Seeking beta

4 Replies 61 Views 0 Likes 2 Participants Last post by amethyst 2 Feb 2012 19:21
ChrisW
ChrisW Gatchamaniac posted 21 Jan 2012 20:51
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So I'm working on a fanfic and my usual betas won't cut it, as they haven't watched the show. It's early Gatchaman universe, a take on how things might have gone horribly wrong if Galactor had competent people. Very dark, yaoi overtones, and various other warnings attached. No idea of how long it will be. Knowing me, the yaoi will at some point become more than overtones. Smile Anyway, if anyone's interested, lemme know. For a writing sample, here's the first few paragraphs: Ken panted for breath, leaning back against the wall. His only consolation was that Joe looked just as exhausted. "Just a quick fucking recon, huh?" Joe reached up, brushing sweat-damp hair out of his face. Footsteps outside the crumbling shack prevented Ken from replying. He held perfectly still, barely letting himself breathe, willing the green-clad goons to keep going. The fact that his second did the same spoke volumes.
amethyst
amethyst Wanted: $1000 Reward posted 22 Jan 2012 11:43
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Joe/Ken I can do, won't touch Jason/Mark. I'm good with Gatch I. Knowledge of Gatch II and F is very limited. Send me a PM or email me at amethyst.sh@gmail.com
ChrisW
ChrisW Gatchamaniac posted 22 Jan 2012 17:30
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Originally posted by amethyst Joe/Ken I can do, won't touch Jason/Mark. I'm good with Gatch I. Knowledge of Gatch II and F is very limited. Send me a PM or email me at [EMAIL]amethyst.sh@gmail.com[/EMAIL]
Will send you an email. I don't think I _could_ write Jason/Mark without sitting down and watching a bunch of BOTP! I've exclusively watched Gatchaman for far too long.
ChrisW
ChrisW Gatchamaniac posted 2 Feb 2012 16:53 (edited 2 Feb 2012 16:54)
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I could use a second beta if anyone out there is interested. Amethyst can vouch for the fact that my writing isn't generally too painful to read. Smile Or so I hope! * casts line baited with Eagle Condor * ETA: The yaoi is very mild in this first installment. Smile
amethyst
amethyst Wanted: $1000 Reward posted 2 Feb 2012 19:21
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I'm thoroughly enjoying it.
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