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An interesting re-write of an episode I recall confusing me as a child. Thanks for bringing sense to it!

Even though I'm not very familiar with BotP episodes, this is a very well explained theory and story! The end says it all ... there seems no valid explanation as to why Doriarity could have accepted to collaborate with Spectra, except from the fact that he might have done so out of his craving for his research to be accepted and perfected. Great write!

Yes, this is a much-improved story over the original version -a more coherent plot and lots of good details to flesh it out.

I agree. Ironically, I just watched the episode last night. I've been watching one every few days. It was obvious to me right off the bat there was something about the horse. It was much larger than the others, more like a draft horse trying to run with thoroughbreds. I like this version much better.

Someone so obsessed with his research that he was willing to make a deal with the devil, telling himself that it had non-military applications perhaps. It's kind of interesting that the professor died even in BOTP. No last-minute save for him! Good job on making this one a little more coherent.

I can only reiterate what everyone has already said, a definite improvement on the BotP version.

Oh yes this is definitely an improvement to the actual ep -- the best kind of rewrite! Thank you to the writer for bringing some sense to this ep!

And for guessing the author, I d go with KT!

Originally posted by ChrisW Someone so obsessed with his research that he was willing to make a deal with the devil, telling himself that it had non-military applications perhaps. It's kind of interesting that the professor died even in BOTP. No last-minute save for him! Good job on making this one a little more coherent.

Given the rules at the time, viewers were to presume Doriarity's survival (no matter how obvious his death was).

Yes, this is the story that should have been told! Great rewrite for this episode!

Originally posted by Daniella T And for guessing the author, I d go with KT!

I was thinking UW...

Originally posted by lborgia88

Originally posted by Daniella T And for guessing the author, I d go with KT!

I was thinking UW...

That is my vote as well.