A present from Cloud

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clouddancer
clouddancer Gatchamaniac posted 18 Dec 2008 15:15 (edited 18 Dec 2008 15:48)
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Last year there was a Christmas Story Challenge .... so I am an entire year late ... but I could not get this story written. In fact this was not the story I had envisioned either, although it has the same setting. I wanted a story full of comedy, jokes and laughter, unfortunately someone wanted to turn this story into something very different (an Eagle perhaps?). So instead we have an introspective story from Chief Anderson's POV: he is reflecting on Christmas and the team. This story is set in my AU but you do not need to know the background for this to make sense. I have called it Christmas Wishes
lborgia88
lborgia88 Gatchamaniac posted 18 Dec 2008 16:02
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Introspection, I think, is a part of the holiday spirit, just as is laughter and fun. This is a beautiful story, CD. Thank you for posting it.
clouddancer
clouddancer Gatchamaniac posted 18 Dec 2008 16:21
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Glad you enjoyed it LB.
Transmute Jun
Transmute Jun Queen of the Bird Missiles posted 18 Dec 2008 18:39
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This is a wonderful story, CD! Thank you for sharing it with us. Huggles
clouddancer
clouddancer Gatchamaniac posted 18 Dec 2008 18:46
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I enjoyed sharing this one, and I am actually feeling more comfortable about posting now. Not the high intensity of butterflies that I had for my first two stories anyways. These were just little butterflies instead. Biglaugh1
SJ_SwanJun
SJ_SwanJun Forum Goddess posted 19 Dec 2008 03:47
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Simply gorgeous CD ... I absolutely loved it!! I've read it three times already ... you make me feel litle I'm actually there watching the whole thing play out. I could picture it all so perfectly. What an awesome Christmas prezzie for all of us!! SJ
clouddancer
clouddancer Gatchamaniac posted 19 Dec 2008 03:59
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Thank you for your kind words SJ. I am glad I have written it clear enough for you to feel like you are in the scene. I usually think I do not describe what it happening well enough.
shamrokchick
shamrokchick Forum Legend posted 19 Dec 2008 06:17
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This is a great story CD! Thanks for sharing it Smile btw... I love Laura Ingalls!
clouddancer
clouddancer Gatchamaniac posted 19 Dec 2008 08:52
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Thank you shamrock - so did I quote Laura Ingalls correctly, from what you remember? I pulled from what I could remember and also from what I could find on line. I wish I had my copy but the book got destroyed in my flood last year .... and I could not get a copy from the library (they were all out)
shamrokchick
shamrokchick Forum Legend posted 19 Dec 2008 10:10
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From what I remember it seems correct... I have the box set but one of the books is missing... I think my sister still has it... It's been a long time since I've read those.
clouddancer
clouddancer Gatchamaniac posted 19 Dec 2008 13:37
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It has been a long time since i read them as well, but there are certain parts that still really stand out in my mind, that one being one of them for some reason.
Ebonyswanne
Ebonyswanne Gatchamaniac posted 20 Dec 2008 01:25
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Cd I'm catching up on my reading...will read it soon I promise!
Springie
Springie Her Royal Fluffiness...Swan of Swans... posted 20 Dec 2008 02:22
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Oh, CD! That was beautiful!! I was tearing up at the end! I love the fact that Chief A has to wear the hat...and Joe as Santa was perfect! And I love the Little House books (loved the show, too)...what a perfect excerpt for this story!! You are an amazing writer...please continue to share your lovely writing with us!Heart Huggles
clouddancer
clouddancer Gatchamaniac posted 20 Dec 2008 12:03
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Thank you so much Springie. I am glad you enjoyed it. I have always loved your fics as well and wished I could write half as well as you do. That this story moved you so deeply is gratifying. It tells me I must be doing something right.
clouddancer
clouddancer Gatchamaniac posted 20 Dec 2008 12:04
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Originally posted by Ebonyswanne Cd I'm catching up on my reading...will read it soon I promise!
When ever you get time Ebony, I know you are kept busy with your two little ones and writing the next part of your fic.
Hinotori
Hinotori Babbling Loonie posted 21 Dec 2008 09:32
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Ooh! CD has posted a new fic!!! I will read this as soon as I have the chance. Can't wait!!! dance
clouddancer
clouddancer Gatchamaniac posted 21 Dec 2008 11:05
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Whenever you get the chance Hino.
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