Here is my next fic. This takes place the day following the plane crash and my Promises story. Enjoy. Thank you to TJ for beta reading, offering suggestions and helping come up with the title. And thank you to everyone else who has supported me to post another story. Forbidden Flight part 1

It looks like the clicky thing worked again. I have to go back and check how to do that every time. I do not do it enough yet.

And here is the next part. Forbidden Flight part 2 I will post more tomorrow.

Your fics always suck me in and make me forgo everything else. I am so going to read this when my Xmas fic is done! SJ

Why thank you SJ. But you do know who you are talking about right? I have only written one fic, so how can THEY suck you in? (Sorry I am playing, badly, with words.)

CD, this is a great fic! It would suck anyone in! Uh... that wasn't quite what I meant... Anyhow, I think you are doing a terrific job crafting a rich AU!

And here is the next part. Here is some more

And finally the conclusion. Enjoy it everyone. Conclusion (ooops made a mistake with the link that time. Lets hope it is fixed now.)

I love the ending to this, CD! It's an ending, and yet, as we also know, a beginning... very deep!

Well Done CD... I liked the way you wrote about Marks feelings and his withdrawal from everyone after the loss of his mother. I liked Tiny's little deception in this too. He gets very few good roles in fics and you did an excellent job of making more than just a dope...sneaky bugger but I liked it...it's the best I have read about him in a story in while. Cronus!!!mmm he doesn't deserve a son like Mark! Lucky Mark has Anderson to look out for him from a young age! A good foundation story for your AU CD!

I am glad you liked it Ebony. The next one I am working on will lay even more foundation. Unfortunately I seem to be stuck right now. (So I have gone back to working on another story, which I have been stuck on for a while.) It is interesting, the history of my team seems to be changing very slightly. Well Anderson's roll in it and his 'parenting' skills of Mark. I can see differences as I write and focus on this new story compared to the one I just posted. Perhaps that is why I am stuck.

That could be CD, but you will find there will be changes in your original ideas as you write it. I feel the changes you make at times as you go along are really improvements on the original idea. Just make sure you keep an eye on the plot when you make changes...just so you don't head down a wrong path and leave loose ends to things you started in another part of the story... I'm looking forward to reading more. I'm glad your not making them all look perfect, all parents stuff up occasionally.

Thank you for the encouragement Ebony. It helps to know some one or three, enjoy my stories. At least .... it helps when I thnk about the time it takes to write down my stories. I keep thinking can enjoy them all on my own. It certainly takes a lot less time to imagine a story then in does to write it down.

CD why don't you start posting at F.Fiction, its another good place to start and there are lots of people who like to read the type of stories that you write. Just sign up, thats the first place I ever posted a story.

Originally posted by Ebonyswanne CD why don't you start posting at F.Fiction, its another good place to start and there are lots of people who like to read the type of stories that you write. Just sign up, thats the first place I ever posted a story.

Thanks Ebony and I have considered that. But I think I will stick to the little group here. (It is that confidence thing again.)

Once you have posted a bit more here, you can always post at ff.net later on, CD!

That is my hope.

CD I am enjoying being immersed in your AU. Cant wait for more!

Thank you FB. I have worried no one would like this part of my AU, too much character building and very little action.

Nothing wrong with character building CD

Originally posted by clouddancer Thank you FB. I have worried no one would like this part of my AU, too much character building and very little action.

If you look, CD, there are lots of fics with little to no action.

Originally posted by clouddancer

Originally posted by Ebonyswanne CD why don't you start posting at F.Fiction, its another good place to start and there are lots of people who like to read the type of stories that you write. Just sign up, thats the first place I ever posted a story.

Thanks Ebony and I have considered that. But I think I will stick to the little group here. (It is that confidence thing again.)

Alright CD!!! stop playing with me here...your grammar for a start is way better than mine!!!! This confidence thing...well you know just take steps at time and the next thing you know you'll not be so worried about what others think as much as you do now...Action i great but it needs foundations which is what is happening in you AU now!

I'm with Ebony... I think CD's fics would do just fine in other arenas. But it's HER decision. All we can do is bring out the weapons....

Cloud stands behind the with her ficcie, protecting it. No weapons allowed around my ficcies please.

Originally posted by Transmute Jun

Originally posted by clouddancer Thank you FB. I have worried no one would like this part of my AU, too much character building and very little action.

If you look, CD, there are lots of fics with little to no action.

Yes, mines. You can skip over the actions scenes if you know how to attract the reader's attention with a good description . Keep writing, CD, It's the only way you can improve!