3 Replies 48 Views 0 Likes 3 Participants Last post by UnpublishedWriter 29 Nov 2009 19:11
UnpublishedWriter
UnpublishedWriter Gatchamaniac posted 26 Nov 2009 09:04
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I'm trying to work out the last chapter of my crossover fic, 'Mala's Game', and not having much joy. Part of it is that the situation itself doesn't have much resolution (the war is still going on, Mala's been home and well-protected). I'm trying to tie up some ends, but maybe I'm missing something. Any hints? (Oh, yeah: the pregnancy went off without a hitch.)
Transmute Jun
Transmute Jun Queen of the Bird Missiles posted 26 Nov 2009 14:32
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It's hard to say, not knowing where you are going with this. Maybe (since it's part of a series) you could end with Anderson thinking that it's finally 'over' and no matter what the Spectrans do, they can't hurt him any more. Then segue to Mala with the baby, and her plans for its future... That would give a bit of an ominous feel to the ending.
amethyst
amethyst Wanted: $1000 Reward posted 26 Nov 2009 21:12
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I agree with TJ. The last chapter you posted pretty much closed things up for the SVU team, one more for G-Force to get back to "normal" and then on to the sequel.
UnpublishedWriter
UnpublishedWriter Gatchamaniac posted 29 Nov 2009 19:11
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Well. I did write some stuff, but I'll let your suggestions percolate. Never know where thoughts will end up. When I started it, I didn't even know it would be a crossover! And I still have the stray kitty. Trying to think of a name for her. (I suck at naming pets.)
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