Bradbury's Jar Week #77

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ElectricWhite
ElectricWhite Gatchamaniac posted 15 Jun 2013 21:02
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Daniella T
Daniella T GatchaFreak posted 16 Jun 2013 01:44
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EW, you get full points for thinking of the longest (fake) prompt! By the way, is it a real word? It sounds quite scary!
ElectricWhite
ElectricWhite Gatchamaniac posted 16 Jun 2013 06:10
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It's a real word, alright! (It's also supposedly the longest word in the English language...in case you couldn't tell!) It's a lung disease caused by inhaling silicone dust from a volcano. (You might just die from it by the time the doctor finishes writing out the diagnosis!) Dead1
amethyst
amethyst Wanted: $1000 Reward posted 16 Jun 2013 08:20
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Thanks, EW! Although, you know, it might be possible to work that first word into a story, too... Since we have a new, or rather returning, active member, who likes to write, it might be good time to refresh the purpose of this, and the few rules: These are little weekly writing prompts, based on how Ray Bradbury often wrote, hence the name. Each week someone puts up the prompt and we are challenged to respond to the prompt. Because real life often interferes, there are no time limits, so people can always go back and revisit prompts, and no limit to the number of responses that someone can submit. Anyone, can put up prompts, but please ask me for a date first, so we don't end up with three prompts one week and no prompts the next, or they can be done anonymously, too. FYI -- All dates are now open again! Prompts single words, or short phrases, they can also be images. If responses become too graphic for general audiences, please remember to create a second thread for the prompt in the rubber room. Oh, and EW, I should have that other response you wanted up in a few days. I was thinking about another story that I am working on, and realized that while the story is not finished, a small snippet of it will work quite well for that other prompt.
Transmute Jun
Transmute Jun Queen of the Bird Missiles posted 16 Jun 2013 08:33 (edited 16 Jun 2013 17:20)
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"Oh.... I feel terrible..." Jinpei moaned, clutching at his bulging stomach. "I think I'm dying..." "Dying?" Jun rushed over, putting her hand on Jinpei's forehead, then pulling it back in alarm. With practiced expertise she flipped open the first aid kit, then used the tools inside to take Jinpei's temperature, check his blood pressure, listen to his heart and test his reflexes. "Yep, you're right." she said briskly, snapping the kit shut. "You're dying." "What?" Jinpei cried unhappily, clearly not expecting this answer. "You have pneumonoultramicroscopicsilicovolcanuniosis." Jun told him gravely. "I've heard it's very common amongst young people. In fact, I think it's spreading across Utoland even as we speak." "Pneumonoultramicroscopicsilicovolcanuniosis? What the hell is that?" Jinpei demanded. "Loosely translated, it means 'I ate way too much candy and got a tummyache'." "Hey!" Jinpei moved to hit her, then groaned, falling back on the bed and clutching his stomach once more. "Owww...." "I think you see my point." Jun said smugly.
ElectricWhite
ElectricWhite Gatchamaniac posted 16 Jun 2013 11:03
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Oooh, nice combo, TJ! Ame, I'm looking forward to seeing what you've come up with! Bandit2
Daniella T
Daniella T GatchaFreak posted 16 Jun 2013 12:28
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Poor, poor Jinpei...NOT! You get double points, TJ, for using both prompts!
clouddancer
clouddancer Gatchamaniac posted 16 Jun 2013 13:11
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LOL, great job at using both prompts TJ!
Toneman
Toneman Forum Legend posted 16 Jun 2013 13:30
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Most excellent........
Becky Rock
Becky Rock Gatchamaniac posted 16 Jun 2013 14:58
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Wonderful, TJ! That'll teach Jinpei to eat so much crap.
Toneman
Toneman Forum Legend posted 16 Jun 2013 17:12
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Jinpei howled and gripped the handle of the passenger door as the Condor rounded a sharp curve. He had been drinking, and somehow had convinced the Swallow to ride shotgun. This was a decision Jinpei was truly beginning to regret. "Aniki!!!! I'm gonna be sick!!!!! " "What's the matter boy? You got pneumonoultramicroscopicsilicovolcanunosis? " "Pneumonia what?!?!?!?! I'm surprised you can even say that without slurring or tripping over your own tongue. " "oh yeah? " Joe cut the wheel sharply to the right, ruthlessly mowing down a sizeable group of mailboxes. "What are you doing?!?!?!" "I just earned twenty points. What's it to you?" Jinpei closed his eyes. It was going to be a loooooong ride..........
Transmute Jun
Transmute Jun Queen of the Bird Missiles posted 16 Jun 2013 17:21
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LOL, Toneman! It looks like Jinpei is paying in both of our ficlets! I sense a trend...
Transmute Jun
Transmute Jun Queen of the Bird Missiles posted 16 Jun 2013 17:21
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LOL, Toneman! It looks like Jinpei is paying in both of our ficlets! I sense a trend...
Toneman
Toneman Forum Legend posted 16 Jun 2013 17:28
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Maybe he is the best one to pick on with this one.
Daniella T
Daniella T GatchaFreak posted 17 Jun 2013 14:11
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You did it also,Toneman! Double points for using both prompts! Now I sense the bar is getting higher and higher... Now how many points did Joe finish with?
Becky Rock
Becky Rock Gatchamaniac posted 17 Jun 2013 15:01
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Flashbacks to rides in West Virginia, only it was lime gravel dust instead of volcanic silicon. Excellent, Toneman!
Toneman
Toneman Forum Legend posted 18 Jun 2013 11:50
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"What are you doing??? I just waxed this thing!!!!" "I told you I was gonna be sick!!!!! Joe reached over to punch Jinpei in the arm, and hit him in the face instead. "Ow, you jerk!!!!" He lunged over the console and blasted Joe in the mouth as hard as he could. He grabbed the steering wheel for leverage, inadvertently jerking it to the right. The car lurched to the right, hit a ditch, then hit the air. It flipped three times, and a flash of light blasted from inside. Two shadows bolted out, landing gracefully on the ground as the car fell flat on it's roof, bursting into flames. Jinpei looked at the Condor, their faces both bloody. "That's the third car this week aniki. Hakase's gonna be pissed." "Not bad for a Monday, huh?" "It's not too bad. You ended up with about 400 points on the day. That's a lot of mailboxes." "Postman's gonna be pissed too......" They laugh, and walk off onto the night......
Becky Rock
Becky Rock Gatchamaniac posted 18 Jun 2013 15:04
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So that's what happened to my mailbox! I blamed it on termites!
ElectricWhite
ElectricWhite Gatchamaniac posted 18 Jun 2013 17:04
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clouddancer
clouddancer Gatchamaniac posted 18 Jun 2013 17:55
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Another thought EW, how did Ella use all those letters when you are only allowed 7 tiles on your rack? But I love the spirit of this piece. Wink
Becky Rock
Becky Rock Gatchamaniac posted 18 Jun 2013 18:23
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EW, that's so sad.
Transmute Jun
Transmute Jun Queen of the Bird Missiles posted 19 Jun 2013 09:23
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My thought was the letters too! And I also thought the longest word in the English language was antidisestablishmentarianism. or perhaps supercalifragilisticexpialidocious. Shows you what I know!
ElectricWhite
ElectricWhite Gatchamaniac posted 19 Jun 2013 09:43
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Originally posted by clouddancer Another thought EW, how did Ella use all those letters when you are only allowed 7 tiles on your rack?
Hmm....I didn't think I was the only one who knew people who had a knack for cheating at Scrabble....
KT1972
KT1972 Gatchamaniac posted 19 Jun 2013 10:41
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Umm Ew - pneumonoultramicroscopicsilicovolcanuniosis wouldn't even fit on a scrabble board if it is only 15x15 tile spaces! TJ, well done for being the first to use both words in the prompt.... I don't think I'll be able to fit both of them in my piece (when I finally get it done!) Toneman - good to see you participating, hope to see more prompt pieces from you. Don't forget you can go back and add to any past prompt if any take your fancy.
ElectricWhite
ElectricWhite Gatchamaniac posted 19 Jun 2013 14:48
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Originally posted by KT1972 Umm Ew - pneumonoultramicroscopicsilicovolcanuniosis wouldn't even fit on a scrabble board if it is only 15x15 tile spaces!
....which is why it went off the board and stretched to the edges of the table! Tongue
Becky Rock
Becky Rock Gatchamaniac posted 19 Jun 2013 14:53
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EW, where did you find that word? Just flipping through the dictionary?
KT1972
KT1972 Gatchamaniac posted 19 Jun 2013 15:12
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Originally posted by ElectricWhite
Originally posted by KT1972 Umm Ew - pneumonoultramicroscopicsilicovolcanuniosis wouldn't even fit on a scrabble board if it is only 15x15 tile spaces!
....which is why it went off the board and stretched to the edges of the table! Tongue
Ok, and I thought you might say there were 3 boards stuck next to each other.... Tongue
ElectricWhite
ElectricWhite Gatchamaniac posted 19 Jun 2013 16:33
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Originally posted by Becky Rock EW, where did you find that word? Just flipping through the dictionary?
I was an English major in college. One of my professors had put together a English trivia handout, and it had this word on it. Even though I thought I'd never use it, I've found a way to use it every couple of years.
ElectricWhite
ElectricWhite Gatchamaniac posted 19 Jun 2013 16:35
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Originally posted by KT1972
Originally posted by ElectricWhite
Originally posted by KT1972 Umm Ew - pneumonoultramicroscopicsilicovolcanuniosis wouldn't even fit on a scrabble board if it is only 15x15 tile spaces!
....which is why it went off the board and stretched to the edges of the table! Tongue
Ok, and I thought you might say there were 3 boards stuck next to each other.... Tongue
Tongue Tongue Actually, there were 5 boards stacked on top of each other! Tongue Tongue
KT1972
KT1972 Gatchamaniac posted 19 Jun 2013 16:42
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Transmute Jun
Transmute Jun Queen of the Bird Missiles posted 20 Jun 2013 08:04
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This is nice, KT... Jinpei working hard and then being able to actually show Jun some affection instead of just teasing her.
ElectricWhite
ElectricWhite Gatchamaniac posted 20 Jun 2013 10:17
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Double points to you, KT! Stretch
Daniella T
Daniella T GatchaFreak posted 20 Jun 2013 15:11
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And Jun probably knows why a kid like Ella knows this big word, right?
Becky Rock
Becky Rock Gatchamaniac posted 20 Jun 2013 16:55
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KT, Jinpei was pretty close to getting whacked.
gatchamarie
gatchamarie Gatchamaniac posted 21 Jun 2013 10:49
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TJ ... Jinpei was really searching for such a reprimand! And, I couldn't ever be able to repeat the word like he did! I still have difficulty to not stop in the middle of it when reading it over and over again!Tongue Toneman ... it's so nice to see you writing here! Good thing my mailbox is inbuilt into stone ... wait ... that means that Joe would wipe out part of my house's facade, too! Ouch!! EW ... first of all ... wow ... that's one kind of a word you've picked up! As to your snippet ... I agree with Becky that it's sad, but I can totally see Jun's thoughtful intention behind the story! So, the word about Jun's lack of cooking ability had spread around quite well, I see! Btw ... I love playing Scrabble! KT ... so glad to see Jinpei putting his utmost in the case! A very heartwarming piece!
Springie
Springie Her Royal Fluffiness...Swan of Swans... posted 21 Jun 2013 23:41 (edited 21 Jun 2013 23:42)
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TJ- so clever!! I can tell you are an experienced mom...have you ever used those lines on your kids? LOL Toneman- love it! Jinpei falls victim to Joe once again- I bet he'll think twice next time he's about to ride with Joe! EW- I need to remember Ella's strategy next time I play "Words With Friends"! The end made me sad...what's wrong with Ella? KT- Awwww... So sweet...I can see Jinpei really wanting her to stay but "playing it off" and trying to be "cool" about it...
ElectricWhite
ElectricWhite Gatchamaniac posted 22 Jun 2013 06:05
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Originally posted by Springie EW- I need to remember Ella's strategy next time I play "Words With Friends"! The end made me sad...what's wrong with Ella?
More will be revealed at a future time! (That's almost as bad as when "To Be Continued" pops up just as you're really into the storyline!)
Toneman
Toneman Forum Legend posted 22 Jun 2013 11:56
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Jinpei is the star of this thread.
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