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woot! That was good in my opinion. Not that it should count for much though I am not a fanfic writer. I'd wait for the aproval of the pro's.

Well, Im no pro, but I liked it. Very angsty. They were *so* close to getting together, too.

Grins Another Mark and Princess fan! Yes, yes! We must unite! Keep the Eagle from the Condor! Cricket

Originally posted by CricketBeautiful \ We must unite! Keep the Eagle from the Condor!

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I liked that

Muchas Gracias everyone! I thank you all so kindly for the positive feedback. I am more than willing to listen to constuctive criticism. I would like to post another Songfic. ( there are all I have right now). Tengu: I am looking forward to reading your fanfic later tonight.. From Cricketbeautiful

We must unite! Keep the Eagle from the Condor!

Yes, I agree! I will do everything I can, even if I have to sit on him! BTW- I struggled to find the words for what Jason might say to Mark, so I left that part out. But, I challenge anyone to write that scenario if they so desire. LB

Tengu: I am looking forward to reading your fanfic later tonight..

Not on a full stomach....

Mark with Princess? That's O.K., isn't it, Lyon? Since our "Eagle Ken" is always with "Condor Joe", anyway. And they are quite happy out there, aren't they? Ah... Lolabella...Though I can't say I am familiar enough with BotP, but after reading all those fanfics and some discussions, I got the impression that the relationship between Mark and Princess is much closer than that between Ken and Jun. Your interpretation of their secret love in this songfic is fairly good, though the angst is always there (that's my favourite part, in fact!) Please keep offering what you have there, Lolabella, though I am no writer myself, but I am definitely a professional enthusiastic fanfic reader. Mei

grin .. okay, i can live with that. Eagle Ken and Condor Joe ... Mark can have his silly old Princess if he wants. .. and yes, there were more "moments" between Mark and Princess in BoTP in the translation that never existed in Gatchaman. i think it was a western sensibility thing.. the great white Commander had to have SOME sort of female love interest, and who better than the ever-handy Princess? i guess Jason just got to be in love with his gun. *cough*

`The ever handy Princess??` Yup, shes there whenever he needs DIY done or Mech demolished. ...Just dont ask her to cook.... And Jason, a car like that, he need never look at a girl, ever again. (It worked for me) But she calls on him whenever she needs to go shopping. Shes too embarrased to be seen in a beach buggy, and skylines have a very big boot. (and the back seats big enough for all sorts of things.)

Lola, I loved the fic and an original way of doing one. Everyone is inspired by something different personal feelings, something they dream of, songs or just warped thoughts Look forward to reading the next one