Bradbury's Jar #149

29 Replies 223 Views 0 Likes 9 Participants Last post by Becky Rock 10 Nov 2014 10:51
Redbird
Redbird Gatchamaniac posted 2 Nov 2014 05:36
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This week's prompt is: pillow Have fun!
KT1972
KT1972 Gatchamaniac posted 2 Nov 2014 12:07
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And as promised, my post is here...... http://www.gatchamania.net/thread.php?threadid=4718&sid= Enjoy folks Tongue
Springie
Springie Her Royal Fluffiness...Swan of Swans... posted 2 Nov 2014 14:24
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Great writing, KT! Love the prompt...could lead to some nice "pillow talk"! Smoochies
ElectricWhite
ElectricWhite Gatchamaniac posted 2 Nov 2014 14:37
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Okay, here's a little something.... ========== Jason never expected to see her snuggling his pillow when he stepped inside his trailer. He quietly stepped over to her, and her eyes lit up when she saw him. "Hey, foxy lady," he couldn't help smiling as he said this, "how'd you get here?" She didn't say a word, but she seemed to be quietly laughing. "C'mon, Kat," he said as he scooped up the Fennec kit, "I'd better get you back before Chris misses you!"
KT1972
KT1972 Gatchamaniac posted 2 Nov 2014 14:50
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lol, EW, that was cute. So how did the little fennec find it's way into Joe's bed?
Redbird
Redbird Gatchamaniac posted 2 Nov 2014 14:57
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Geez, even Fennecs wind up in the Condor's bed! LOL. Tongue Very cute response EW! Thumbsup
ElectricWhite
ElectricWhite Gatchamaniac posted 2 Nov 2014 16:13
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Originally posted by KT1972 So how did the little fennec find it's way into Joe's bed?
That's the thing about Fennecs -- if you're not keeping an eye on them, they'll get into all sorts of mischief! For instance, YouTube has a lot of videos of Quiggly (the clown prince of Critter Camp) getting into other animals' cages, hiding behind the family's computer, perching on top of the stove, and so on...
ChrisW
ChrisW Gatchamaniac posted 2 Nov 2014 17:27
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Phew, I was wondering where she went! He's lucky she didn't appear while he was sleeping and find himself waking up with a fennec on his head!
Springie
Springie Her Royal Fluffiness...Swan of Swans... posted 2 Nov 2014 20:04
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Gives new meaning to the term "Foxy Lady"...*grin* Very cute!
Daniella T
Daniella T GatchaFreak posted 3 Nov 2014 12:24
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The little fennec just had a normal female reaction being near Jason's bed...Can't be helped!
mylari
mylari Gatchamaniac posted 3 Nov 2014 12:57
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There are certainly much worse things to find in one's bed Smile
mylari
mylari Gatchamaniac posted 4 Nov 2014 19:50
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[unrecoverable text]
ChrisW
ChrisW Gatchamaniac posted 4 Nov 2014 19:55
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Mylari: Jason's such a lil devil. Smile I love the message, LOL.
Springie
Springie Her Royal Fluffiness...Swan of Swans... posted 4 Nov 2014 21:47
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I'm not sure that I understand...is Jason's wristband inside the cooler and it has a message blinking on it? I think I know where this is going...and I'm sure that Chris is going to love it! Wink
mylari
mylari Gatchamaniac posted 4 Nov 2014 21:54
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No we haven't completely revealed what's in the cooler yet. The light on Jason's wristband was blinking in code and Mark had it in his pocket - he found it with the cooler in the women's locker room shower. And honestly, I didn't even realize that it could be read to put Mark and Jason together... I thought Jason was pushing Mark at Princess... but now there are more ideas in my head *eep*
ChrisW
ChrisW Gatchamaniac posted 4 Nov 2014 21:58
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Boy I hadn't even thought of that. I'm slipping!
Redbird
Redbird Gatchamaniac posted 5 Nov 2014 04:15
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Originally posted by mylariI didn't even realize that it could be read to put Mark and Jason together.... I thought Jason was pushing Mark at Princess... but now there are more ideas in my head *eep*
I have to admit I wasn't exactly sure which way this was going myself! LOL. Who knows maybe we'll end up with a 3some Tongue
Springie
Springie Her Royal Fluffiness...Swan of Swans... posted 5 Nov 2014 07:03 (edited 5 Nov 2014 07:04)
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Haha...well, in just reading this piece alone (and I read through it a few times), he didn't mention Princess, even though I was hoping he would...so I assumed it was Mark/ Jason.
mylari
mylari Gatchamaniac posted 5 Nov 2014 07:12
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Originally posted by Springie Haha...well, in just reading this piece alone (and I read through it a few times), he didn't mention Princess, even though I was hoping he would...so I assumed it was Mark/ Jason.
Originally, I did have Jason mention Princess. Then for some reason I took that line out... Can't remember why exactly either... Well I'm sure Jason will give me a better idea of just what he's up to next week... Crazy condor hijacked my story... Condor
ElectricWhite
ElectricWhite Gatchamaniac posted 5 Nov 2014 08:35
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Originally posted by mylari Crazy condor hijacked my story... Condor
I doubt if he'd see it that way! Tongue
Springie
Springie Her Royal Fluffiness...Swan of Swans... posted 5 Nov 2014 20:55
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Looking forward to seeing what's next...and hoping it is beneficial for a certain Swan... Angel3
Redbird
Redbird Gatchamaniac posted 6 Nov 2014 04:22
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Originally posted by ElectricWhite
Originally posted by mylari Crazy condor hijacked my story... Condor
I doubt if he'd see it that way! Tongue
Yep. Condor logic... Wink1
Transmute Jun
Transmute Jun Queen of the Bird Missiles posted 6 Nov 2014 06:04
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I read it as Mark/Princess, but then I had the previous posts clearly in my mind, so I was thinking in that direction.
mylari
mylari Gatchamaniac posted 6 Nov 2014 07:55
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Though, really to be fair, Mark should be the one to decide what happens next. Waiting to see if he can get control of the story or if Jason will keep driving this one... This was *not* the story I was envisioning after the first post...
ElectricWhite
ElectricWhite Gatchamaniac posted 6 Nov 2014 09:27
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Originally posted by mylari This was *not* the story I was envisioning after the first post...
That happens a lot! Many times the story you want to tell isn't the one that needs to be told, and it's not uncommon for the latter to be the better story! Just don't let your characters steer the story toward something that their world's reality wouldn't allow to happen.
ChrisW
ChrisW Gatchamaniac posted 6 Nov 2014 13:15
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Excellent advice, EW!
ElectricWhite
ElectricWhite Gatchamaniac posted 6 Nov 2014 13:26 (edited 6 Nov 2014 13:28)
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Thanks, Chris! Smile
mylari
mylari Gatchamaniac posted 6 Nov 2014 14:40
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OK well, if it looks like I let the characters take over too much, you all will poke me with the pokey stick right?
ElectricWhite
ElectricWhite Gatchamaniac posted 6 Nov 2014 15:31 (edited 6 Nov 2014 15:32)
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Pokey stick Poke or Thwak or whatever else catches our eye.
Becky Rock
Becky Rock Gatchamaniac posted 10 Nov 2014 10:51
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Jason could start his own match-making company when the war is over: Birds of a Feather Must Be Together
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