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Last post by ChrisW 22 Feb 2017 12:14
We've not had a challenge in a while and I'm not sure if this has been done before.....but how about this? :
A member of the team is temporarily blinded while carrying out a mission. It can be a solo mission or not, and the incident can happen anytime during the mission (middle, end, etc).
Any takers? Do with it what you will!
Haha...sorry...but I digress...
Then, I thought...hmmm...wouldn't it be fun to see the team as muppets?
So I looked for a "Make your own Muppet" link...and I found one! It doesn't give many choices, but it was fun to play around with...
Here's Muppet Ken...
and Joe...
and Jun...
and Jinpei...
and Ryu...
and Joe...
and Jun...
and Jinpei...
and Ryu...
Springie
Her Royal Fluffiness...Swan of Swans...
posted 11 Apr 2014 16:29
(edited 11 Apr 2014 16:31)
Here's a link, if you want to play, too...
Make Your Own Muppet
Springie -- Your first one was funny but kind of creepy! (And, dang, you beat me at being the first post!)
well, blindfold is a kinda sexy item, and her/his hands must be tied up in a hospital bed to avoid touching eye injuries. MMm~ I really looking forward to next replies.
Somebody please kick off me to the Rubber room lol.
Teehee... rachel's mind goes to sexy blindfolds and mine goes to muppets...what does that say about me? Haha...
I like your idea better, rachel!!
ElectricWhite
Gatchamaniac
posted 11 Apr 2014 16:48
[unrecoverable text]
Originally posted by Springie I dunno about being blinded but that line- "Doctor! My eyes..." made me think of Joe waking up with muppet eyes...that centrifuge did more damage than we originally thought! LOLSpriniie, that reminds me of the Roger Rabbit movie where a toon was trying to pass as a human. At the end he looked like that as he started to talk with a very high pitched voice. EW - I'm sure there are a lot of people who have done that.
Love it, EW- makes me think of the song, "I Wear My Sunglasses at Night"...poor Jinpei!
Heheh. Not quite what I had in mind Springie, but very creative! It's all good. LOL.
EW: Very cute! I can see Jinpei strutting around like the big man about town, and leaving his shades on for the mission.
(I'm guessing they would stay on when they changed into Birdstyle....Hmmmm.)
(I'm guessing they would stay on when they changed into Birdstyle....Hmmmm.)
Originally posted by Redbird (I'm guessing they would stay on when they changed into Birdstyle....Hmmmm.)That's what I was thinking! (Maybe you should worry, RB -- you're starting to understand my thought process!
)
Heheh. Nah!
But I do wonder, since their clothes are specially designed to work with the bracelets, would something that *wasn't* just carry over when they transmuted? Or would it disrupt the process or something similar....?
But I do wonder, since their clothes are specially designed to work with the bracelets, would something that *wasn't* just carry over when they transmuted? Or would it disrupt the process or something similar....?
Becky Rock
Gatchamaniac
posted 12 Apr 2014 13:08
Good question. Was Princess unable to flip to Birdstyle when she lost her shoe?
Didn't Jason transmute while wearing driving gloves once or twice? They weren't part of his civy uniform.
ElectricWhite
Gatchamaniac
posted 12 Apr 2014 13:21
Of course, there's no way he could have put on the sunglasses after he transmuted!
Springie
Her Royal Fluffiness...Swan of Swans...
posted 12 Apr 2014 15:24
(edited 12 Apr 2014 15:25)
ElectricWhite
Gatchamaniac
posted 13 Apr 2014 06:54
KT -- It's so nice to see bullies lose the fight!
For some reason I'm really surprised Ken let Joe do that! I figured Ken would be the one to try and deal with them......
Awwww...not that he needs them, but Jinpei has the best " bodyguards" in the world!
Joe made a good point about the kids' futures...
Daniella T
GatchaFreak
posted 13 Apr 2014 10:42
Somehow, when I read the prompt, I thought it was going to be sad-themed fics...Springie and EW certainly put me right!
KT -- I particularly liked the last bit, where Joe says that one day the three bullies will be dressed in green...it's interesting to think where Galactor's recruits come from, and these fit the bill nicely.
KT -- I particularly liked the last bit, where Joe says that one day the three bullies will be dressed in green...it's interesting to think where Galactor's recruits come from, and these fit the bill nicely.
Originally posted by Becky Rock Spriniie, that reminds me of the Roger Rabbit movie where a toon was trying to pass as a human. At the end he looked like that as he started to talk with a very high pitched voice.Becky, I had exactly the same thought! KT, I think Joe dealt with that very appropriately! EW, good thing Ken didn't have the same issues with his sunglasses!
That's back when glasses lenses were huge. Joe always looked cooler in them.
KT - Joe's comment is similar to the one I've heard regarding bullies that they'll be the ones pumping your gas in the future (back when that was done).
Now my husband says 'those are the guys who will be paying for your Social Security. We'd better start saving more money.'
Transmute Jun
Queen of the Bird Missiles
posted 13 Apr 2014 12:11
Jason walked down the hallway with a heavy sigh. He hated doing this. He always avoided the task when it was his turn, and more often than not, Mark and Princess would cover for him. But today, there had been no escape. Princess was ill and the Commander was by her side. Keyop had hidden away somewhere and Tiny had fallen asleep on the Ready Room couch, unable to be awoken for anything save a priority one emergency.
This time Jason had to take his turn.
He dragged his feet, yet the corridors of Center Neptune were not, by their nature, long. All too soon he was outside the door.
Steeling himself, Jason pressed the button on the wall panel to activate the door mechanism. The portal slid back with a soft whoosh, revealing the interior of the room beyond. What Jason beheld there was so horrific, so terrifying, that his mind at fused refused t comprehend what he was seeing, yet a few seconds later the true mind-altering horror began to seep in.
"Augh! My eyes!" Jason cried out, running from the room and desperately trying claw out his face, to rip the sight from his cowering brain. Yet there was no going back. He knew that awful tableau would be etched into his deepest, darkest nightmares forever.
"How rude!" 7-Zark-7 exclaimed in a prissy fashion. "I hate it when we're disturbed, Susan."
"So do I, Zark." Susan purred. "Now, weren't you just telling me about the massive size of your FOSDIC?"
"Why yes." Zark tittered, his hand slipping back underneath the towel he had wrapped around his waist. "I believe I was..."
Ewwwww, TJ, time for the brain bleach.....
ElectricWhite
Gatchamaniac
posted 13 Apr 2014 12:17
NYAAAAARRRRRGH!!!!! TJ, how could you?!?
*sob!* So cruel! So horrible! So.....oh, I just can't find the words!
Originally posted by ElectricWhite NYAAAAARRRRRGH!!!!! TJ, how could you?!? *sob!* So cruel! So horrible! So.....oh, I just can't find the words!I'll help you EW:
Bwahahahahahaha...reminds me of the fic called "Too Hot for Zark"! If you haven't read it yet...it is a MUST! I laughed until I cried...
TJ, that was EVIL!! LOL!
Becky Rock
Gatchamaniac
posted 13 Apr 2014 16:21
Oh Good Lord. You had to do it, with a picture no less! It'll take a while to get that out of my memory.
Transmute Jun
Queen of the Bird Missiles
posted 14 Apr 2014 09:17
Well without the picture, how else would I have had everyone screaming about 'My eyes!"
I just figured that was the worst thing anyone could possibly see....
I just figured that was the worst thing anyone could possibly see....
EW- Jinpei is so foolishly cute!
KT- I really laughed at your piece. Do the bad boys sharing the same manual all over the world? It reminded me my childhood.
TJ- You've broken my tender heart into pieces!!!!!
You know what I've been expecting for!!
How could you.....!! (Rachel is falling onto the floor)
My eyes!!
When I clicked , I expected a comedy, but I finally found it was......ugh....
I was really curious about what FOSDIC/FOSNIP was, so I searched all over the google, but I couldn't find it.
Then I opened urbandictionary.com and entered F.O.S!! Now I know What FOSDIC/FOSNIP means!!
Please somebody wash my brain off~~~eyes too~
My eyes!!
When I clicked
Ha- rachel- sorry it was lost in translation for you! I don't know what F.O.S. is, but it isn't referring to that.
Have you ever watched Battle of the Planets? Janet Waldo, who does the voice of Princess (Jun from Gatchaman) also does the voice of Susan the robot from planet pluto- and she was always making sexual innuendos that went over our heads when we were young.
Her innuendos in this fic finally make zark self destruct...
Zark always talks about his Fosdic- the "dic" part making it sound like a man's private parts, so "Susan" makes up her own parts called Fosnips ( "nips" meaning "nipples"). That's what they are referring to.
Now I need to go look up what F.O.S. means! Yipes!
Springie, I've not watched it.
I regarded Zark as an original character of comic books, but it seems like there is another version of Gatchaman animation!! Fortunately, I've found some on Youtube.
Regarding FOS....I thought that it was Full Of Shi*s.
I was a little bit not comprehensible why Susan called herself like that. Now I see~ Thanks Springie.
Glad you were able to find some Battle of the Planets episodes on You Tube! Many of us here grew up with that version of the show. It was inferior because they cut a lot of the violence out and replaced it with that annoying robot! So, naturally, many of the jokes you will hear come from this version of the show.
Springie: That altered drawing of Joe is terrifying! I like the muppets, though. You look good as a muppet.
EW: I can totally see Jinpei doing that.
KT: I loved seeing our three threatening the other three.
TJ: Poor Jason! Why did he have to go down there? Are Zark and Susan so inappropriate that someone has to interrupt them daily? Eww.
OK, this is cheating a bit because it doesn't quite fit Redbird's prompt and it's actually the middle chunk of something larger that I'm working on. But I thought I'd throw it out here anyway.
Word of warning - this is deep into one of my AUs.
***
Light.
That's the first thing I noticed after my second implant surgery and I was so relieved. Even through closed eyelids, I could still perceive light.
I cracked open my eyes. I was in a Center Neptune recovery room, all white walls and lumpy furniture, with one of my arms tethered to an IV pole. Someone was in the room with me. I registered red shirt and striped pants about the same time that Princess walked over to me.
"Jason?" She reached for my free hand. "How are you feeling?"
Like a train ran over me. "Fine."
She laughed. "Of course you are. I'll go get the Chief and let him know that you're awake." As soon as she turned away, I clutched her hand tightly and refused to let go.
"Jason?" This time, I heard the tension in her voice. Had I been able to see her clearly, I would have seen the crinkle between her brows that she gets when she's overly concerned. "Is something wrong?" I heard a click as she pressed the faceplate of her bracelet to summon the Chief. At least some of my senses were still working correctly.
I started to shake my head no, a motion that I instantly regretted as a wave of nausea shot through me. Finding my voice, I said aloud, "No. I just ..." My voice caught and I couldn't bring myself to finish the sentence. ... can't see you.
When it comes to me, Princess is even more intuitive than Mark. She scooted the guest chair closer and sat back down at my side. I gestured at her and she used the crank on the hospital bed to maneuver me into a sitting position. With her seated so close to me, I could finally focus on her face. I smiled and sighed; she grabbed my hand and squeezed it.
I heard the Chief in the hall before I saw him. It was quite a sensory juxtaposition: this severely blurry world with overly distinct sounds. If anything, my hearing was even more acute now than it had been before this latest surgery. It gave me an idea of just how overloaded my implant had been before.
"Jason." I couldn't read the Chief's expression, so I tried to focus on his tone of voice. Did I catch a hint of worry in there?
Princess moved out of his way, and the Chief sat down on my bed and used a pen light to peer into my eyes. "How do things look?" When I didn't immediately answer, he stood up and told me to cover my left eye with one hand. "How many fingers am I holding up?"
"Two," I replied.
"And here?" he said, from further away.
"Four," I said, less sure than before.
"How about now?"
"One?" It was a complete guess.
"Good. Let's try your other eye." I know my left eye is markedly weaker than my right, so I shouldn't have been surprised when I couldn't answer past the Chief's first question. But the realization still made my stomach hurt.
"Jason, you're doing great." I could hear relief in the Chief's voice; I knew he meant what he said.
How can this be great? I wondered. Best case scenario, you correct this mess with glasses. All Spectra has to do is remove my helmet and I'll be completely incapacitated.
"I'd like to wait a few days before fitting you with new glasses. I expect that we'll see significant improvement in your vision over that time."
I wanted to argue with him - Days? You're leaving me like this for days? - but I was starting to feel queasy. The Chief must have seen the sour expression cross my face because I heard a touch of concern as he asked, "How are you feeling otherwise?" There was a clatter as he picked up my chart and flipped through the pages. "Would you like something to eat?" He unhooked my IV line, leaving me with a port on my wrist.
"Nauseous. Maybe some jell-O?" I managed.
"I'll give you something now for the nausea," he said, injecting a syringe into my port. "How's your pain level?"
I started to shake my head no, then stopped. "Fine, if I sit still."
The Chief nodded, his blurry head moving up and down. "Good. We'll keep you on the same regimen for now and step you down off the painkillers over the next couple of days. I'm suspect that's what's causing your nausea." He gently moved my head to check the incision. "The good news is, your implant appears to be working at maximum capacity now. You should bounce back quickly from this."
And I'll never see well again.
***
EW: I can totally see Jinpei doing that.
KT: I loved seeing our three threatening the other three.
TJ: Poor Jason! Why did he have to go down there? Are Zark and Susan so inappropriate that someone has to interrupt them daily? Eww.
Word of warning - this is deep into one of my AUs.
***
Light.
That's the first thing I noticed after my second implant surgery and I was so relieved. Even through closed eyelids, I could still perceive light.
I cracked open my eyes. I was in a Center Neptune recovery room, all white walls and lumpy furniture, with one of my arms tethered to an IV pole. Someone was in the room with me. I registered red shirt and striped pants about the same time that Princess walked over to me.
"Jason?" She reached for my free hand. "How are you feeling?"
Like a train ran over me. "Fine."
She laughed. "Of course you are. I'll go get the Chief and let him know that you're awake." As soon as she turned away, I clutched her hand tightly and refused to let go.
"Jason?" This time, I heard the tension in her voice. Had I been able to see her clearly, I would have seen the crinkle between her brows that she gets when she's overly concerned. "Is something wrong?" I heard a click as she pressed the faceplate of her bracelet to summon the Chief. At least some of my senses were still working correctly.
I started to shake my head no, a motion that I instantly regretted as a wave of nausea shot through me. Finding my voice, I said aloud, "No. I just ..." My voice caught and I couldn't bring myself to finish the sentence. ... can't see you.
When it comes to me, Princess is even more intuitive than Mark. She scooted the guest chair closer and sat back down at my side. I gestured at her and she used the crank on the hospital bed to maneuver me into a sitting position. With her seated so close to me, I could finally focus on her face. I smiled and sighed; she grabbed my hand and squeezed it.
I heard the Chief in the hall before I saw him. It was quite a sensory juxtaposition: this severely blurry world with overly distinct sounds. If anything, my hearing was even more acute now than it had been before this latest surgery. It gave me an idea of just how overloaded my implant had been before.
"Jason." I couldn't read the Chief's expression, so I tried to focus on his tone of voice. Did I catch a hint of worry in there?
Princess moved out of his way, and the Chief sat down on my bed and used a pen light to peer into my eyes. "How do things look?" When I didn't immediately answer, he stood up and told me to cover my left eye with one hand. "How many fingers am I holding up?"
"Two," I replied.
"And here?" he said, from further away.
"Four," I said, less sure than before.
"How about now?"
"One?" It was a complete guess.
"Good. Let's try your other eye." I know my left eye is markedly weaker than my right, so I shouldn't have been surprised when I couldn't answer past the Chief's first question. But the realization still made my stomach hurt.
"Jason, you're doing great." I could hear relief in the Chief's voice; I knew he meant what he said.
How can this be great? I wondered. Best case scenario, you correct this mess with glasses. All Spectra has to do is remove my helmet and I'll be completely incapacitated.
"I'd like to wait a few days before fitting you with new glasses. I expect that we'll see significant improvement in your vision over that time."
I wanted to argue with him - Days? You're leaving me like this for days? - but I was starting to feel queasy. The Chief must have seen the sour expression cross my face because I heard a touch of concern as he asked, "How are you feeling otherwise?" There was a clatter as he picked up my chart and flipped through the pages. "Would you like something to eat?" He unhooked my IV line, leaving me with a port on my wrist.
"Nauseous. Maybe some jell-O?" I managed.
"I'll give you something now for the nausea," he said, injecting a syringe into my port. "How's your pain level?"
I started to shake my head no, then stopped. "Fine, if I sit still."
The Chief nodded, his blurry head moving up and down. "Good. We'll keep you on the same regimen for now and step you down off the painkillers over the next couple of days. I'm suspect that's what's causing your nausea." He gently moved my head to check the incision. "The good news is, your implant appears to be working at maximum capacity now. You should bounce back quickly from this."
And I'll never see well again.
***
Poor Jason...glad he has Princess watching out for him. She makes a good nurse!
Oooh, I'd definitely like to see more of this Jublke! And a hospital bed with a crank! You'd think if they were putting implants in people's heads that at least the hospital would have a more modern bed! LOL.
Poor Jason. I have an astigmatism, so everything is blurry without glasses or contacts. (Which is really fun when I get migraines--can't stand to wear either--guess I really am a "Condor"! *laughs* ). I hate wearing either, so I can sympathize.
So, they're going to wait to see how much the implant helps his vision to stabilize, and then correct what's "leftover" with glasses? Hopefully Jason's recovery won't be as bad he thinks...
Transmute Jun
Queen of the Bird Missiles
posted 15 Apr 2014 07:15
Jublke, is this the story of how Jason got his glasses?
As for mine, I was thinking that the team took turns to visit Zark in his ready room to make him feel 'important'. Jason's visit just happened to be at the *wrong* time.
Hi TJ: This is part of that same line of stories. Poor guy. I gave him glasses a few stories back in that AU (and Springie gave me my avatar pic). Now, he just needs stronger ones. When I was 9 years old watching Strike at Spectra, I was convinced that Jason needed glasses. As an adult, I figured that wasn't enough to explain all of his health problems, so I added a malfunctioning implant to the mix.
I am relieved to hear that no one has to break up Zark and Susan on a regular basis, although quite frankly, it would probably be a good idea if someone did!
Redbird: Oh dear. You make a good point about the hospital bed. I will have to fix that! This AU of mine can be found here at Gatchfanfic: http://www.gatchfanfic.com/viewseries.php?seriesid=121
Thank you for the link jublke! I think I read most of them already (but it was awhile back). I need to re-read them and leave reviews!
Becky Rock
Gatchamaniac
posted 19 Apr 2014 18:55
Julie, I'm glad to see this posted. I remember betaing it for you a while back. Sorry I missed the part about the bed.
Waking up like that would be horrible. If I didn't have my glasses there's no way I'd be able to drive.
Becky, someday I am going to put all of your comments to good use. I promise!!
Becky Rock
Gatchamaniac
posted 20 Apr 2014 12:07
I look forward to your posting all of it when you're finished.
I think losing your sight is a major fear for everyone. Jason is the marksman. It's kind of hard you hit your target if you can't see it clearly.
Springie: AAAAAAUGH!!! I'M GONNA HAVE NIGHTMARES ... the muppet team is very cute, though
EW: LOL, somehow I can see that happening
KT: Maybe those boys wised up after that little encounter, always afraid of those steely eyes watching them ...
TJ: I've always found Ken in those sunglasses sexy
and OMG, poor Jason!!!!!! Forget combat PTSD, he's gonna need therapy for life
rachel: I'm glad the others saved you from your imagination!!!!
jublke: Poor Jason, that really would be terrifying (glad to see you around!)
EW: LOL, somehow I can see that happening
KT: Maybe those boys wised up after that little encounter, always afraid of those steely eyes watching them ...
TJ: I've always found Ken in those sunglasses sexy
and OMG, poor Jason!!!!!! Forget combat PTSD, he's gonna need therapy for life
rachel: I'm glad the others saved you from your imagination!!!!
jublke: Poor Jason, that really would be terrifying (glad to see you around!)
I titled this bit: "Flying Blind".
I always find Jun a little difficult to write, but I had fun writing this piece. There's a little bit more that comes after it that I might expand on as well.
Hope you enjoy.
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"Are the charges set?" Joe asked quietly, while hunched down in the service passage about 20 feet away from her. He held his gun at the ready, in case the goons had smartened up enough to actually think of looking for them in there.
He watched as she finished calibrating the last charge, her nimble fingers flying as they made short work of the tangle of wires and connections. Jun shifted over a bit and glanced through the air vent set in the wall, checking for signs of any Galactor soldiers and finding none.
"Yes, they're all in place." she replied. "Let me know when you're ready for me to set the tim.....
She never got to finish her sentence for the charge set on the wall down the corridor, the one Joe had been right in front of, suddenly went off.
A mini fireball erupted from the wall, where a hole had been blown, and the concussive force had thrown Joe across the corridor, slamming him into the opposite wall.
Jun didn't know when she screamed his name, only knew that she was doing so. The corridor filled with smoke, and an alarm began to beep. They were abruptly left in the dark , but after a moment or two she could hear a faint whir of machinery, and the emergency lights flickered up, bathing them in red.
Staying close to the floor, she quickly crawled across the cramped space, being careful in trying to not to touch the still smoldering wall panel.
The smoke was getting thicker. She covered her mouth and coughed. Stretching out and feeling tentatively with her hands, she knew she found him when her hand closed over a roughened, hard leather boot.
Cautiously, she crept closer to him, shouting his name over the sound of the alarm.
He wasn't responding.
Trying to contain the panic rising within her, Jun managed to find his head, fingers brushing against his helmet and slid a hand inside the form fitting dark blue cowl that covered his neck.
Thank God! He still had a pulse, but he was as still as ....
No! She wouldn't think it, couldn't think it!
"Joe!? Joe!"she cried, trying to rouse his prone form, shaking him.
It was then that she heard the noise.
Heart racing frantically, she cocked her head, listening, trying to filter out the multiple background noises. She heard the shouts of guards, muffled, but seemingly coming from the floor below her. They needed to move out and fast.
"Come on Condor!" she shouted at him, shaking him roughly once more. "Get up!"
Eyes burning against the smoke, she managed to pull him into a half sitting position. His head lolled against hers, and when her hand lifted to steady it, she felt it. It was small, but there.
The back of his helmet had cracked from the force of being thrown by the blast.
"On your feet!"
Finally, there came a pained, low groan close to her ear.
"Joe? Joe wake up! We have to go NOW..."
He sagged bonelessly against her.
"Jun...." Another groan. "Jun what happened..." he asked groggily, weakly trying to raise a hand, letting it fall back beside him. The action of speaking set him off into a paroxysm of coughing, smoke irritating his lungs.
She levered his arm around her neck and clamped an arm about his shoulders, trying to stand.
God, he was so heavy!
"Come on Joe...."
She faintly heard him saying something, talking to her. It was only after she concentrated, focusing in that she heard his voice whisper:
"Jun...Jun I... can't...see..."
Redbird: Yikes ... would definitely like to see more of this!
Transmute Jun
Queen of the Bird Missiles
posted 7 Sep 2014 13:53
Redbird, way to ratchet up the drama! Why did the explosion go off? Was it Jun's fault in mis-setting the explosives/timers? Either way, she's going to be bearing a huge burden of guilt...
Ack! What a cliffhanger! I'd love to know more! Will poor Joe stay blind? I'm wondering if it's Jun's fault, too, or if it was faulty equipment. Oh, the angst!
Thank you! Glad you all seemed to like it!
Have some ideas for the next installment and have started writing it, but there are other things on my plate at the moment too. Hopefully I'll get done in due time.
Stay tuned!
Have some ideas for the next installment and have started writing it, but there are other things on my plate at the moment too. Hopefully I'll get done in due time.
Stay tuned!
Redbird: Great cliffhanger! Why do bad things always happen to the Condor?
Thanks jublke! Good to see you here. Joe seems to be a magnet for such problems.
Becky Rock
Gatchamaniac
posted 27 Sep 2014 17:24
That was hair raising, RB. G-2, whether Joe or Jason, are easy to abuse because in the end, we all know they'll bounce back.
Becky Rock
Gatchamaniac
posted 27 Sep 2014 17:29
This is an add to the end of my Ultimate Bradbury Jar post that just came to me as I'm sort of an watching the Notre Dame football game.
Jason started settling in to watch the Notre Dame and Purdue football game when the camera man zeroed in on the Notre Dame defensive line. The strong stadium lights
reflected off the real gold painted helmets. The reflection was blinding even on TV.
"Ah, my eyes!" Jason grumbled half playfully. Those helmets could easily blind the opposition and should be outlawed, he thought.
Sorry it's been awhile since I posted more on this, not sure where else to put it either, so it might as well stay here.
Hope you enjoy....
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Flying Blind (Chapter/Part Two)
JUN:
She never thought she would ever hear such words from one of their own before. And hoped she never heard them again. She swallowed, her eyes closing briefly at the memory.
"Jun...Jun I... can't...see..."
There had been no way she could have managed to carry Joe out, she could barely hold him up. So, her heart hammering and full of panic, she had resorted to calling Ken for help. The lump in her throat was choking her. She was lucky she had been able to ping the God Phoenix, for the communications were being jammed and she had trouble getting a signal through. If she had been unable to raise comms and unable to escape....
Jun leaned back in her chair, gritting her teeth, as Ryu piloted the God Phoenix through turbulence.
Jinpei shot her a look when they arrived on board, rising to his feet, immediate questions in his brown eyes. His face pallid from the shock of seeing his "indestructible" Joe-aniki, laid low. Sometimes she forgot how young he really was.
He wanted to accompany them into the MedBay, but Ken barked a terse order for him to stay put on the bridge with Ryu. As they entered the bridge their stalwart pilot had cast a look over his shoulder managing to quickly mask his surprised reaction at the picture they presented. His eyes met Ken's, a silent message passing between the two, before turning back to his instruments.
"Hey Jinpei, double check those wind speed readings for me would ya? Thanks pal."
Ken:
He never wanted to experience another day like this one. Their mission had been a total failure. In every possible way.
While Jun and Joe had infiltrated the mecha, they were unable to find any evidence of the new device of mass destruction that Galactor was rumored to have. And if there was evidence, more than likely it went up in smoke with the mecha.
More important to him and even worse was that, according to Jun, Joe had been blinded by the premature ignition of one of Jun's bombs. They had no idea of knowing if it was something
permanent or not until they reached the Crescent Coral Base.
At first he thought he misheard Jun. Their comms had been full of static, presumably due to Galactor jamming their frequencies. When she said that Joe had been injured and that they needed help, a leaden weight settled deep within his gut.
"What? Jun I can't...hear you... I repeat what happened?"
"It... Joe! Hurt...K...."
He hadn't known what to expect when he infiltrated the flaming mecha, only that he had very little time to locate and extract his teammates. Jun hadn't said a word about what had happened, that alone filled him with trepidation. Never had he expected this. That Joe had broken a few ribs or had taken hit by laser fire or a bullet or two, yes. But nothing so bad that she needed help in moving him. Something else had to be going on.
Entering the mecha had been like walking through hell. Walls of fire, thick black smoke and multiple alarms droning in the background. The stench of burning plastic and scorched metal burned his nose. Shouts of the Galactor soldiers could be heard faintly above the din. The emergency lights painted the hallways in red. But even they sputtered, flickering on and off, and at moments completely out, evidence that the entire grid system was failing. There wasn't much time left.
Thank God, their visors had bio filters built into them.
They were midlevel, in a service passage toward the port side of the mecha. When he found them, they were hunched over and huddled together. Jun, her arm around Joe's shoulder, his head slumped against the wall. From his vantage point, Ken could see he seared some of the skin on his face, along his jaw line and cheek.
Jun, her white birdstyle now the color of dark smoke and spotted with soot, lifted her head, catching a glimpse of his white wings through the flames.
She called out his name with such relief, he thought she was going to cry. As it was, he thought he saw tear tracks on her face. Their path cutting a clean line down her dirty cheeks. But there was no time for tears of any kind, they needed to move. Or it was game over.
Bracing his hand against the wall on the other side of Joe, Ken knelt down with them.
"Joe? Joe!" he shouted, hand on his second's shoulder, shaking him lightly. "Can you stand?"
His only answer was a low, pained moan.
Mouth pressed in a grim line, Ken glanced at Jun. "Are you alright?"
She nodded frantically, hand covering her mouth and trying not to cough.
"Help me get him up." he told her.
Her arm wound tightly about him, she carefully braced her shoulder under his armpit and rose on shaking legs, as Ken levered the Condor up from the other side.
Together they managed to get him upright. Jun while holding Joe steady, watched as Ken dipped low, hefting him into a fireman's carry.
No sooner had he straightened up, when they were suddenly thrown across the corridor, as an explosion from deeper within the mecha rocked the structure. Ken quickly twisted his body to prevent Joe's head from smacking into the wall. Smaller, weaker temblors could be felt beneath their feet and an ominous creaking sound echoed in the distance.
Ken and Jun 's eyes met, shooting each other a look that spoke volumes.
"The exit is up ahead! "Ken shouted, adjusting Joe's weight across his shoulders. "I'll follow! Ping Ryu for a pickup! Hurry Jun this is gonna be close!"
Redbird: Oooh, intense! I like the rotating POV, any of them getting hurt has to be hell for the rest of them.
ElectricWhite
Gatchamaniac
posted 25 Jul 2015 19:38
Whoa! This was worth the wait, RB! Now, if I can just hold on until the next installment....
Thanbks for continuing this RB, it's certainly keeping us gripped. Looking forward to the next part.
Originally posted by ElectricWhite Whoa! This was worth the wait, RB! Now, if I can just hold on until the next installment....
Originally posted by KT1972 Thanbks for continuing this RB, it's certainly keeping us gripped. Looking forward to the next part.Have parts of the story written, but hopefully it won't take me another 8 months or so to get the next chapter up!
RB, okay, now I'm going to poke you too. Where is that pokey stick?
ElectricWhite
Gatchamaniac
posted 17 Sep 2015 16:59
Originally posted by jublke RB, okay, now I'm going to poke you too. Where is that pokey stick?It's : poke : (minus the spaces).
Hi Jublke! Great to see you back!
I'm still working on the next part. It's coming together very slowly unfortunately.....
I'm still working on the next part. It's coming together very slowly unfortunately.....
Ok here we go with Chapter 3, it's not too long but hopefully Chapter 4 will follow soon. Not BETA'd or anything, grammar certainly sucks. LOL. But I hope you enjoy it.
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"Flying Blind"- Chapter 3
Ken:
He stared blankly at the grey walls of the debriefing room, lost in his thoughts, not even noticing his own teammates sitting next to him. Not noticing how they peered at him, their own faces lined with concern as they waited in silence.
They had gotten Joe stabilized in the MedBay, strapped onto a table for his own safety in case of a rough descent. If Joe being blind wasn't bad enough, the crack in Joe's helmet also concerned him. Head injuries could be notoriously difficult to diagnose, and he had no way to know what they were really dealing with. Jun had set up an oxygen line, but Ken had decided against administering a sedative or any kind of pain management, for fear of making things worse.
Joe had been cognizant as they were buckling him down, and had grit his teeth and nodded briefly when Ken asked him if he could handle the pain until docking.
He didn't know how Ryu managed to make it back to the Crescent Coral Base so quickly, but he was betting his pilot was breaking some kind of ISO protocols in doing so. As the hangar drained, they could see the medical team that had been waiting for them, poised upon the catwalks above the ship, beginning to descend toward the God Phoenix. There was a veritable army of doctors and techs in white lab coats waiting on the periphery, while a select few rolled a metal gurney toward a platform that lead to the ship's bubble dome. Bringing up the rear was Nambu Hakase, looking stern as ever but his eyes touched with a hint of worry.
He had glanced at Ken, telling him to have everyone report to the debriefing room and to wait there until he returned.
And there they had stayed.
Ken glanced briefly at the clock on the wall to his left. How long had they been waiting already? 20 minutes? An hour?
A bubbling gurgling sound; a growling stomach, came from the far side of the table. He could hear Ryu saying something to Jinpei, and heard the rustle of black wings as the youngster crossed his arms over his middle, whispering "sorry" in a low toned voice.
To his right, he heard Jun make a noise as if she were going to speak, and as he turned his head toward her, the door in front of them slid open with a hiss. Four sets of eyes flew to the doorway, to see the grim figure of Nambu Hakase carrying a clipboard and what looked like a medical file. He paused briefly before striding into the room and taking a seat across from them. The doctor flipped open the file, rifling through its pages, studying it, before glancing up at them. His eyes touched upon each one of them individually, before coming to rest almost thoughtfully on Jun, but then moved on to lock eyes with the Eagle.
"Doctor, " Ryu said, voice cracking a bit on the last syllable of the word. "How's Joe? What..."
"Is he gonna be okay Hakase?" Jinpei blurted out impatiently, worrying his lower lip between his teeth.
The doctor carefully gathered his papers back into a neat sheath, tapping the ends into place against the laminate table, and lay his hands across them, fingers laced together.
"I know you're all concerned about Joe, so this one time we're going to break with protocol. I can give you his general status before we begin debrief. Please note due to the incident that happened today, you all will be debriefed individually first, then as a team, after which you will all meet back here with me once more."
Jun nodded her head silently, staring at her hands folded in her lap, while Jinpei uttered a quiet "ok".
"Right now, Joe is still undergoing preliminary testing, but as it stands it seems he has indeed lost his vision, as to what damage he has sustained, or what can be done to alleviate or correct the issue has not yet been determined. But rest assured, he will receive the best possible care that the ISO can provide." He paused, mouth set in a harsh line and again his eyes pinned each one of them to their seats. "I want to make sure that all of you realize just how grave this situation is. Your teammate has been blinded. This action seriously jeopardizes the work the ISO has done, not to mention the time and resources they have put into training you, as well as the work that you, as a team are expected to do. Director Anderson was not pleased to hear what transpired today and this incident has given him pause to consider just how dedicated all of you are to your mission, and if perhaps it's time to reconsider your positions here within the organization."
"Are you sayin' what I think you're sayin' doc?" Ryu asked
incredulously, eyes widened in shock.
"That you can be replaced? Yes, I'm afraid so."
Eep! I'm still processing this one... don't leave us hanging!
Transmute Jun
Queen of the Bird Missiles
posted 15 Dec 2015 06:32
And with whom will they be replaced?
Cue up Mark, Jason, Princess, Keyop and Tiny!
Thanks for reading everyone! Comments are always appreciated. It's been slow going overall, but hopefully I will have more in the near future!
Next chapter! Hope you enjoy.
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"Flying Blind"- Chapter 4
Ken's blue eyes met the doctors brown ones, while in the background he dimly heard Jinpei shouting "You can't do that! You can't!". He saw a flash of white in his peripheral vision, as Jun tried to pull him back down into his seat, all the while Ryu muttered for him to shut up, just shut up.
Hakase Nambu sighed and tossed his glasses onto the table, rubbing his face with both hands.
"Haksase...."Ken began gravely. "With all due respect, is this something the ISO is seriously considering?"
He looked up at Ken, eyes bloodshot. They could all tell the last few hours had been trying for their mentor.
"It's been put onto the table for discussion....".
Jinpei began shouting again, Ryu stood from his chair and began pacing, biting his thumbnail. Jun tried without fail, to calm Jinpei down but was unsuccessful.
The doctor banged his fist on the table, his glasses jumping with the impact. The noise bringing their bickering to a halt.
"Would you all listen!" he shouted, glancing around the table. "Yes, it's been brought up, however, I will do everything in my power to make sure that doesn't happen. I've known the board members for a long time, worked with these people for many years and I aim to do my best to persuade them to be more patient and understand the significant danger that you go up against each time you head out on a mission. "
"Hakase," Ken continued quietly. "We would do anything to win back their trust. I have full faith in each one of my team members, and they feel the same. Whatever you need us to do, we'll do it and exceed your expectations."
"Please know, I don't doubt your sincerity. That isn't the issue. But after the last few missions, and the problems related to them, you have to start bringing more to the table." he paused a moment, letting the words sink in. "We need to cooperate with one another, work better with one another and I'm not just referring to your team dynamics, but the other ISO staff as well. We're here to help you work toward our common goal; a world free of Galactor."
"I understand, Hakase."Ken replied grimly. "We won't let you down."
The doctor nodded, and reached for his glasses, putting them on once more. Somehow, with his glasses back on, he looked more composed. More in control.
He cleared his throat. "Now, G3, G4 and G5, you will be escorted to separate holding rooms, while I debrief G1. While you're waiting, you'll receive a once over by medical staff to check for hidden injuries and other medical issues. When we're finished here, the rest of you will be called individually, in random order, after which you will be released back to your quarters to write your official reports. Please remember, as per ISO regulation they are due tomorrow at 08:00 hours. "
He rose and strode to the door, allowing it to slide open and motioning for someone to enter. There was a scrape of boots on the tile floor and three ISO guards stood in the doorway, waiting to escort the rest of the team to their respective rooms, until they would be questioned.
Ken nodded slightly at his team, indicating they should leave. He watched them file out, one by one being led away by the ISO facility guards. He wouldn't be able to speak with them until everyone was finished.
Hakaske Nambu took his seat once more and opened a new file. He pinned Ken with a look and pressed a button on the table that would begin recording.
"Alright, G1. Are you ready to begin debrief?"
Ken squared his shoulders. "Yes, Hakase. I am."
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"Flying Blind"- Chapter 4
Ken's blue eyes met the doctors brown ones, while in the background he dimly heard Jinpei shouting "You can't do that! You can't!". He saw a flash of white in his peripheral vision, as Jun tried to pull him back down into his seat, all the while Ryu muttered for him to shut up, just shut up.
Hakase Nambu sighed and tossed his glasses onto the table, rubbing his face with both hands.
"Haksase...."Ken began gravely. "With all due respect, is this something the ISO is seriously considering?"
He looked up at Ken, eyes bloodshot. They could all tell the last few hours had been trying for their mentor.
"It's been put onto the table for discussion....".
Jinpei began shouting again, Ryu stood from his chair and began pacing, biting his thumbnail. Jun tried without fail, to calm Jinpei down but was unsuccessful.
The doctor banged his fist on the table, his glasses jumping with the impact. The noise bringing their bickering to a halt.
"Would you all listen!" he shouted, glancing around the table. "Yes, it's been brought up, however, I will do everything in my power to make sure that doesn't happen. I've known the board members for a long time, worked with these people for many years and I aim to do my best to persuade them to be more patient and understand the significant danger that you go up against each time you head out on a mission. "
"Hakase," Ken continued quietly. "We would do anything to win back their trust. I have full faith in each one of my team members, and they feel the same. Whatever you need us to do, we'll do it and exceed your expectations."
"Please know, I don't doubt your sincerity. That isn't the issue. But after the last few missions, and the problems related to them, you have to start bringing more to the table." he paused a moment, letting the words sink in. "We need to cooperate with one another, work better with one another and I'm not just referring to your team dynamics, but the other ISO staff as well. We're here to help you work toward our common goal; a world free of Galactor."
"I understand, Hakase."Ken replied grimly. "We won't let you down."
The doctor nodded, and reached for his glasses, putting them on once more. Somehow, with his glasses back on, he looked more composed. More in control.
He cleared his throat. "Now, G3, G4 and G5, you will be escorted to separate holding rooms, while I debrief G1. While you're waiting, you'll receive a once over by medical staff to check for hidden injuries and other medical issues. When we're finished here, the rest of you will be called individually, in random order, after which you will be released back to your quarters to write your official reports. Please remember, as per ISO regulation they are due tomorrow at 08:00 hours. "
He rose and strode to the door, allowing it to slide open and motioning for someone to enter. There was a scrape of boots on the tile floor and three ISO guards stood in the doorway, waiting to escort the rest of the team to their respective rooms, until they would be questioned.
Ken nodded slightly at his team, indicating they should leave. He watched them file out, one by one being led away by the ISO facility guards. He wouldn't be able to speak with them until everyone was finished.
Hakaske Nambu took his seat once more and opened a new file. He pinned Ken with a look and pressed a button on the table that would begin recording.
"Alright, G1. Are you ready to begin debrief?"
Ken squared his shoulders. "Yes, Hakase. I am."
*****
The next morning they all met in the hallway outside Nambu Hakase's office at 07:30 hours to turn in their reports.
Jinpei's hair stood out in all directions and he kept rubbing his eyes, sleepily. Ryu didn't look any better, for the big man had dark circles beneath his eyes and he kept yawning his head off. Ken's face was drawn, and paler than usual. Only Jun looked refreshed and well rested as she leaned against the wall next to the door. Her hair shiny and her makeup perfectly applied.
"Alright, "Ken began, looking about them, making sure the hallway was clear. "Before Hakase gets here, I want to have a quick word with you all."
Ryu nodded, stifling a yawn with the back of his hand.
"I need to ask you again: Jun, did you do anything different when you wired those charges? Notice anything off about the detonators that might have caused them to malfunction?"
She shook her head, lips pressed tightly together. "I did everything by the book as usual. It was a simple set up. Six plasma charges. Deferred timer. They were daisy chained to go off in sequence."
"Ryu --did you look at the flight data recordings from the mission? Nambu was sending techs to download the mission stats yesterday. Do you remember anything strange, getting any out of the ordinary readings? Anything?"
"The only thing I picked up on was Galactor trying to jam our comm frequencies, which isn't something unusual." The pilot lifted his shoulder in a shrug."It happens almost every mission."
"Jinpei, what about you little dude? Did you come across any weird readings? Did your sensors record anything wacky?"
"Nuh-uh aniki. It's like I said before, everything was normal...."
Their conversation was interrupted by the sound of footsteps coming from down the hall. The footsteps of Nambu Hakase. The doctors' eyebrow shot up, surprised to see them all waiting outside his office well before the 08:00 hour.
Ken straightened up and cleared his throat. "Good morning, Hakase."
A small smile formed on the doctors' lips, as he strode down the passageway toward them, briefcase in one hand, coffee in the other.
"Good morning, team." He juggled his briefcase a moment, before entering his passcode and pressing his hand against the palm reader by the door. "I'm glad you're all here. It saves me the trouble of tracking you down."
The door slid open with a soft huff of air, and the lights flickered on as he entered the office, beckoning them to follow him in.
"Please, " he motioned with his hand, as he set his coffee down and popped opened his briefcase. "Sit down."
The four young people glanced at one another before finding seats. Jun and Jinpei together on the small couch against the wall, Ken and Ryu in the hard chairs in front of the doctor's desk.
"What is it Hakase?" Jun asked, voice laced with worry, as she slung an arm around Jinpei's shoulder.
"I need to speak with you about Joe."
Eek! Hakase seems in a slightly better mood the next morning, I hope his news is good!
oh, boy.... waiting eagerly to read more...
Transmute Jun
Queen of the Bird Missiles
posted 14 Jan 2016 09:20
Waiting to hear about Joe...
ElectricWhite
Gatchamaniac
posted 14 Jan 2016 20:21
Originally posted by mylari oh, boy.... waiting eagerly to read more...
Originally posted by Transmute Jun Waiting to hear about Joe...Methinks there is an implied
Eep! They might be replaced? I agree with Chris' comment above, that was harsh. I hope there's good news about Joe ...
Ok here's the next bit:
Hope you enjoy reading it!
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Flying Blind Chapter 5
"We have a problem," Nambu told them removing his glasses for a moment to clean them, then replacing them. "The doctor's aren't totally sure when Joe can return to active duty. "
Gasps and curses filled the room, but Ken was silent, waiting for the doctor to explain.
"Joe has sustained damage to his optic nerves, as well as his retinas. He also has a concussion. There are a few variables involved and he will recover, with time, but until then you're down one man. Most importantly your gunner, the best shot on the team--is lost to us right now."
He looked at each one of them in turn, taking in their serious faces.
"I don't think I need to tell you that everyone needs to work extra hard to fill that spot until Joe is able to return. This is going to be a trying time to say the least. And I expect all of you to ramp up your training in areas you're deficient in."
"You know Joe will be the holy terror of the med ward." Ken stated bluntly.
He just couldn't imagine it himself. A Condor who couldn't see? Heaven help the doctors and nurses.
"I know....!" Jinpei quipped brightly, snapping his fingers together. "Maybe they can drug him until he's healed!"
"That's not helpful Jinpei." Jun scolded him, her arms crossed over her chest in a very Condor-like pose.
"They're not keeping him bed ridden indefinitely, nor placing him in a medically induced coma." Hakase informed them, glancing briefly at the youngest member of the team. "Joe will be held a while for observation and if his condition remains stable, then most likely they'll send him back to his quarters to recuperate."
"What?" Ryu exclaimed, brown eyes wide. "How can they do that? He can't even see!"
The doctor smiled, a wry grin. "Everyone in the med ward is well aware of the kind of patient Joe is. After lengthy discussion with his medical team, they feel he'll benefit from being in familiar surroundings."
"So..." Ken questioned thoughtfully."What do they expect him to do all day? Just sit there while we're out fighting Galactor? You know Joe won't cooperate with that."
"I'll say...." Jun muttered under her breath and flashing him a look.
"Yes, those are my thoughts as well. Which is why, his condition permitting, Joe will continue to train here at the base while the rest of you are out in the field."
"But Nambu Hakase, what can Joe-aniki possibly do if he can't see?" Jinpei asked, with a frown, truthfully not understanding.
"I'm disappointed in you Jinpei. As a Science Ninja, you should know that sight is only one of many senses and tools that humans possess."
Sensing Jinpei's embarrassment, Ryu quickly jumped in trying to change the subject. "Yeah Jinpei, Joe can still work out with us. Right doctor? There's always the weight room." He reached out and ruffled the kids' hair. "We can help him...."
"Absolutely. I wouldn't expect anything else from you, as a team."
"Joe's not just our teammate Hakase, he's our brother and friend." Ken told him rising from his seat, hands balled into fists. "We'll do whatever we can to make sure he's back with us as soon as possible."
The doctor nodded tapping his pen on his desk. "That is all for now. You're dismissed for the time being. Ken...please stay a moment. I need to discuss a few things with you."
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It was around 45 minutes later when the door to the doctor's
office opened, and Ken walked out. To his surprise he can see Jun lingering further down the hallway by the supply closet. Apparently she had been waiting for him.
"Ken," she asked softly, inclining her head. "Do you have a few minutes?"
He nodded and leaned back against the wall, muscles playing against the t-shirt stretched taught against his chest.
She tucked a strand of hair behind her ear, the lights reflecting off it, giving it a green cast.
"I understand your giving a speech in front of Hakase, but do you really think Joe will accept our help?"
There was a doubtful tone in her voice.
"I don't know Jun. You know how hardheaded Joe can be. But the fact is we NEED him on the team so it doesn't matter whether he wants our help or not."
He paused a moment, gaze cast downward towards the floor. "At least we can still perform the firebird ............"
It was their weapon of last resort. The hardest hitting weapon in their arsenal, but one they had to exercise caution in using.
"There is that." Jun agreed quietly, her voice sounding strained. "Assuming we can keep Joe from trying to take the G2..."
"I thought of that." Ken replied grimly. "I wouldn't put it past him to try, but I've already spoken with Hakase about it. He's going to have a few words with the security personnel in general , as well as with the guards in the hangar bay."
He secretly hoped it would be enough, but he wasn't counting on it. Once Joe decided to put his mind to something, there was no going back.
Ken looked up at her, eyes carefully searching her face.
"What's wrong?"
She shook her head, ends of her hair brushing her shoulders lightly.
"Jun, is there something I need to know?"
There was the sound of an indrawn breath through her nose.
"I ...can't help but feel....."she paused, trying to swallow the lump in her throat, as she looked anywhere but at him. "That this.... is
all my fault..."
Tears welled up in her eyes, and she covered her face with her hand.
Ken cleared his throat uncomfortably. He closed the gap between them and placed his hands on her shoulders.
"No one thinks that way, except for yourself, Jun." He shook her lightly, adding emphasis to his words. "We've been over this before...."
"I know...!"
She only cried harder, snuffling under her hand and shaking her head.
"I can't help it Ken..."
She wiped briefly at her bloodshot eyes.
"What if...what if Joe..." she began helplessly.
"Don't say it Jun..." Ken told her, voice almost a whisper. Half warning, half pleading with her.
"I have to to Ken!"she sobbed. "Because no one else has said it! What if Joe never recovers his eyesight!?'
He set his jaw. "The doctor said there was a good chance he'll make a full recovery! He just needs time Jun!"
"What if they're wrong?!" Jun snapped. "What about
that?"
Abruptly she shoved his hands off her shoulders, but he grabbed her arm firmly, fingers biting into the flesh of her bicep.
A retort bubbled up to her lips, then died as she was taken aback at the blue fire she saw in the depths of his eyes. It was not Ken that was speaking to her now, but the Eagle. He was in full Gatchaman mode.
"Are you telling me you have no faith in what Hakase told us? Or of Hakase himself and the rest of the medical team?" Then more angrily. "That you have no faith in Joe?"
Fresh tears spilled down her cheeks. Angry tears full of doubt and self-loathing.
"But what if they're wrong ?" she choked out, her voice thick with emotion. "Ken...."
"We can't spend our lives thinking 'What if?' Jun! We have to deal with the situation we have at hand. In the there here and now! If Hakase believes Joe will be able to see again, then so do I!"
"I know that Ken, it's just so hard!"
"Are you so willing to just give up on him?"
Her head slumped, chin resting against her chest in defeat --all the fight suddenly draining out of her.
"Joe needs all of us right now." Ken said more gently, releasing her arm. "And we have got to be strong."
She nodded, wiping at her eyes with a pale hand. Pulling a tissue out of her pocket, she blew her nose and shoved her hair out of her eyes.
"You're right. I know you are."
"Come on, let's get something to eat at the cafeteria." he offered with a twitch of his lips. "I'm starving."
"I could use something cold to drink myself." she admitted , she fanned her herself, as her emotional outburst left her face red and blotchy.
The two of them walked amicably down the hallway together in silence, heading for the elevators that would take them down to the cafeteria. They rounded a bend, when Jun stopped, frowning.
She stood there watching Ken's jean clad form moving quickly down the hallway ahead of her.
It was then that the realization hit her.
"Wait, you actually have money??"
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Flying Blind Chapter 5
"We have a problem," Nambu told them removing his glasses for a moment to clean them, then replacing them. "The doctor's aren't totally sure when Joe can return to active duty. "
Gasps and curses filled the room, but Ken was silent, waiting for the doctor to explain.
"Joe has sustained damage to his optic nerves, as well as his retinas. He also has a concussion. There are a few variables involved and he will recover, with time, but until then you're down one man. Most importantly your gunner, the best shot on the team--is lost to us right now."
He looked at each one of them in turn, taking in their serious faces.
"I don't think I need to tell you that everyone needs to work extra hard to fill that spot until Joe is able to return. This is going to be a trying time to say the least. And I expect all of you to ramp up your training in areas you're deficient in."
"You know Joe will be the holy terror of the med ward." Ken stated bluntly.
He just couldn't imagine it himself. A Condor who couldn't see? Heaven help the doctors and nurses.
"I know....!" Jinpei quipped brightly, snapping his fingers together. "Maybe they can drug him until he's healed!"
"That's not helpful Jinpei." Jun scolded him, her arms crossed over her chest in a very Condor-like pose.
"They're not keeping him bed ridden indefinitely, nor placing him in a medically induced coma." Hakase informed them, glancing briefly at the youngest member of the team. "Joe will be held a while for observation and if his condition remains stable, then most likely they'll send him back to his quarters to recuperate."
"What?" Ryu exclaimed, brown eyes wide. "How can they do that? He can't even see!"
The doctor smiled, a wry grin. "Everyone in the med ward is well aware of the kind of patient Joe is. After lengthy discussion with his medical team, they feel he'll benefit from being in familiar surroundings."
"So..." Ken questioned thoughtfully."What do they expect him to do all day? Just sit there while we're out fighting Galactor? You know Joe won't cooperate with that."
"I'll say...." Jun muttered under her breath and flashing him a look.
"Yes, those are my thoughts as well. Which is why, his condition permitting, Joe will continue to train here at the base while the rest of you are out in the field."
"But Nambu Hakase, what can Joe-aniki possibly do if he can't see?" Jinpei asked, with a frown, truthfully not understanding.
"I'm disappointed in you Jinpei. As a Science Ninja, you should know that sight is only one of many senses and tools that humans possess."
Sensing Jinpei's embarrassment, Ryu quickly jumped in trying to change the subject. "Yeah Jinpei, Joe can still work out with us. Right doctor? There's always the weight room." He reached out and ruffled the kids' hair. "We can help him...."
"Absolutely. I wouldn't expect anything else from you, as a team."
"Joe's not just our teammate Hakase, he's our brother and friend." Ken told him rising from his seat, hands balled into fists. "We'll do whatever we can to make sure he's back with us as soon as possible."
The doctor nodded tapping his pen on his desk. "That is all for now. You're dismissed for the time being. Ken...please stay a moment. I need to discuss a few things with you."
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It was around 45 minutes later when the door to the doctor's
office opened, and Ken walked out. To his surprise he can see Jun lingering further down the hallway by the supply closet. Apparently she had been waiting for him.
"Ken," she asked softly, inclining her head. "Do you have a few minutes?"
He nodded and leaned back against the wall, muscles playing against the t-shirt stretched taught against his chest.
She tucked a strand of hair behind her ear, the lights reflecting off it, giving it a green cast.
"I understand your giving a speech in front of Hakase, but do you really think Joe will accept our help?"
There was a doubtful tone in her voice.
"I don't know Jun. You know how hardheaded Joe can be. But the fact is we NEED him on the team so it doesn't matter whether he wants our help or not."
He paused a moment, gaze cast downward towards the floor. "At least we can still perform the firebird ............"
It was their weapon of last resort. The hardest hitting weapon in their arsenal, but one they had to exercise caution in using.
"There is that." Jun agreed quietly, her voice sounding strained. "Assuming we can keep Joe from trying to take the G2..."
"I thought of that." Ken replied grimly. "I wouldn't put it past him to try, but I've already spoken with Hakase about it. He's going to have a few words with the security personnel in general , as well as with the guards in the hangar bay."
He secretly hoped it would be enough, but he wasn't counting on it. Once Joe decided to put his mind to something, there was no going back.
Ken looked up at her, eyes carefully searching her face.
"What's wrong?"
She shook her head, ends of her hair brushing her shoulders lightly.
"Jun, is there something I need to know?"
There was the sound of an indrawn breath through her nose.
"I ...can't help but feel....."she paused, trying to swallow the lump in her throat, as she looked anywhere but at him. "That this.... is
all my fault..."
Tears welled up in her eyes, and she covered her face with her hand.
Ken cleared his throat uncomfortably. He closed the gap between them and placed his hands on her shoulders.
"No one thinks that way, except for yourself, Jun." He shook her lightly, adding emphasis to his words. "We've been over this before...."
"I know...!"
She only cried harder, snuffling under her hand and shaking her head.
"I can't help it Ken..."
She wiped briefly at her bloodshot eyes.
"What if...what if Joe..." she began helplessly.
"Don't say it Jun..." Ken told her, voice almost a whisper. Half warning, half pleading with her.
"I have to to Ken!"she sobbed. "Because no one else has said it! What if Joe never recovers his eyesight!?'
He set his jaw. "The doctor said there was a good chance he'll make a full recovery! He just needs time Jun!"
"What if they're wrong?!" Jun snapped. "What about
that?"
Abruptly she shoved his hands off her shoulders, but he grabbed her arm firmly, fingers biting into the flesh of her bicep.
A retort bubbled up to her lips, then died as she was taken aback at the blue fire she saw in the depths of his eyes. It was not Ken that was speaking to her now, but the Eagle. He was in full Gatchaman mode.
"Are you telling me you have no faith in what Hakase told us? Or of Hakase himself and the rest of the medical team?" Then more angrily. "That you have no faith in Joe?"
Fresh tears spilled down her cheeks. Angry tears full of doubt and self-loathing.
"But what if they're wrong ?" she choked out, her voice thick with emotion. "Ken...."
"We can't spend our lives thinking 'What if?' Jun! We have to deal with the situation we have at hand. In the there here and now! If Hakase believes Joe will be able to see again, then so do I!"
"I know that Ken, it's just so hard!"
"Are you so willing to just give up on him?"
Her head slumped, chin resting against her chest in defeat --all the fight suddenly draining out of her.
"Joe needs all of us right now." Ken said more gently, releasing her arm. "And we have got to be strong."
She nodded, wiping at her eyes with a pale hand. Pulling a tissue out of her pocket, she blew her nose and shoved her hair out of her eyes.
"You're right. I know you are."
"Come on, let's get something to eat at the cafeteria." he offered with a twitch of his lips. "I'm starving."
"I could use something cold to drink myself." she admitted , she fanned her herself, as her emotional outburst left her face red and blotchy.
The two of them walked amicably down the hallway together in silence, heading for the elevators that would take them down to the cafeteria. They rounded a bend, when Jun stopped, frowning.
She stood there watching Ken's jean clad form moving quickly down the hallway ahead of her.
It was then that the realization hit her.
"Wait, you actually have money??"
ElectricWhite
Gatchamaniac
posted 14 Feb 2016 12:02
...And here Ken learns that no good deed goes unpunished!
Becky Rock
Gatchamaniac
posted 14 Feb 2016 12:29
I just did some catching up.
This has been great, RD. Lots of angst. I was wondering when Jun would voice she was blaming herself.
When are we going to hear Joe's feelings on the matter?
Oooh, interesting developments. Run Ken, run!
Transmute Jun
Queen of the Bird Missiles
posted 15 Feb 2016 09:29
Why do I picture Joe becoming some kind of Daredevil-esque vigilante?
Am starting to think this story needs to be in a separate thread, but *shrugs*
Not sure if anyone is still following this anymore, but here's the next part, if you're interested in reading it.
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Flying Blind--Chapter 6
"Now, I have to tell all of you, that Joe still isn't up to par yet." Dr. Chen told them looking at them sternly. "No horsing around or any tomfoolery. He has to heal properly. Don't stress him out, he's stressed enough already."
"You sound like Hakase...." Jinpei grumbled, staring at the floor.
From the slight twitch of his jaw,it was obvious the doctor heard the remark, but ignored it and continued.
"Don't stay for too long, and try and keep probing questions to a minimum. Shall we?"
He ushered them down the hallway, and through a high security part of the wing. There was a guard before the door who nodded at the doctor after he showed him his ID and submitted to a retina scan.
The medical wing was fairly quiet, with only a few of the nurses speaking in low voices at their station, and sipping coffee. They took no notice to their group passing by, just went on with their conversation.
Jun frowned, thinking they should be paying more attention to the comings and goings of staff and visitors, but remembered that this wing was also under heavy surveillance by hidden cameras and the like. Not to mention there were also ISO operatives stationed at every possible entrance point.
The only other noise was of the hum of the ventilation system as it cycled the air and the occasional beeping of high tech medical equipment.
They came to a door at the end of the brightly lit hallway. The doctor stopped before it and placed his hand on the palm scanner. Lights on the pad, blinked and changed colors in a varied sequence, before it unlocked with a click.
When he opened the door, they saw Joe was propped up against a mound of pillows. Though his eyes were bandaged, and gauze was wrapped around his head to keep the pads on, they could tell a familiar Condor scowl was fixed firmly upon his face. The fact that his face along his left jaw line and cheek had been seared by the explosion, only added to the angry countenance. The injury showed a livid red from beneath the protective mesh dressing that covered it.
The room was spartan and had no window view to the ocean, not that it mattered, for he couldn't see it anyway.
"Glad to see you're awake." Dr. Chen commented briskly, walking into the room, tucking his medical file under his arm. "You have some visitors, Joe."
"Great." He responded flatly.
Joe could feel the tension in the air. Fairly cut it with a knife, as he heard the door close behind the doctor. And he could feel them all staring at him, and each other. Had things changed that much? He was still the same person despite his injury.
Well, let's go. Out with it already! he wanted to shout, but bit his tongue.
"Well well, the gangs all here." he drawled.
He head one of them shift on their feet, the quiet whisper of their jeans as they moved restlessly from foot to foot.
"Everyone but Ken. He's in conference with Dr. Nambu." Jun offered awkwardly. "But I'm sure he'll be along when he can."
"I've no doubt he will, Jun."
"Dr. Chen told us we have only a moment to talk with you Joe."
He snickered, turning his head away. "Like I have somewhere to go..."
Ryu cleared his throat, breaking the strained silence. "Hiya Joe, how you feeling?"
He felt a warm beefy hand press down briefly on his shoulder in greeting.
"Like a trapped rat Ryu."
Better yet, a blind rat..., he thought ruefully.
"Jinpei, what're you hiding behind your back?" Jun asked curiously.
"Oh, just some magazines I bought for Joe-aniki."
"Oh boy...." Ryu muttered under his breath. Joe could hear the sound of what he assumed was Jun smacking the back of Jinpei's head with the flat of her hand.
"Owwww! What was that..."
"It's all right Jinpei..." Joe interrupted, with a twitch of his lips. "I'll read them when I get better."
"Yeah, when you get better!" In his mind's eyes he could practically see Jinpei's grin and him sticking out his tongue at Jun in a "so there!" statement. The plastic bag crinkled loudly as the kid set them on the bedside table.
"What have they told you?" Ryu asked hesitantly. "Have they given you a timeframe of when you might be back on your feet?"
"You know as much as I do. They really haven't told me anything. They just tell me to take it day by day. Problem is .... ," he gestured at the bed. "THIS is what my day amounts to right now."
A sharp rap sounded from the other side of the door, before it opened again. Dr. Chen looked at them from over his round glasses, signaling it was time for them to leave.
"That's our cue, I think." Ryu murmured.
"We'll come back and see you again soon!" Jinpei promised, looking up at his sister for confirmation.
"Yes, we'll come every day if Joe wants us to."
The three of them gave Joe their good-byes and sounds of them shuffling rapidly out the door faded out into the hallway.
But he heard a quiet commotion outside his door, then the sound of Dr. Chen saying "Only one more minute..." in a firm voice. "He needs his rest."
The door swung open again and closed with a low click.
"Joe?" Jun asked softly. "Can I talk to you in private a minute?"
"Me casa es su casa" he replied wryly, gesturing towards where the chairs were at the bedside.
He heard her approach and drag one of the chairs closer to the bed. It creaked as she sat down.
"Joe...Joe, I'm so sorry..."
He mentally sighed to himself. He knew this was coming and hadn't been looking forward to it. If he could be anywhere but here, he would be.
"If I could ...." she began in a pained voice, growing thick with emotion.
"Look.....Jun..." said Joe, cutting her off gruffly. "It's okay. I know. It's not your fault."
"No, it's not okay! You can't see!" she exclaimed, horrified.
"Did you do it on purpose Jun? Huh?" he asked her. "Did you mean to blind me?"
He thought to make her see the ridiculousness of her thinking but supposed he was a little too hard with her, when he heard a choked sob break from her throat.
Joe heard the rustling of tissues as she pulled them out of the box on the bedside table. He supposed he would feel the same way...no...knew... he would feel the same way if something had happened to one of his teammates, especially if he thought it might have been his actions that caused an accident. The only difference between his reaction and Jun's would be that where Jun was sobbing at his bedside, he would be out blowing things to pieces, in order to assuage his feelings of guilt.
"C'mere Junie." he told her quietly extending an arm towards her.
Jun's shoes squeaked on the tile floor as she rose and he felt the bed dip slightly from her weight as she sat down next to him. He could smell the shampoo she used to wash her hair with. It reminded him of flowers.
She cried against him, tears wetting the front of the faded t-shirt he wore that currently served as a pajama top. Her shoulders shook, and he ran a hand gently over her hair.
"Hey now," he scoffed with a slight huff. "Ken's the pretty one with the model looks. What're you cryin' over me for? It might even be an improvement...."
She shoved lightly at his shoulder in rebuke.
"If there 's anything I can do..." came her muffled voice against his chest."Anything at all... to make it up to you or make you feel better..."
A grin tugged at the corner of his mouth. "Well, since you put it like that...". He leaned back against the pillows more comfortably. "I guess it'll be like being blindfolded..." A smirk plastered across his face.
She briefly lifted her head. "Pig! As if...." Jun snorted, and smacked his shoulder, laughing and making him laugh too.
"Yeah, yeah I know...."
"Are you sure I can't do anything for you? Get you anything from your trailer?"
After a moment's thought, and after he quashed the guilt that welled up in him.
"There is one thing Junie..."
********************************
Flying Blind--Chapter 6
"Now, I have to tell all of you, that Joe still isn't up to par yet." Dr. Chen told them looking at them sternly. "No horsing around or any tomfoolery. He has to heal properly. Don't stress him out, he's stressed enough already."
"You sound like Hakase...." Jinpei grumbled, staring at the floor.
From the slight twitch of his jaw,it was obvious the doctor heard the remark, but ignored it and continued.
"Don't stay for too long, and try and keep probing questions to a minimum. Shall we?"
He ushered them down the hallway, and through a high security part of the wing. There was a guard before the door who nodded at the doctor after he showed him his ID and submitted to a retina scan.
The medical wing was fairly quiet, with only a few of the nurses speaking in low voices at their station, and sipping coffee. They took no notice to their group passing by, just went on with their conversation.
Jun frowned, thinking they should be paying more attention to the comings and goings of staff and visitors, but remembered that this wing was also under heavy surveillance by hidden cameras and the like. Not to mention there were also ISO operatives stationed at every possible entrance point.
The only other noise was of the hum of the ventilation system as it cycled the air and the occasional beeping of high tech medical equipment.
They came to a door at the end of the brightly lit hallway. The doctor stopped before it and placed his hand on the palm scanner. Lights on the pad, blinked and changed colors in a varied sequence, before it unlocked with a click.
When he opened the door, they saw Joe was propped up against a mound of pillows. Though his eyes were bandaged, and gauze was wrapped around his head to keep the pads on, they could tell a familiar Condor scowl was fixed firmly upon his face. The fact that his face along his left jaw line and cheek had been seared by the explosion, only added to the angry countenance. The injury showed a livid red from beneath the protective mesh dressing that covered it.
The room was spartan and had no window view to the ocean, not that it mattered, for he couldn't see it anyway.
"Glad to see you're awake." Dr. Chen commented briskly, walking into the room, tucking his medical file under his arm. "You have some visitors, Joe."
"Great." He responded flatly.
Joe could feel the tension in the air. Fairly cut it with a knife, as he heard the door close behind the doctor. And he could feel them all staring at him, and each other. Had things changed that much? He was still the same person despite his injury.
Well, let's go. Out with it already! he wanted to shout, but bit his tongue.
"Well well, the gangs all here." he drawled.
He head one of them shift on their feet, the quiet whisper of their jeans as they moved restlessly from foot to foot.
"Everyone but Ken. He's in conference with Dr. Nambu." Jun offered awkwardly. "But I'm sure he'll be along when he can."
"I've no doubt he will, Jun."
"Dr. Chen told us we have only a moment to talk with you Joe."
He snickered, turning his head away. "Like I have somewhere to go..."
Ryu cleared his throat, breaking the strained silence. "Hiya Joe, how you feeling?"
He felt a warm beefy hand press down briefly on his shoulder in greeting.
"Like a trapped rat Ryu."
Better yet, a blind rat..., he thought ruefully.
"Jinpei, what're you hiding behind your back?" Jun asked curiously.
"Oh, just some magazines I bought for Joe-aniki."
"Oh boy...." Ryu muttered under his breath. Joe could hear the sound of what he assumed was Jun smacking the back of Jinpei's head with the flat of her hand.
"Owwww! What was that..."
"It's all right Jinpei..." Joe interrupted, with a twitch of his lips. "I'll read them when I get better."
"Yeah, when you get better!" In his mind's eyes he could practically see Jinpei's grin and him sticking out his tongue at Jun in a "so there!" statement. The plastic bag crinkled loudly as the kid set them on the bedside table.
"What have they told you?" Ryu asked hesitantly. "Have they given you a timeframe of when you might be back on your feet?"
"You know as much as I do. They really haven't told me anything. They just tell me to take it day by day. Problem is .... ," he gestured at the bed. "THIS is what my day amounts to right now."
A sharp rap sounded from the other side of the door, before it opened again. Dr. Chen looked at them from over his round glasses, signaling it was time for them to leave.
"That's our cue, I think." Ryu murmured.
"We'll come back and see you again soon!" Jinpei promised, looking up at his sister for confirmation.
"Yes, we'll come every day if Joe wants us to."
The three of them gave Joe their good-byes and sounds of them shuffling rapidly out the door faded out into the hallway.
But he heard a quiet commotion outside his door, then the sound of Dr. Chen saying "Only one more minute..." in a firm voice. "He needs his rest."
The door swung open again and closed with a low click.
"Joe?" Jun asked softly. "Can I talk to you in private a minute?"
"Me casa es su casa" he replied wryly, gesturing towards where the chairs were at the bedside.
He heard her approach and drag one of the chairs closer to the bed. It creaked as she sat down.
"Joe...Joe, I'm so sorry..."
He mentally sighed to himself. He knew this was coming and hadn't been looking forward to it. If he could be anywhere but here, he would be.
"If I could ...." she began in a pained voice, growing thick with emotion.
"Look.....Jun..." said Joe, cutting her off gruffly. "It's okay. I know. It's not your fault."
"No, it's not okay! You can't see!" she exclaimed, horrified.
"Did you do it on purpose Jun? Huh?" he asked her. "Did you mean to blind me?"
He thought to make her see the ridiculousness of her thinking but supposed he was a little too hard with her, when he heard a choked sob break from her throat.
Joe heard the rustling of tissues as she pulled them out of the box on the bedside table. He supposed he would feel the same way...no...knew... he would feel the same way if something had happened to one of his teammates, especially if he thought it might have been his actions that caused an accident. The only difference between his reaction and Jun's would be that where Jun was sobbing at his bedside, he would be out blowing things to pieces, in order to assuage his feelings of guilt.
"C'mere Junie." he told her quietly extending an arm towards her.
Jun's shoes squeaked on the tile floor as she rose and he felt the bed dip slightly from her weight as she sat down next to him. He could smell the shampoo she used to wash her hair with. It reminded him of flowers.
She cried against him, tears wetting the front of the faded t-shirt he wore that currently served as a pajama top. Her shoulders shook, and he ran a hand gently over her hair.
"Hey now," he scoffed with a slight huff. "Ken's the pretty one with the model looks. What're you cryin' over me for? It might even be an improvement...."
She shoved lightly at his shoulder in rebuke.
"If there 's anything I can do..." came her muffled voice against his chest."Anything at all... to make it up to you or make you feel better..."
A grin tugged at the corner of his mouth. "Well, since you put it like that...". He leaned back against the pillows more comfortably. "I guess it'll be like being blindfolded..." A smirk plastered across his face.
She briefly lifted her head. "Pig! As if...." Jun snorted, and smacked his shoulder, laughing and making him laugh too.
"Yeah, yeah I know...."
"Are you sure I can't do anything for you? Get you anything from your trailer?"
After a moment's thought, and after he quashed the guilt that welled up in him.
"There is one thing Junie..."
ElectricWhite
Gatchamaniac
posted 18 Jun 2016 13:00
Originally posted by Redbird Not sure if anyone is still following this anymore, but here's the next part, if you're interested in reading it.Of course people are interesting in reading this! Some might have to go back and refresh their memories, but they're interested. Let me put it to you this way: There are a couple of stories Chris hasn't worked on in a couple of years, but I'd love to see how they'd progress, if she ever picks them up again! Now, about this installment...I was wondering if Joe was going to make a lewd suggestion! I mean, the circumstances were just begging for it!![]()
Yay, so happy to see a new bit!! Of course we want to know what happens, I'm sure none of us likes seeing Joe stuck without being able to see.
Poor both of them. They both handled that talk well, really. I can't wait to see what he's asked for!
EW: Aw, I do hope to get back to them one day.
Poor both of them. They both handled that talk well, really. I can't wait to see what he's asked for!
EW: Aw, I do hope to get back to them one day.
Wow, it's been a long time since I've updated this. Had the chapter ready to go for awhile and apparently didn't get around to posting it.
Anywho, here's it is, comments/criticisims,etc are welcome:
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Flying Blind--Chapter 7
Joe sighed as he heard the door close, then listened.. Really listened to make sure she was gone. He found even that short visit left him drained as if he'd been beaten with metal baseball bats.
Questing fingers touched his head , his temple, gently, feeling the gauze bandages that covered his eyes. He knew Jun didn't hurt him or purpose, no one on the team would ever do such a thing. But he couldn't help but rage at his current condition. His hand fell to the blanket where it balled up into a fist.
A fist that he suddenly slammed down hard against the bed.
The action made him feel worse. For he wanted to break something, wanted to vent his frustration and the soft mattress had done nothing but absorb his blow. Cushioning his hand when he wanted to feel splintering fragments beneath it. The rough scrape of jagged, broken edges against his skin.
His restless fingers plucked at the thin scratchy hospital blanket. They itched to throw a shuriken, but they had all been promptly confiscated when he'd been admitted.
But what was worse, was the disconcerted feeling of being trapped, that permeated his senses. He had to get out of there and soon. He wanted to feel the breeze against his skin. Real air. Not this purified recycled non-air they breathed beneath the sea. It was unnatural if you asked him .
He longed to feel the wind though his hair, racing beneath a midnight sky full of stars. Or to go flying off into the break of dawn, the promise of a new day unfolding before his eyes, along a dusty canyon road.
But he couldn't do any of those things, because he couldn't goddamned see.....
Not only that, but during his forced isolation, he found he missed normal every day scents and sounds. Of the freshly brewed coffee in his trailer. The smell of oil, asphalt and gasoline. Gunpowder. His leather coat. Fresh donuts in a grease spotted bag. Newly cut grass, sharp and clean. The crickets at night. The rain on his trailer roof. The roaring of the G2's engine as he tore around a track.
Stuck down 20,000 leagues under the sea, all you got was an antiseptic hospital smell, with an occasional hint of ozone.
He knew he was losing it when he had to stop himself from asking someone to bring him a scented candle to burn, just to get that cloying smell out of his nostrils.
Joe hated to have his sleep interrupted, but what he would give right now to be called out on a mission at 4am!
And that was another problem. Because he was injured, because HE was laid up--the rest of the team had to do without him. They had to take up the slack because he was stuck laying in a hospital bed. His place was fighting beside them, kicking Katse's ass--to hell with taking names.
HIS name was the only one Galactor needed to know.
Anger fueling his muscles, he threw off the blanket and swung his legs over the side of the bed. His feet touched the floor and he rose, grabbing onto the back of one of the chairs for balance.
Joe's head spun, almost causing him to trip over the chair leg. But he managed to right himself and by utilizing his training---using his core muscles --grounded himself through his feet before he tried moving forward once more. On the periphery of his hearing, came the faint sounds of the nurses laughing at their station down the hall, and mouth set in a grim line, he turned toward the door.
Even at this very moment, Katse could be planning their next sortie .Once they got wind that the Condor had been removed from the fighting, it could give them just enough of an advantage that it meant lights out. For everyone. Everything. Even the end of his plans for revenge.
Screw this! He was out of here. There was no fucking way that he was going to stay cooped up in the medical ward, when Ken and the others needed him. No way he was going to sit idly by and wait for the hammer to fall, when he should be the one wielding it.
Joe stepped forward in the direction of the door. Just a little more, he thought, stretching out his arm. He collided against the wall with a curse, flushing with embarrassment beneath his bandages.
Get it together!
His fingers found the doorframe, and slid them down, smoothing over the cool metal surface of the reinforced door. Down, down..ah, there it was . The door handle. Grasping it firmly in his grip, he turned it, yanking on the handle.
It was locked.
What.the.fuck. They locked him in.
THEY LOCKED HIM IN
Oh hell NO.
White-hot fury boiled through him. Made him see red behind his damaged eyelids. His head started to pound, the staccato beat of his heart thrumming within it, in every breath.
The flat of Joe's hand slapped the door, the next blow was with his fist. He began shouting, at the top of his lungs. He threw his shoulder against the door, putting his body weight behind it. He reeled back, losing his balance and began pummeling and kicking at the handle , willing it to break.
This continued on for some time. Only when he collapsed to his knees, feeling the cold tiles through his pajama pants, his limbs trembling from effort , did the door open.
He was nursing his split knuckles, soothing them with his tongue when he heard an amused chuckle.
"Well," he heard Dr. Chen say, the unmistakable sound of a smirk in his tone. "If you're up and about, and full of spirit, you must be feeling better. That being the case, tomorrow we'll start on your rehab."
Anywho, here's it is, comments/criticisims,etc are welcome:
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Flying Blind--Chapter 7
Joe sighed as he heard the door close, then listened.. Really listened to make sure she was gone. He found even that short visit left him drained as if he'd been beaten with metal baseball bats.
Questing fingers touched his head , his temple, gently, feeling the gauze bandages that covered his eyes. He knew Jun didn't hurt him or purpose, no one on the team would ever do such a thing. But he couldn't help but rage at his current condition. His hand fell to the blanket where it balled up into a fist.
A fist that he suddenly slammed down hard against the bed.
The action made him feel worse. For he wanted to break something, wanted to vent his frustration and the soft mattress had done nothing but absorb his blow. Cushioning his hand when he wanted to feel splintering fragments beneath it. The rough scrape of jagged, broken edges against his skin.
His restless fingers plucked at the thin scratchy hospital blanket. They itched to throw a shuriken, but they had all been promptly confiscated when he'd been admitted.
But what was worse, was the disconcerted feeling of being trapped, that permeated his senses. He had to get out of there and soon. He wanted to feel the breeze against his skin. Real air. Not this purified recycled non-air they breathed beneath the sea. It was unnatural if you asked him .
He longed to feel the wind though his hair, racing beneath a midnight sky full of stars. Or to go flying off into the break of dawn, the promise of a new day unfolding before his eyes, along a dusty canyon road.
But he couldn't do any of those things, because he couldn't goddamned see.....
Not only that, but during his forced isolation, he found he missed normal every day scents and sounds. Of the freshly brewed coffee in his trailer. The smell of oil, asphalt and gasoline. Gunpowder. His leather coat. Fresh donuts in a grease spotted bag. Newly cut grass, sharp and clean. The crickets at night. The rain on his trailer roof. The roaring of the G2's engine as he tore around a track.
Stuck down 20,000 leagues under the sea, all you got was an antiseptic hospital smell, with an occasional hint of ozone.
He knew he was losing it when he had to stop himself from asking someone to bring him a scented candle to burn, just to get that cloying smell out of his nostrils.
Joe hated to have his sleep interrupted, but what he would give right now to be called out on a mission at 4am!
And that was another problem. Because he was injured, because HE was laid up--the rest of the team had to do without him. They had to take up the slack because he was stuck laying in a hospital bed. His place was fighting beside them, kicking Katse's ass--to hell with taking names.
HIS name was the only one Galactor needed to know.
Anger fueling his muscles, he threw off the blanket and swung his legs over the side of the bed. His feet touched the floor and he rose, grabbing onto the back of one of the chairs for balance.
Joe's head spun, almost causing him to trip over the chair leg. But he managed to right himself and by utilizing his training---using his core muscles --grounded himself through his feet before he tried moving forward once more. On the periphery of his hearing, came the faint sounds of the nurses laughing at their station down the hall, and mouth set in a grim line, he turned toward the door.
Even at this very moment, Katse could be planning their next sortie .Once they got wind that the Condor had been removed from the fighting, it could give them just enough of an advantage that it meant lights out. For everyone. Everything. Even the end of his plans for revenge.
Screw this! He was out of here. There was no fucking way that he was going to stay cooped up in the medical ward, when Ken and the others needed him. No way he was going to sit idly by and wait for the hammer to fall, when he should be the one wielding it.
Joe stepped forward in the direction of the door. Just a little more, he thought, stretching out his arm. He collided against the wall with a curse, flushing with embarrassment beneath his bandages.
Get it together!
His fingers found the doorframe, and slid them down, smoothing over the cool metal surface of the reinforced door. Down, down..ah, there it was . The door handle. Grasping it firmly in his grip, he turned it, yanking on the handle.
It was locked.
What.the.fuck. They locked him in.
THEY LOCKED HIM IN
Oh hell NO.
White-hot fury boiled through him. Made him see red behind his damaged eyelids. His head started to pound, the staccato beat of his heart thrumming within it, in every breath.
The flat of Joe's hand slapped the door, the next blow was with his fist. He began shouting, at the top of his lungs. He threw his shoulder against the door, putting his body weight behind it. He reeled back, losing his balance and began pummeling and kicking at the handle , willing it to break.
This continued on for some time. Only when he collapsed to his knees, feeling the cold tiles through his pajama pants, his limbs trembling from effort , did the door open.
He was nursing his split knuckles, soothing them with his tongue when he heard an amused chuckle.
"Well," he heard Dr. Chen say, the unmistakable sound of a smirk in his tone. "If you're up and about, and full of spirit, you must be feeling better. That being the case, tomorrow we'll start on your rehab."
*****
Ken opened the door, then sensing a shift in the air....quickly closed it. He counted to five before slowly opening it again.
He peered at the other side of the door. A shuriken had pierced the metal and was standing at full attention.
"Sorry Ken..." Joe grumbled, a half-apology.
Amused, Ken glanced at the door a final time before he quietly closed it behind him and stepped into the room.
"Guess I won't ask how you're feeling today."
Joe bared his teeth at Ken in a mock grin. Then he sighed, slumping against the pillows as Ken lowered himself into the hard egg-shaped plastic chair at his bedside.
"You know Jun's still pretty shook up." Ken told him. "And where did you get the shuriken from?" he questioned added with a frown.
"I know. She came here yesterday." he gestured with his hand in a haphazard way. "Where did you think I got them from ?"
Ken sighed, and made a mental note to speak with Jun about that.
"She thinks it's her fault Joe."
"I already told her it was an accident." he paused. "Don't know how much the words helped but...there it is..."
Silence.
"So how are you holding up? " Ken asked him curiously. "Really?
"What?" his teammate growled. "Are you playing shrink with me now too? They left about 2 hours ago if you'd like to join them....."
"Joe......" Ken sighed. "How are you doing.....really?"
"How do you think?" was the immediate answer.
Ken figured as much. "Has there been any change? Anything at all?"
"No." Joe groused. Ken could imagine a Condor scowl working its way out from behind those eye bandages. He could tell from the tension in Joe's face.
"Where'd these come from?" Ken asked glancing at the bedside table.
Then realized his faux-pas.
"Oh,"he stammered, blushing to the roots of his hair. "Sorry..."
Joe waved him off. "The magazines?" he snorted, half laughing to himself. "Jinpei...."
"Well.... it's the thought that counts..."
"I know, I know." Joe replied. "I'm going crazy in here."
Ken's eyes found Joe's right left hand. The one that had been bandaged.
"Yeah, I heard about what happened in here earlier."
"They're going to start my rehab sessions tomorrow."
"So I heard."
"Jesus, Ken what exactly do you hear? Everything ?"
Ken shrugged. ""Pretty much. You're my second. Anything that I need to know about anyone, especially on the team, is my business."
"I don't want you to worry about me" Joe said through gritted teeth."I'm going to be fine."
"I know you are" Ken replied smoothly."But that's not going to stop us from being concerned about your health."
A strange silence developed between the two. And the Condor could feel his commander's eyes on him.
"What?" Joe asked, feeling Ken's eyes on him. "What is it?"
"You need a shave..." Ken laughed.
Joe snickered. "Not like I can take care of that myself, now can I?"
"Want me to get one of the nurses to do it....?"
"As long as it's not the brunette.....she hates me. ...."
Ken rolled his eyes at that information. "I don't want to know...."
"But the redhead is another story..." Joe grinned, teeth flashing.
"Ummm...on second thought I think I'll just do it for you...."
"Hell no!" Joe retorted, pushing himself up slightly against the pillows. "You'll probably slit my throat...."
" Would I do that?" Ken asked innocently, blue eyes drawing wide.
"Yes...." Joe answered emphatically.
"What about Jun...."
Joe shook his head. "She'll want to cut my hair too or something. She complains I look like a hoodlum sometimes."
"That's because you are a hoodlum." Ken replied stoically, trying to keep from laughing. "Funny," he continued, thinking aloud. "Jun doesn't complain about my hair..."
"Of course she doesn't complain about your hair, Ken" Joe snorted in good humor. "'cos she likes you."
Aw, I can totally understand Joe's frustration, and his need to get out to the outside even if to just feel the real world for a bit. I can just imagine the worker's comp filings from nurses and doctors now that he has shuriken!
The hair thing cracked me up.
Definitely getting that "Brothers" feel with the two of them in that last part.
Definitely getting that "Brothers" feel with the two of them in that last part.
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