said as a silent witness, and now she was conscious about them. Maybe that was the reason she was so quiet with him at the medical bay. Thinking about this, it was then when an idea came at his mind: maybe the girl was more injured not by the unseen enemy, but for all that was said. When he faced this truth in plain sight, he felt very terrible. He loved her more than anything and hurting her had never been his intention. Maybe once she was fully recovered, both could talk about it, he could try to explain and maybe.....he shook his head, all that had to wait as there were more urgent matters. So he re entered the bridge and took his position as the leader of the group. Sometimes expressing our deepest feelings can cause more grief than if we just try to hide them and remain silent. On that particular mission, the two stronger members of the team face not only at each other but their inner feelings, and none of them like it. On the other hand, both realized how powerful adversaries they could be.....luckily, the mighty Eagle and Condor were on the same side. Right after their departure, the real cause of their confrontation lied solitary in the mountain. That day the tree lost all its leaves as the truth was exposed through the two young warriors words..... and the person they both cared the most got affected by them. In fact, that was the real power of the only standing tree there: to show everyone who touches its leaves the great power of the truth that is hidden deep inside those who loves and cares the most for them. THE END

Aw I'm so glad that Mark and Jason are friends again at the end.

I'm glad that Mark and Jason resolved things... but poor Princess is still left hanging!

Originally posted by ChrisW Aw I'm so glad that Mark and Jason are friends again at the end.

Yes my too ChrisW! Those two are like real brothers.....can fight and argue but will always remain friends!

Originally posted by Transmute Jun I'm glad that Mark and Jason resolved things... but poor Princess is still left hanging!

Hola TJ! Well, I think it's her destiny, always left wondering what's really going on with her romantic-planotic love.....Ken! Hopefully one day!