Bradbury's Jar #126

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KT1972
KT1972 Gatchamaniac posted 25 May 2014 03:41
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Right, let's get straight down to business! This weeks word is...... Berserk Feel free to go as crazy as you wish folks Smile
ElectricWhite
ElectricWhite Gatchamaniac posted 25 May 2014 18:13
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rachel
rachel Exalted Member posted 25 May 2014 18:47 (edited 26 May 2014 06:11)
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Jun gasped looking at the pictures. A dark lord wearing black armor was seducing a girl squirming with enormous pain. Jun's eyes moved to the next page then she saw the most sinful intimacy scenes. The dark lord's helmet resembled a hawk's beak and long cloak draped under his shoulder looked so familiar it made her face flush. She crawled under the bad and stretched her arm to grab another books expecting further seductive drawings. "So this is what you like." Jun flinched at the voice, but she shoved herself too much underneath his bed. A set of hands grabbed her ankles and she was dragged out. She regretted deeply that she did not closed the comic book-Berserk vol.13. She could feel his mischievous gaze darted on her back which made her head still fell on the floor. He knelt down then stabbed his index fingers on her ribs making her giggle. Soon playful moves became gentle strokes and.............................. THE END.
KT1972
KT1972 Gatchamaniac posted 26 May 2014 03:00
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KT1972
KT1972 Gatchamaniac posted 26 May 2014 03:21
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EW - curiouser and curiouser.... rachel - for a moment, I thought this was heading towards "Rubber Room" territory, but you seemed to stop before it got too risque. The first couple of sentences in your piece are certainly borderline for this forum.
ElectricWhite
ElectricWhite Gatchamaniac posted 26 May 2014 05:00
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rachel -- I've heard of people really "being in to" what they're reading, but I never thought Jun would be one of them! Whew! KT -- nice to see that Jun's willing to let the team get her onto the road to redemption!
rachel
rachel Exalted Member posted 26 May 2014 06:32
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KT- It's so romantic!! As the topic is berserk so I expected sad ending. When I imagine the relationship between Ken and Jun, I always guess Jun would never be able to take the lead. I think Ken is a fox boy. In this piece his fond behavior looks sincere - and I think it truly is- but I can also see his half curled lips. PS) I modified it to obey with the rules. Thank you for inform me. "Feel free to go crazy" gave me no limits, sorry for misunderstanding. EW- It seems that yours is a part of your pic, could you tell me where the first part starts?
ElectricWhite
ElectricWhite Gatchamaniac posted 26 May 2014 06:53
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rachel -- this is a continuation of the "Kanata" storyline. I'll send you the Bradbury's Jar responses that I've posted since the last batch.
Transmute Jun
Transmute Jun Queen of the Bird Missiles posted 26 May 2014 13:00
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EW, I'm still trying to figure out what's going on! It seems naive of this president to think that he will be just as powerful as Galactor. Rachel, I'm sure Jun will enjoy re-enacting that book! KT< I'm glad Jun is finally starting to see sense!
KT1972
KT1972 Gatchamaniac posted 26 May 2014 13:23
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Originally posted by rachel PS) I modified it to obey with the rules. Thank you for inform me. "Feel free to go crazy" gave me no limits, sorry for misunderstanding.
No, you didn't really misunderstand, it's just anything that may have an "Adult" theme would usually be posted in a parallel thread in the rubber room, maybe with a link in the main thread so readers can find it easier.
amethyst
amethyst Wanted: $1000 Reward posted 26 May 2014 15:03
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Originally posted by KT1972
Originally posted by rachel PS) I modified it to obey with the rules. Thank you for inform me. "Feel free to go crazy" gave me no limits, sorry for misunderstanding.
No, you didn't really misunderstand, it's just anything that may have an "Adult" theme would usually be posted in a parallel thread in the rubber room, maybe with a link in the main thread so readers can find it easier.
Rachel, anytime it is questionable, it should go into the rubber room. If you or any one doesn't know how, Springie just did a post that is a perfect model for it (though not the only way to do it). If you ever have any questions just ask, there are plenty of us around to give guidance.
Transmute Jun
Transmute Jun Queen of the Bird Missiles posted 26 May 2014 17:46
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He pressed the switch to lock the door, yet instead the portal opened. "What the hell is going on here?" he grumbled. Annoyed, he walked over to the door, using the manual override to close and lock it. He turned, ready to initiate his communication, but the comm system was apparently on the fritz. All he received was a spray of snow and bursts of static. "Get someone in here!" he bellowed, before realizing that with the communications down, no one could hear him. Of course, that wasn't entirely true. The guards outside heard his command through the wall. They pounded at the door, unable to enter due to the manual lock that had been initiated. "Is everything all right, Sire?" they asked. "Damn idiots!" Katse snarled. "With all of these incompetents I have working for me, it's not wonder I'm going berserk!"
Becky Rock
Becky Rock Gatchamaniac posted 26 May 2014 18:28
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EW - So Manuel orders murders, too. Ken is going to have to be very careful. Rachel - My question is who is tickling Jun? KT - How is Kaden going to react to Jun's lesser involvement in the J? And she still doesn't have her bracelet or have I missed something? TJ - That reminds me of bloopers from the original Star Trek since the 'automatic doors' were opened by people on cue.
rachel
rachel Exalted Member posted 28 May 2014 05:54 (edited 28 May 2014 08:04)
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KT/Amethyst - well noted. Thanks! BR- Not decided yet. Grin Maybe...Joe? Berserk is kinda popular Japanese Manga. When the dark lord revealed himself, his costume reminded people of Gatchaman. TJ- I don't know why I feel Katse so cute in your fics.
Becky Rock
Becky Rock Gatchamaniac posted 28 May 2014 15:54
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! agree, Rachel. That does look like something from Gatchaman.
KT1972
KT1972 Gatchamaniac posted 28 May 2014 15:58
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I was thinking the Blackbirds....
ChrisW
ChrisW Gatchamaniac posted 28 Jun 2014 19:22
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ChrisW
ChrisW Gatchamaniac posted 28 Jun 2014 19:25
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EW: This should be interesting. Smile "You're very pretty and I'd like to play with your hair and maybe chop it off, but don't worry, I'm not your enemy ..."
ChrisW
ChrisW Gatchamaniac posted 28 Jun 2014 19:40
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rachel: What a mean place to "close the door" (meaning not show us the rest, hehe)! By "fox boy" do you mean sly/tricky? And no worries, the Rubber Room thing is something you get a feel for over time. The important thing is realizing when you might have crossed the line and correcting it, like you did! That berserk comic character does look very Gatchaman! KT: Yeah, Jun really had been the one to abandon them. I can only think that Ken was so conflicted over the Kaden thing that he didn't step in when he should have, before things got out of control. Still not sure that Jun has really understood just how badly she's messed up but it's a start! It was wise of Ken to ask if she still wanted to be on the team. It sure didn't seem like she did. TJ: Oh dear, this is pretty minor as far as Katse going berserk, so his subordinates are pretty lucky!
KT1972
KT1972 Gatchamaniac posted 29 Jun 2014 01:17
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Awww, Chris, There's still hope for Ken and Joe yet. Smile
Redbird
Redbird Gatchamaniac posted 29 Jun 2014 06:10
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Originally posted by KT1972 Awww, Chris, There's still hope for Ken and Joe yet. Smile
Awww! They're so darn cute! LOL at Joe's goofy grin. Heheh. Tongue
ChrisW
ChrisW Gatchamaniac posted 29 Jun 2014 15:33
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Sometimes I can't resist the cute. Smile
Redbird
Redbird Gatchamaniac posted 5 Jul 2014 19:13
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Finally something came to me after all these weeks. (And yeah, I have other things hanging, I have just not been motivated to work on them....lost my muse, but not the ideas,if that makes sense). Anyway, here we go: ********************************* Prompt #126- Berserk It was late at night and raining heavily when Joe finally pulled the G2 down the winding dirt road towards his trailer. His wiper blades had been going full speed and it still hadn't been enough to clear the windshield of the rain that pelted down from above. He carefully took the last curve before he reached the clearing where it was parked, his headlights shining brightly against the metal of the trailer. As he turned into the clearing something caught his eye; a black shadow against the backdrop of the darker night. BANG! The door to the trailer slammed shut just as a bolt of lightning illuminated the clearing. Cursing and shielding his eyes against the light, he was barely able to discern a smudgy figure as it ran from the trailer into the surrounding trees. Not again! ! he thought, hastily rubbing his palms against his eyes to rid them of the afterimage. Throwing the car into park, and haphazardly shoving open the door, Joe ran off into the darkness ahead. He wove in and out amongst the tall trees, as quick and silent as a wraith. Soles sinking into the mud, his mind spewed unspoken curses at the icy water that made its way into his shoes. He imagined how he was going to go berserk and pummel the person who kept breaking into his trailer into a bloody pulp. It was impossibly dark, and his eyes strained to see. His ears were filled with the sound of his own breathing and of the wind that stirred the leaves in the trees. A wet branch lashed him across the face, but he ignored it. Another flash of lightning light up the treetops, and the rain came down harder. Where are they? He pumped his legs harder. What do they want with me? His heart pounded. Who were they? The next step he lost his footing on the sodden ground and it sent him sprawling. His training prevented him from landing awkwardly and Joe landed hard on his hands. Gritting his teeth, his fingers dug into the soft earth in frustration. Slowly he rose to his knees, then to his feet, willing his heart to stop racing. Whoever it was, they were long gone by now. And he didn't get a good look at them either. Joe lifted a hand to the stinging pain on his cheek, and was surprised when his hand encountered something sticky. Blood, from where the low hanging branch had lashed him. A rumble of thunder sounded in the distance, as he shoved strands of wet hair out of his eyes. He needed to get back to the clearing--to make sure things were as they should be. And fuck it if he didn't leave the keys in the G2. Baka! He seriously had to get a hold of himself, the last thing he needed on top of the current situation was to have something happen to the car. Gathering his wits, he scowled long and hard into the darkness, before turning on his heel to head back to the trailer.
ChrisW
ChrisW Gatchamaniac posted 5 Jul 2014 19:46
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Redbird: Oooh, very intense! He's in SO MUCH TROUBLE if the car's gone. Smile Though I suspect the team can track their vehicles, you'd hope so anyway!
Redbird
Redbird Gatchamaniac posted 6 Jul 2014 08:34
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Yeah Joe is definitely ticked off and shook up. Could you imagine what would happen if he got back to the clearing and the G2 was gone?! Elfeek1 I would only hope they have tracking devices like you said!
Becky Rock
Becky Rock Gatchamaniac posted 6 Jul 2014 12:14
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CW- Adam is going to push all of Joe's buttons. I foresee words between Ken and Adam. RB - Joe's going to have to get a watch dog with an attitude.
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