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AAAAAAAAAAAARRRRRRRRGGGGGGGGGHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!! This ended just as it was getting good! Please tell me there's more! Please? This is great! I love the humor of Joe teaching Ken to dance, and the way the others tease at first, but then join in, showing their bond as friends. Oh yeah... and they shower together? Even Jun? Wow, this brings up images.... P.S. To whoever wrote this... please finish it! <--- bouncing with excitement

Great work! I was thinking the same thing about the shower...and what a funny image of those heads peeking out to talk with Nambu! *grin* I was giggling at Jun calling Joe "swivel hips"! I, too, would love to see more!

"Nambu wasn't sure which was louder. Ken's scream or Joe's laugh." This goes to my personal top ten favourite two-liners !

This story shows so much promise, it has to be part 1 of a longer fic surely! Do Jun and Joe go further, or will Ken sweep her off her feet at the dinner? so many questions

This is very promising. I love the sensuality and teasing in it. Like everyone else, I agree this reads like a beginning and would love to see the writer add a sequel or two to it.

Very interesting. What will happen next? hmhmhmhm?

Originally posted by KT1972 Do Jun and Joe go further, or will Ken sweep her off her feet at the dinner?

Same question here ... same question here!! And, how was Ken's face when he was watching that intimate moment between Joe and Jun as it happened before his eyes?! Lovely sense of sensuality and teasing as Amethyst rightly said, and I also love the way the team members' friendship was described, and Nambu's concern about it! Would like to see it continued also, pleeaase! Thumbs up for the author!

Whoo hoo! Definitely sparks between Joe and Jun here! If it's only been a month since the Jigokillers, and if Jun knows that Joe punched out Ken for agreeing to burn the field of Jigokillers, and in light of Ken smacking her when they found her again, I could see why she might be feeling particularly warm to Joe. And Joe's got the upper hand here -a guy who can and will dance well has a way of prevailing over a guy who's a "wallflower." I agree -It'd be great to see a continuation of this -ie. what happens at the dance itself!

Originally posted by lborgia88 If it's only been a month since the Jigokillers, and if Jun knows that Joe punched out Ken for agreeing to burn the field of Jigokillers, and in light of Ken smacking her when they found her again, I could see why she might be feeling particularly warm to Joe.

And Bitter Bird Missile, where Joe slaps Jun, hasn't happened yet... Good point about the timing of this, LB!

hope the author is taking notes, they're going to have their work cut out after Christmas.