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CricketBeautiful
Forum God
posted 21 Jan 2005 12:08
(I promised that if he dictated it, with a beginning, middle and end,
I'd post it, just like I do mine.)
Princess Breaks her Leg
By Crackers, age 6
As told to Cricket
In Centre Neptune, Mark was waiting for Princess. Then suddenly the Chief called. The Chief said, "Zoltar is at it again. Zoltar made a space dragon. Get to the Phoenix."
"Let's go!" said Mark.
G-Force got in the Phoenix. G-Force took off, but the space dragon won and the Phoenix fell to the ground.
Princess said, "I broke my leg." Mark helped Princess strap it up.
G-Force couldn't call Center Neptune because the radio was broken.
G-Froce had to have a camp and sleep in the Phoenix.
Mark said, "Tomorrow, we will fix the Phoenix." And after tomorrow they fixed the Phoenix and then they called for a space ambulance.
G-Force got back to Centre Neptune safely. Then the space dragon came to Centre Neptune and shot missiles at it.
Mark and Princes were trapped in Centre Neptune. Mark called the Phoenix and the Phoenix came flying in.
Mark and Princess got in the Phoenix and they called for a building crew and the building crew made a new Centre Neptune with magical shields and in two weeks Princess's leg was better.
The End
meridianday
Galaxy Girl
posted 22 Jan 2005 07:45
BOTP catches another kid! It's a good story, the boy done good
Space ambulance, that should have made its way into the real series somehow.
Space ambulance, that should have made its way into the real series somehow.
awwww cute and ingeniously creative for a 6 year old!
I like Centre Neptune with magical shields!..beats the space ambulance!
lol
That is just so precious!!! I love Mark and Princess stories!!!
Cricket, I see a future for you as a ghost writer!!
Elvin Ruler
Forum God
posted 28 Jan 2005 08:43
Aaaaaaaaw. So cute. ^_^
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