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Oooooh ... that chick had to be an Asakura to survive calling Joe a crotchety fart. Man, there's so much room for more story here, very well done. Intriguing!

What a great idea for a fic! But so many unanswered questions... What happened to the rest of the team? Why is it so important that they re-create the SNT's records? Why are they still fighting Galactor! Does this mean that when they destroyed Sosai Z, Galactor still came back? And I'm impressed that cyborg Joe can sire children... And with whom? Well this one has certainly gotten me thinking!

Hmmmm, Now if Joe's stuck in an infinite time loop (or whatever you call it) then surely his descendant would already have to be conceived... Great story though, like TJ, I'd love to know what happened to the other teammates. did their descendants become future SNT too?

Wow, that was really cool. And man was Joe ever pissed about having a female doppelganger! Condor Cutie! Heh, heh. And calling Joe crotchety was great! I love it! LOL. Would like to see more of this at some point in time (pun intended!)

Ooh, intriguing premise! It occurs to me that Joe becomes a cyborg, so might he then become sort of "immortal," or at least long-lived enough to actually know his great-granddaughter. I'm thinking that maybe he sends her back to do something -change something that happens- in order to try to prevent something bad. Maybe Ken really did die there from the blackbird/devil star attack, the first time around. The fact that, at the end, Joe makes contact with his future self.... Looks like it's going to happen all over again. Maybe it's been happening, looping, hundreds of times, even, if Joe can't resist making contact with himself. Or maybe he's actually fixed, and reset time now, so that Ken lives, but has to "sacrifice" himself instead? Wondering too about how Kerry saw her mother get her skin removed. Is that how Galactor, in the future, turns people into cyborgs? Shudder.... I'd love to see a sequel to this! Thank you!

Groundhog Day! Yes, it does open up many questions.

Intriguing. So just what does happen when one touches their future self? An endless loop of Groundhog Day or something else entirely? I think we need a sequel here ...

Originally posted by jublke Intriguing. So just what does happen when one touches their future self? An endless loop of Groundhog Day or something else entirely? I think we need a sequel here ...

Perhaps something is amiss....something needs to be set straight. Like a simple action caused a terrible chain of events, that now needs to be fixed. You know, going back in time to change the past...trying to make sure that action/event never happened. (For example, not necessarily related to this story: something went amiss on a mission, and Ken was accidentally killed. Now someone is trying make sure it never happened, 'cause the world went to crap after Gatchaman died,etc.) Just a wacky thought.....

Yes ... this piece is really screaming for a sequel! So many unanswered questions which makes this story ever so intriguing, trying to match pieces of a very elaborate puzzle! What did really happen and what should have happened, instead? Was the future Joe, with only grey strands of hair different from the present one, the cyborg Joe we know, or is he the one caught in a time loop, maybe due to physical connection? Did Galactor keep on existing after Sosai Z's destruction, or may I dare say what had seemed to be his obliteration, becoming more relentless and cunning in time, or was their persistent existence the result of an error caused by the time travelers themselves? I'd love to know more!

Or they could have been trying to stop the chain of events that made Joe a cyborg.

I'm going to venture a guess that ElectricWhite wrote this...

and I think UW did....

Originally posted by lborgia88 I'm going to venture a guess that ElectricWhite wrote this...

Me too.....

Nice idea! I am interested in more of this story! Very Groundhog Day/Back to the Future-esque! I'd love to know who Joe ended up with in order to have children/grandchildren! Great story!

Originally posted by Springie I'd love to know who Joe ended up with in order to have children/grandchildren! !

Maybe it was Jun, and if he got Kerry to change history so that Ken doesn't die, maybe Joe just negated the existence of his children, grandchildren, great-grandchildren -he might have known that could happen, and deliberately chose to self-destruct himself too there at the end...

Awesome story and like everyone else dying to see more.