Bradbury's Jar Week #69

16 Replies 121 Views 0 Likes 9 Participants Last post by gatchamarie 24 Apr 2013 07:16
ElectricWhite
ElectricWhite Gatchamaniac posted 20 Apr 2013 21:57
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She didn't complain About the pain When she gave birth. So, without shame, Let's proclaim Our love to Mother Earth! In honor of Earth Day, this week's prompt is: EARTH
Daniella T
Daniella T GatchaFreak posted 21 Apr 2013 02:39
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I wonder where on earth people will go with this prompt... P.S. Nope, that's not my contribution for the week.
littlewolf
littlewolf Forum God posted 21 Apr 2013 03:53 (edited 21 Apr 2013 03:58)
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Transmute Jun
Transmute Jun Queen of the Bird Missiles posted 21 Apr 2013 08:38
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Aw.... poor Joe... Although I'm wondering if 'Jimmy' will spirit him away...
ChrisW
ChrisW Gatchamaniac posted 21 Apr 2013 14:20
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LW: Aw. :/ Might not bode well for the others, either.
Springie
Springie Her Royal Fluffiness...Swan of Swans... posted 21 Apr 2013 15:26
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Where's Dr. Rafael? We need our Joe back! *grin*
KT1972
KT1972 Gatchamaniac posted 22 Apr 2013 02:10
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LW, great piece, really want to know where you're going with it, will you post any more to this in future prompts?
KT1972
KT1972 Gatchamaniac posted 22 Apr 2013 02:13
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Transmute Jun
Transmute Jun Queen of the Bird Missiles posted 22 Apr 2013 10:10
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Makes sense to me!
Transmute Jun
Transmute Jun Queen of the Bird Missiles posted 22 Apr 2013 10:25 (edited 22 Apr 2013 18:45)
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He had always hated Galactor, from the moment he had been told, at four years of age, that they had shot down his father's plane. Each time he went out on a mission, they took a little more from him, fanning the flames of his hatred, until now it had grown into a blazing menace, a rage so intense that it threatened to burn away his very soul, if he did not maintain a strict control at all times. It was moments like these that were the most difficult to bear. He looked out upon the open landscape, where hours ago there had been trees, buildings, parks, homes... There had been people here. Now there was nothing. They had thought they had won, forcing Galactor to retreat, and yet the so-called victory had been hollow at best. 'Scorched earth tactics' sounded so dry on a sheet of paper, but here, seeing it in front of him, it took on a whole new meaning, stabbing into his heart like a poisoned dagger, spreading its evil throughout him. No. He had to be strong, both for himself, and for his team. There was no other option.
ElectricWhite
ElectricWhite Gatchamaniac posted 22 Apr 2013 16:18
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LW -- Crying5 Mind you, I'd like to see where you go with this. But, still... Crying2 KT -- Cute. Now where will you go with it next? TJ -- If that's not a spot-on character analysis......
ChrisW
ChrisW Gatchamaniac posted 22 Apr 2013 17:11
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KT: That makes perfect sense. Smile One thing about doing a modern version of BOTP and Gatch would be having to take into account how hard it is to hide anything on the planet's surface these days, plus how much easier it is to track things and people. TJ: Oh, very Ken. It feels perfect for GII or GF in particular.
jublke
jublke Forum Legend posted 22 Apr 2013 21:24
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LW: Nice piece. I read it as Ken, not Joe, though. Guess it depends upon how close to canon you want to go. KT1972: The Swallow has so much to offer, if only people would *listen* to him! Tongue Jun: Yep, that perfectly captures a weary Eagle.
KT1972
KT1972 Gatchamaniac posted 23 Apr 2013 03:21
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TJ - That is so like Ken, although it makes me wonder who are the real casualties of war....
littlewolf
littlewolf Forum God posted 23 Apr 2013 03:33 (edited 23 Apr 2013 03:34)
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KT I like the idear that Google Earth is now a possible spy tool - go Swallow TJ - another glimpse of what Ken has to endure on each mission, and the fact it is not only Joe driven by his demonds As for my story- been thinking on what do with it, plotting, drafts blah blah - then I get a thought "who said the body on the slab is Joe?" or Ken (nice twist jublke) so have to think about it and see what the next Bradbury is..
Transmute Jun
Transmute Jun Queen of the Bird Missiles posted 23 Apr 2013 06:21
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Originally posted by KT1972 TJ - That is so like Ken, although it makes me wonder who are the real casualties of war....
That's something I enjoy exploring in fanfic... from all different perspectives. Wink
gatchamarie
gatchamarie Gatchamaniac posted 24 Apr 2013 07:16
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LW ... nice, intriguing piece, which makes me ask for continuation! Your last remark, saying "who said the body on the slab is Joe?", or even Ken's, has rested my mind! Phew ... so there's still hope everyone's still alive! KT ... that's a good one! The Swallow is so underestimated, sometimes, that I love it when someone does him justice! TJ ... you just nailed Ken's character so perfectly, and I totally agree with CW that this aspect of his fits so neatly into the sequel series, as emotional stress escalates! I can so see him that way in Gatch F *grin*! Such a strong piece!
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