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You know, if you hadn't said that this was for Springie, I might have thought it was for me So sweet and fun... and fitting in beautifully with canon, as we know what happens when those 5 tickets to the Demon 5 concert are used... I loved this, even more so because it was from Joe's POV, as someone outside the Ken/Jun relationship, yet even so deeply invested in it. Poor guy having Nick come onto him like that... now I'm wondering about Joe's reaction to the yaoi fics out there about him!

Maybe he was involved with Galactor and he was a cyborg too. No. Joe shook his head ruefully. That was the kind of thing that only happened to him.

This had me !!!!! Awesome!!!!

OMG, I LOVE this fic! It is written so beautifully from Joe's POV, and I was grinning the whole time I was reading...but there were several parts that had me ! Poor Joe! Oh, and I loved Ken's song...so sweet! I'd be "boo-hoo-ing", too! Bravo! Thanks so much!!

Heh, funny! And Nick escaped injury -he's probably very lucky there! I'm wondering, though, if Jun had an elaborate plan the whole time to provoke Ken or if that's just how it happened to turn out.

Originally posted by lborgia88 Heh, funny! And Nick escaped injury -he's probably very lucky there! I'm wondering, though, if Jun had an elaborate plan the whole time to provoke Ken or if that's just how it happened to turn out.

Both of these are good points, LB! Joe probably should have slugged Nick. Or at least washed his mouth out with soap! And I wonder if Jun is actually devious enough to try to make Ken jealous? I don't know... based on what Joe saw, it does seem like she was close to Nick, and probably just appreciated having a friend to open up to. I was wondering how the girl at the door knew Joe's name... that was never explained. It could easily be something innocent, like she asked Jun who the 'cute regular' was.

Absolutely wonderful story. I was wiping my eyes at the end of Ken's song right along with Ryu, and was right there laughing with Joe at the last line of his song. LOVE IT!!! One of my new personal favorites.

OMG! This is just fabulous! I kept smiling all the while whilst reading it ... there are so many parts of it that appeal to me! Just liike TJ, I would have been very, very glad if it were the gift for me! Loved it ... the part where Nick is compared with Ken regarding the way the former immediately pays after he's served instead of adding more to his tab like the latter ... the way Joe rejects the invitations of a lovely girl just to help his friend (wish to know how she had known his name, though ... maybe, she had previously asked Jun since she was interested in him!) ... the way Ken resolves the situation (so romantic!) ... not leaving out Joe's behaviour, point of view, and his messed up situation! That was hilarious! Didn't really see things going that way from the start!

Oh, wow. This is a great story, I was laughing and crying throughout. Someone did a very good job not just creating a story but also writing a song that fits in. I love that Ken is able to explain his love to Jun and yet also show why he must keep his distance. It looks like you received a great gift Springie.

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That's one part, and conversation, of the many others, which I love most of this fic!

This truly is a wonderful fic! The author knows the characters well!

Springie Prompt: I'd like a "Jun's new man who will make Ken and Joe jealous" type of fic Gift: Bring Your Artistry by LB