Bradbury's Jar Week #99

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amethyst
amethyst Wanted: $1000 Reward posted 17 Nov 2013 08:00
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This week's prompt was inspired by last week's thread, and it is a word that has several connotations, but some seem to have dropped out of our lexicon ... Joint
Becky Rock
Becky Rock Gatchamaniac posted 17 Nov 2013 11:06
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So many possibilities....
ElectricWhite
ElectricWhite Gatchamaniac posted 17 Nov 2013 12:23
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Hey, what's it take to get some stories goin' in this joint? Tongue
Redbird
Redbird Gatchamaniac posted 17 Nov 2013 12:50 (edited 17 Nov 2013 12:51)
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Pulling up the collar of his leather jacket against the cold rain while skirting a puddle, Joe walked up to the door of the Snack J. He was about to yank open the door when he paused for a moment, listening. He frowned, the sound of loud music and laughter greeting his ears. He glanced at the clock on the building across the street. It was only 9:00pm, not that late for a Saturday night. Intrigued, he slowly pushed open the door with his shoulder and was amazed at the sight before him. The place was packed to the gills with customers and it was standing room only, that is, if you could find a place to stand. A mass of patrons were gathered at the bar, and he saw Jun hastily serving drinks. Joe tried to catch her eye, but she was just too busy to notice. One of the waitresses, who was very short, was trying to make her way through the crowd with a tray of orders hoisted above her head. It seemed she had her work cut out for her for the evening as all of the tables were taken. The jukebox against the far wall was blaring out a disco song, multicolored lights swirled and flashed from the ceiling, bathing everyone and everything with crazy spots. They made Joe's eyes swim and he blinked a few times to clear his vision. Dozens of bodies gyrated on the small dance floor, and people were actually dancing between the tables. What the hell was going on? he thought as someone shoved past him with a drink in their hand. Jun's joint was jumpin'.
Transmute Jun
Transmute Jun Queen of the Bird Missiles posted 17 Nov 2013 13:45
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Transmute Jun
Transmute Jun Queen of the Bird Missiles posted 17 Nov 2013 13:46
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I'll leave it to someone else to pick this one up. Devil1
Transmute Jun
Transmute Jun Queen of the Bird Missiles posted 17 Nov 2013 13:47
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Redbird, I'm glad Jun is making a profit, for once!
ElectricWhite
ElectricWhite Gatchamaniac posted 17 Nov 2013 15:08
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RB -- I can almost hear the house music! TJ -- *sigh* That felt sooooooooooooo good!
Redbird
Redbird Gatchamaniac posted 17 Nov 2013 15:11 (edited 17 Nov 2013 15:15)
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Originally posted by Transmute Jun I'll leave it to someone else to pick this one up. Devil1
Whaaat? Don't leave us hanging TJ! (Glad Jun enjoyed her massage, personally I can never relax during them....).
Originally posted by Transmute Jun Redbird, I'm glad Jun is making a profit, for once!
I know right? Maybe at some point we'll find out why she was so busy that night! Tongue
Originally posted by ElectricWhite RB -- I can almost hear the house music!
Yep, very loud. I feel bad for poor Joe though, I don't think he likes disco! He's more of a Rockband kinda guy. LOL.
Becky Rock
Becky Rock Gatchamaniac posted 17 Nov 2013 16:59
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Rebird - Now the question is what did Jun do that attracted such a crowd? TJ - That makes me want to go for another massage. Haven't had one in over a year. Jun is lucky.
Transmute Jun
Transmute Jun Queen of the Bird Missiles posted 17 Nov 2013 17:15
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I'd say it's not just getting the massage that makes Jun lucky. Grin
ChrisW
ChrisW Gatchamaniac posted 17 Nov 2013 22:20
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ChrisW
ChrisW Gatchamaniac posted 17 Nov 2013 22:31
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Redbird: Hehe, a perfect use of this week's word! TJ: Oooh, I'm a total massage nut, and now I really, really want one. Especially from Ken! I bet no one else on the team gets this kind of treatment. Tongue (Though that could be pretty funny.)
Redbird
Redbird Gatchamaniac posted 18 Nov 2013 04:31 (edited 18 Nov 2013 04:32)
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CW: Loved the descriptions of the various activities going on in the house--not to mention the handful of hairs and "pocket lint". Laugh2 It's a wonder how Nambu can concentrate with all that noise. Poor Joe! Hakase is definitely going to have some questions for him! Tongue TJ: As for Jun's massage, did the rest of the team know what Ken was up to? I think it was a gift from all of them. LOL.
Transmute Jun
Transmute Jun Queen of the Bird Missiles posted 18 Nov 2013 09:26
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Chris, I like the way your'e developing Joe's personality here: he doesn't want to discuss everything, but he understands priorities, and he does what needs to be done. I can't wait to hear Nambu's side of things! Redbird, I didn't really put much thought into the backstory of the massage gift, but I figured that if the gift had come from Ken. Jun would already be suspicious. Um, let's just say that Ken planned his 'personal intervention' without the knowledge of the others. Wink
ElectricWhite
ElectricWhite Gatchamaniac posted 18 Nov 2013 13:07 (edited 18 Nov 2013 13:10)
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Becky Rock
Becky Rock Gatchamaniac posted 18 Nov 2013 13:54
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CW - so Adam is a smooth talker who sometimes smokes a joint that he apparently has shared with Joe at some point who's also a pilot. Joe is going to have some explaining to do, but at least now he knows it really was Ken. EW-That'll teach Ryu not to check over a rental car before he gets in it.
Transmute Jun
Transmute Jun Queen of the Bird Missiles posted 18 Nov 2013 15:46
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EW, it seems like Ryu is being set up here.
ChrisW
ChrisW Gatchamaniac posted 18 Nov 2013 16:19
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Redbird: A pocket isn't an ideal evidence delivery system. Smile I imagine that Nambu is kind of used to it by now. I bet he has a hard time working at home when it's too quiet, heh heh. TJ: I'm curious to see what Nambu's gonna say too, hehe. I'm glad you like how Joe's coming along. I struggle sometimes with making him too chatty or "sensitive" and frequently have to make adjustments. EW: Oh dear! So much for Ryu's good day. Smile Becky: I'm experimenting with what Nambu would have been looking for in Ken's slot if he didn't have a Ken, but trying to give Adam his own personality. Smile
KT1972
KT1972 Gatchamaniac posted 21 Nov 2013 16:32
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Transmute Jun
Transmute Jun Queen of the Bird Missiles posted 21 Nov 2013 17:50
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Love it, KT! I'm glad Jun knows when to seize the moment! Grin
ElectricWhite
ElectricWhite Gatchamaniac posted 21 Nov 2013 17:55
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KT -- I must say, "Great timing, Jun!" woohoo
Redbird
Redbird Gatchamaniac posted 21 Nov 2013 18:08
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Oh nice one KT! LOL. Good move Jun! Tongue
ChrisW
ChrisW Gatchamaniac posted 21 Nov 2013 18:23
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KT: Hehe, Ken's going "please for the love of god let this be Jun kissing me and not some random goon" Smile
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Mad Katharine Exalted Member posted 21 Nov 2013 20:46
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ChrisW
ChrisW Gatchamaniac posted 21 Nov 2013 20:57
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Long time no talk, MK! Yeah, the world must be acutely aware of being stuck in the middle. I do like that at least one episode of the series dealt with someone pissed off about that (the one where they go canoeing and running around in their bird styles while supposedly trying to maintain a low profile *rolls eyes*).
Daniella T
Daniella T GatchaFreak posted 22 Nov 2013 10:49
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RB: Once again, Joe thinks too much. Just go in and enjoy the fun, man! Sun TJ: Mmmmm..... mmmmm......I SO need one of those now! Massages, not Kens. Oh wait, maybe Kens too. And Joes.
Daniella T
Daniella T GatchaFreak posted 22 Nov 2013 10:52
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CW: I love how you build up the intrigue! Can't wait for the next installment.
Daniella T
Daniella T GatchaFreak posted 22 Nov 2013 10:57
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EW: Que pasa con estos policiacos? KT: What indeed? Wink
Daniella T
Daniella T GatchaFreak posted 22 Nov 2013 10:59
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Originally posted by ChrisW KT: Hehe, Ken's going "please for the love of god let this be Jun kissing me and not some random goon" Smile
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ElectricWhite
ElectricWhite Gatchamaniac posted 22 Nov 2013 13:20
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DT -- Que puedo decir? Es una trastada!
Daniella T
Daniella T GatchaFreak posted 22 Nov 2013 13:34
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MK: The last scene literatily had me cringing! Great description!
Daniella T
Daniella T GatchaFreak posted 22 Nov 2013 13:35
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Originally posted by ElectricWhite DT -- Que puedo decir? Es una trastada!
Learning new spanish words while on Gatchamania -- two birds with one stone! Or should that be "two birdies"? Hmmmm....
Becky Rock
Becky Rock Gatchamaniac posted 23 Nov 2013 08:10
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KT - So if Jun's there, Joe and Jinpei can't be far behind. MK - interesting use of 'joint'. It's amazing that Marc had to point out the world knows its stuck in the middle of the battle.
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