This week's prompt: Wall More prompts needed: March 10 and onward are free. Message me if you'd like a date or have anonymous prompts.

PINK FLOYD! I just couldn't resist.

Wall---ace and Grommit... Couldn't help myself either.

Wall -y! Shamefully, I couldn't resist as well

So, Ame, I'll bet you're really LOVING me right now!

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I can't watch videos at work, but I'm guessing the tune isn't the same as '99 Bottles of Beer on the Wall'? The words don't quite fit with that one. Still, a perfect application of this week's theme!

I was thinking of putting this in the Rubber Room, but then decided to stop before it got that far. ********** "You know what you want. Surrender to it." The whisper in her ear was right. She did know what she wanted. And he was here, pressing up against her, pushing her back to the wall with the mere force of his presence. "Yes..." she breathed, a deep sigh of longing. He groaned softly, revealing the enormous constraint he had placed upon himself. Slowly he bent his bead, capturing her mouth in his, causing her to grab at his chest for support when her knees gave way. Fire burst within her, beginning with her lips and then radiating out to the rest of her body. Her back arched, pushing her front closer to his. He responded in kind, pressing her against the wall once more, his hands roaming her curves as his kisses pressed against her face and neck. She didn't know how much more she could take...

KT: Cute! I haven't heard the song before but I could imagine it easily enough. TJ: There's always something extra sizzly about wall nookie.

Ummmm... "I am the Wall-rus?" (A little Beatles humor, there...sorry) KT- I know that song! That must be what they sing to annoy Joe on the long trips back to base after missions! ROFL! TJ- HOT...HOT...HOT! *Fans self* How do you write such amazing little snippets like that?

Originally posted by Springie KT- I know that song! That must be what they sing to annoy Joe on the long trips back to base after missions! ROFL!

Great, now I can so picture Jinpei singing that for hours ... or wanting to, but not quite making it since someone would eventually beat him into silence.

Originally posted by Springie TJ- HOT...HOT...HOT! *Fans self* How do you write such amazing little snippets like that?

Um, because this is what I fantasize about all day?

I can see Jinpei starting at 100 Goons though, not 10. Or maybe even 1000 (a base full). TJ- Wow, you do a great job at writing hot snippets. I wish I could do the same. Of course maybe after a lot of practice I would be able to do half as good as you.

Originally posted by clouddancer TJ- Wow, you do a great job at writing hot snippets. I wish I could do the same. Of course maybe after a lot of practice I would be able to do half as good as you.

You just have to connect with your imagination, CD!

Since I don't have a "smutty" imagination, I guess I will never be able to write a scene like that as good as you do.

Originally posted by clouddancer Since I don't have a "smutty" imagination, I guess I will never be able to write a scene like that as good as you do.

We all have our own specialties. Who knows, maybe one day your imagination will take a smutty turn, and drag you along for the ride! There's plenty of great stuff out there without smut in it, though.

Originally posted by clouddancer Since I don't have a "smutty" imagination, I guess I will never be able to write a scene like that as good as you do.

I'll bet you do! Just think abut the smutty stories you like... and then put them all together in your mind, linking your favorite parts.

Originally posted by ChrisW

Originally posted by clouddancer Since I don't have a "smutty" imagination, I guess I will never be able to write a scene like that as good as you do.

We all have our own specialties. Who knows, maybe one day your imagination will take a smutty turn, and drag you along for the ride! There's plenty of great stuff out there without smut in it, though.

And, don't forget, TJ's been called TranSMUT Jun for a reason....

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That's very powerful, EW. I think I can understand how Ken feels now...

That is a very moving post EW.

Powerful stuff, EW. Ken's fears were understandable. I'm sure he would have left with a much lighter heart.

Oh EW, this was a wonderful piece! First of all, it reflects things that sadly have really happened -- and, worse, are still happening. Second, how poignant for Ken, especially, to be told that these people had decided to never separate from their children...

TJ -- was the fire brigade called afterwards, to put out the wall? What a hottie! KT -- LOL! This could be the next hit Princess and Keyop play in the ready room...

//"Ready, Jason?" Mark turned to his second-in-command, a concerned look on his face. Jason shrugged. "As ready as ever, Commander." "OK, get into the capsule, we will lower you into the mecha." Jason shrugged again. "No problem." He turned on his heel, headed towards the back of the Phoenix. The capsule, their latest tool against the mecha that had bombed and burned their cities for a week, was waiting there, gleaming, shiny and new. The capsule that would take Jason deep into the mecha, into its control centre, where he would try to sabotage it, destroying it from the inside, since G-Force seemed powerless to stop it from the outside. Jason had been up for the mission. As always. But he had also been...distant...cold...as if he didn't care any more. Mark was worried, but his every attempt to make Jason utter more than a couple of words had failed. Mark was frustrated also -- he wanted to appeal to Anderson's help, but also knew that this would only enrage Jason even more. There was nothing to do but wait, wait for Jason to open and share his burdens. "Listen, Jason, when you get back, you and I, we need to talk..." he started saying, as Jason was moving towards the capsule. Jason gave him a tired smile, with just a bit of his old, cocky self coming through. "Let's scale that wall when we come it, Commander.//

Daniella, i can see how this would fit well into BOTP canon,. while Jason is having his 'problems'. Just a *hint* of Joe, there...

EW- wow...I agree with everyone's comments- very emotional piece! I'd love to read more! Daniella- great piece! I'd love to hear their conversation after the mission!

KT-didn't know there was a sweet and innocent version of that song. Just the common one that school children sing here. TJ-Nicely detailed scene....would have liked to known what led up to it, or what comes after. As it is, to me, it is just a scene. EW-Great idea here, could be easily reworked into a bit of original fiction. I find it odd that Ken would not know about the town's historical significance, and had me wondering who cared for all those little ones during the pitched battle going on all around them. You said the old and infirm were evacuated....hmm. Daniella...Jason heading into unknown danger, what is not to love. Although I can't quite picture Mark broaching the subject of a chat before he departs. Princess, most certainly...cuz "talking," is what we women like to do...in order to air our grievances. Mark I would think would wait until the mission is completed before burdening Jason with that...

Daniella - I like this piece and can see how it would fit into Jason having his vision problems in the series. Of course it could also be you are writing about some other problem Jason is having.

Originally posted by k2p2 TJ-Nicely detailed scene....would have liked to known what led up to it, or what comes after. As it is, to me, it is just a scene.

That's all it was meant to be. Not part of a grand story, no thought as to what came before or what came after, just something that popped into my head when I saw the prompt for the week. That's what Bradbury's Jar is all about, right?

Daniella: One of the many burdens of being "in charge." Mark feels responsible for keeping everyone at the top of their game and motivated, but a team out there on the front lines requires confident, intense personalities. Such personalities don't often make great patients. It always kinda bugged me in that episode that Jason was forced (by the Chief) to go alone when he was obviously having problems.