Bradbury's Jar #129

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KT1972
KT1972 Gatchamaniac posted 15 Jun 2014 02:27
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I've got the prompt again this week, and today the word is going to be..... suspicions have fun Smile
KT1972
KT1972 Gatchamaniac posted 15 Jun 2014 02:49
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ElectricWhite
ElectricWhite Gatchamaniac posted 15 Jun 2014 06:54
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Oh dear oh dear oh dear! It looks like a fine mess Kaden's created...I wonder how the team's going to head off a potential disaster.
Becky Rock
Becky Rock Gatchamaniac posted 15 Jun 2014 12:30
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They need to get Jun and Junpei under wraps and since they told Kaden they know who the Condor is, Joe's in danger. They've got to warn him, too.
Daniella T
Daniella T GatchaFreak posted 15 Jun 2014 13:57 (edited 15 Jun 2014 13:58)
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"If I had known being involved with Jun would have led to this much trouble, I would never have asked her out in the first place" -- this must be the understatement of the year! Wait to see just how MUCH trouble she can be, Kaden! At first, I felt that Kaden had been a fool to tell them "everything he knows", down to the clothes Jun wears...but his explanation of wanting to make sure that Galactor understands she's only a regular girl makes sense.
Becky Rock
Becky Rock Gatchamaniac posted 15 Jun 2014 15:19
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But the question is, what will be Galactor's interpretation?
rachel
rachel Exalted Member posted 16 Jun 2014 23:51
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My suspicions upon Kaden is fading, but what will come next?
Daniella T
Daniella T GatchaFreak posted 17 Jun 2014 13:13
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Originally posted by rachel My suspicions upon Kaden is fading, but what will come next?
Good one, Rachel! Wink I'd like to do an episode rewrite (this prompt is practically begging for it), but my suspicion is I won't be able to do it until the weekend.
ElectricWhite
ElectricWhite Gatchamaniac posted 17 Jun 2014 13:40
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And I have a suspicion that the wordplay is just beginning... Elfrolleyes2
Redbird
Redbird Gatchamaniac posted 20 Jun 2014 14:07
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ElectricWhite
ElectricWhite Gatchamaniac posted 20 Jun 2014 16:55
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Daniella T
Daniella T GatchaFreak posted 21 Jun 2014 12:43
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Stovepipe hat and handlebar moustache...LOL! My suspicion is he's up to something Shades
Becky Rock
Becky Rock Gatchamaniac posted 21 Jun 2014 12:57
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That description is loaded with evil. I'm not sure I'd be that trusting of him, either.
KT1972
KT1972 Gatchamaniac posted 21 Jun 2014 13:24
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Oh, I don't know, he could be a nice guy. We mustn't judge on appearances.....
Daniella T
Daniella T GatchaFreak posted 21 Jun 2014 13:34
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//I had my suspicions of her from the beginning. From the moment she met me on the platform, oh I had a lot of suspicions about Madam Latroz. Nothing I could put my finger on, mind you. Just a general feeling of unease. But did I act on my suspicions? No sir. I let myself be lulled into a false sense of security. G-Force was there. Everything was checked and monitored. Now I am a captive, and now I know Mala's real identity. My first priority is to save the solar express, if I can. My second, to be freed. And my third, to go after Mala. This time, it's personal.//
ElectricWhite
ElectricWhite Gatchamaniac posted 21 Jun 2014 15:55
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Whoa, DT, I'm getting a feeling of Deja Vu! Cheeky
Becky Rock
Becky Rock Gatchamaniac posted 21 Jun 2014 16:09
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DT - random thoughts that tell the whole story in just a few sentences.
Daniella T
Daniella T GatchaFreak posted 21 Jun 2014 18:13
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Originally posted by ElectricWhite Whoa, DT, I'm getting a feeling of Deja Vu! Cheeky
If you mean that I've been trying to continue my long-suffering fic about Anderson's captivity -- you are probably right! If that's not what you mean, then this was a bit of self-promo, I know woohoo
Redbird
Redbird Gatchamaniac posted 27 Jun 2014 15:34
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Redbird
Redbird Gatchamaniac posted 6 Jul 2014 06:55 (edited 6 Jul 2014 06:56)
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This kinda stems off from Prompt# 121- Entangle. Hope you enjoy! **************************** Prompt #129- Suspicions Joe watched idly from an overturned orange milk crate as Ken worked on one of the planes currently sitting outside of the dilapidated hangars at his airstrip. It had been fairly quiet lately, and Ken was trying to catch up on some of the mounting list of maintenance repairs he promised for his clientele. He would occasionally pass something from the tool box to his friend, as he worked. "So..." Joe asked, stretching his legs out in front of him. "What happened with that chick with the concert tickets? Ken sighed and glanced over his shoulder before going back to work. "You already asked me this the other day." "Yeah and you didn't answer me." Joe chuckled, squinting at the sun shining in his eyes. Ken paused and wiped his hands on his jeans. "Pass me that ratchet", he indicated with a nod. Joe tossed it to him, and it was caught with a flick of the wrist and barely a glance. "Nothing happened." Ken told him." We went to the show and then left when it was over. That was it." "Sorry Ken, I'm not buying it." "What do you mean you're not buying it?" he grumbled, tugging open a stubborn access panel with a grunt. "Exactly what I just said." Joe smirked. "That chick was looking at you like you had the word "Dinner" tattooed across your forehead." There was only silence as Ken continued to work. Joe's eyebrow shot up and a slow grin worked its way across his face. "I knew it!" he crowed. "What's her name?" Ken rested his forehead head against the side of the plane. He knew Joe wouldn't stop pestering him until he answered. "Carolina." "Carolina with the red sports car. " Joe mused, getting up to retrieve another beer from the cooler they left a few feet away . He grabbed two by the necks, popping the jagged metal caps off and skipping them across the dying grass. He walked over to Ken, who had taken off his shirt and tossed it aside and handed him a bottle. His friend took it with a nod of thanks, tucking the ratchet into his back pocket and wiped the sweat off his brow with his forearm. "You gonna see her again?" Ken leaned back against the plane, taking a long pull of beer and shrugged. "What? What does that mean? No?" Joe frowned at him, then looked at him, his suspicions clearly in his eyes. "Ken you bonehead! What did you do? Or should I ask , what didn't you do?" "Why do you care...!" Ken shot back, rolling his eyes. "For the love of God, Joe....." "Because I want you to have a little fun, moron! And to stop taking yourself so goddamn seriously all the time!" "And how do you know I didn't have fun at the concert?" Ken asked, eyes filled with amusement. "Because you're not telling me anything!" Joe shouted in frustration, blue-grey eyes snapping. "Maybe I don't broadcast my conquests to the world like you Joe!" Ken shouted back, then realizing what he said, bit his tongue and turned back to the plane again. "Wait. What?!" Joe sputtered. "Conquests?!" Realizing the cat was out of the bag, Ken looked over his shoulder at Joe, a small smile playing about his mouth. "Well....we're going out again on Friday night."
KT1972
KT1972 Gatchamaniac posted 6 Jul 2014 07:23
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well well well, so Ken IS a red blooded male after all! Biggrins
Redbird
Redbird Gatchamaniac posted 6 Jul 2014 08:30
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Originally posted by KT1972 well well well, so Ken IS a red blooded male after all! Biggrins
Wonders never cease! Tongue
Becky Rock
Becky Rock Gatchamaniac posted 6 Jul 2014 12:27
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Joe is relentless with Ken. I'd be worried about Joe trying to play cupid with his bad track record.
ChrisW
ChrisW Gatchamaniac posted 31 Jul 2014 21:28
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KT: Kaden's not really superhero material but you've written him as a pretty regular guy, I think. Unless he's a really good liar! EW: LOL DT: Tsk tsk Chief ... let's not forget that you almost get Mark killed in that one! Redbird: Woohoo, so the Eagle does have a little fun. Smile And even more fun torturing Mr. Nosey Joe, I bet! Becky: I hear you on that worry, that would be kind of funny if every time Joe set him up with someone they tried to kill him. Ken would run screaming after a while every time Joe offered!
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