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Last post by Firebird 29 Dec 2007 06:29
Yes I have a ficcie,
It is not far from being finished but I have had to clean up parts...
Here it is;
It's only days from Christmas and the SNT haven't been in the Christmas spirit, lots have happened to them all in the past year, and the loss of their base was the final straw. So Jun feels she is the one who has to restore the Christmas spirit to the team. But then Jun has a Christmas wish that doesn't involve presents.Will Jun get her Christmas wish.
But then they are sent on a mission to the International Christmas fair in Paris and they are to go in undercover to try and find out why people have gone missing from the Fair.
The question still remains...Why did the Eagle end up on a park bench last Christmas, and the Condor always gets Miss Christmas in his bed, but will he succeed this year?
But Berg Katse has a Christmas wish as well...and Katse has the ultimate Mecha to totally ruin Christmas and take over the world...
Merry Christmas Gatchaman.
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3924103/1/All_I_want_for_Christmas_is_five_birds_in_a_Cage
Read and laughed Ebony! You definitely are into a romantic mood now!
I hope I'll finish Experimentation required till Christams!
I hope I'll finish Experimentation required till Christams!
Originally posted by Ebonyswanne The question still remains...Why did the Eagle end up on a park bench last Christmas, and the Condor always gets Miss Christmas in his bed, but will he succeed this year? http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3924103/1/All_I_want_for_Christmas_is_five_birds_in_a_CageThat's how the things work for the Eagle. Not that he couldn't land any time in a certain Swan's bed! Now, I'm wondering , which will be Katze's present? Or shall I say punishment?
Ebonyswanne
Gatchamaniac
posted 2 Dec 2007 03:41
Nothing like a bit of smut to get a Chrissy fic going...
SWOON...I am loving this one, Ebony! Dr. Snowman had me rofl! And I am hoping our two birdies get more alone time together to finish what they started!
I am really enjoying everyone's Xmas stuff...
*starts humming*
All I want for Xmas is angst & smut...
Transmute Jun
Queen of the Bird Missiles
posted 2 Dec 2007 13:32
This is great, Ebony! But your hint about Miss Christmas and the Condor has me wondering... Will THIS year's Miss Christmas have long blonde hair and a maniacal laugh? Yes, I'm thinking of this:
Ebonyswanne
Gatchamaniac
posted 2 Dec 2007 14:22
Maybe...I'm in the process of writing up the Christmas Fair at the moment. I want it finished this week.
Ebonyswanne
Gatchamaniac
posted 3 Dec 2007 02:40
Originally posted by Transmute Jun This is great, Ebony! But your hint about Miss Christmas and the Condor has me wondering... Will THIS year's Miss Christmas have long blonde hair and a maniacal laugh? Yes, I'm thinking of this:You know that picture go me thinking...mmmm
Here is the next two chapters...It won't be a long drawn out story, just a funny christmas one.
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3924103/1/All_I_want_for_Christmas_is_five_birds_in_a_Cage
Originally posted by Transmute Jun This is great, Ebony! But your hint about Miss Christmas and the Condor has me wondering... Will THIS year's Miss Christmas have long blonde hair and a maniacal laugh? Yes, I'm thinking of this:Having Xmas tunes piped in all night at the store, I just can't help but think of Katse singing... "Santa Baby...just slip a sable under the tree for me...been an awful good girl..Santa baby..so hurry down the chimney tonight..."
Transmute Jun
Queen of the Bird Missiles
posted 3 Dec 2007 06:26
Somehow, Kimi, I think Katse wants more than a sable... how about a sable mecha?
Ooh, Ebony, new chapters! Off to look!
Ooh, Ebony, new chapters! Off to look!
TJ...the only thing I can think of right now is..
"Santa honey, one little thing I really need, the deed to a Uranium mine..."
Transmute Jun
Queen of the Bird Missiles
posted 3 Dec 2007 07:20
Ooh, ooh, ooh.... Jun will be Miss Christmas! And I'm wondering about that miniature God Phoenix... did Katse already miniaturize the real thing or will it be used as a decoy later on when he THINKS he has? Oh, so many possibilities...
I am really enjoying this!!!!
I had the thoughts about Katse...and that "Santa baby"song as well, which is one of my fav's Chrissy song...
I will all come together TJ, yes she is going to accidently end in the paget...hehehee and guess who one of the judges is....
The model Phoenix will come into it later...
I think its a very witty story.
And Jinpei believing in santa? hurhurhur
Thanks Tengu, I'm not sure if people get my sense of humour sometimes.
Here is the next chapter, it should be all finished by the end of the week...
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3924103/6/All_I_want_for_Christmas_is_five_birds_in_a_Cage
Transmute Jun
Queen of the Bird Missiles
posted 4 Dec 2007 15:21
OMG... Katse is so.... (Dare I say it?) CATTY!!!!!!! ROTFL!!!!
I love this bit!
I love this bit!
Did you guess who Jun's Fashion co-ordinator is fro the Paget...the next chapter covers that part...
Transmute Jun
Queen of the Bird Missiles
posted 4 Dec 2007 17:30
Originally posted by Ebonyswanne Did you guess who Jun's Fashion co-ordinator is fro the Paget...the next chapter covers that part...Well, blue eyes give s good hint....
Ebonyswanne
Gatchamaniac
posted 4 Dec 2007 17:44
I got a good flow happening with it...The story is just coming together well. I have notes and I'm just typing them up. But then I'll take a break to do some reading... once this fic is done. I'm missing to much in other peoples stories..
Transmute Jun
Queen of the Bird Missiles
posted 4 Dec 2007 17:46
The other stories will still be around when your'e done, Ebony. Don't worry.
I think Christmas wouls be well spent drinking myself to death on a tropical island somewhere.....lol
Transmute Jun
Queen of the Bird Missiles
posted 4 Dec 2007 18:32
Originally posted by Toneman I think Christmas wouls be well spent drinking myself to death on a tropical island somewhere.....lolI think Sosai has a Christmas Card he made like that... Let me see if I can find it...
Ebonyswanne
Gatchamaniac
posted 5 Dec 2007 01:25
Originally posted by Toneman I think Christmas wouls be well spent drinking myself to death on a tropical island somewhere.....lolNahhhhh just write more fics!
I have written up some more from my notes...
I hope you like it
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3924103/7/All_I_want_for_Christmas_is_five_birds_in_a_Cage
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3924103/7/All_I_want_for_Christmas_is_five_birds_in_a_Cage
Hi Everyone
I have just managed to get another chapter typed up again...I hope you like it Cheers!
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3924103/8/All_I_want_for_Christmas_is_five_birds_in_a_Cage
I'll be reading when I get home from work!
Transmute Jun
Queen of the Bird Missiles
posted 10 Dec 2007 06:14
I'll be reading it shortly!!!!!
Ebonyswanne
Gatchamaniac
posted 10 Dec 2007 13:21
I'll be working on getting more done again tonight to get it finished, you since I had to do most of it again I changed some parts. They didn't effect the earlier part of the story though...
clouddancer
Gatchamaniac
posted 10 Dec 2007 14:48
Originally posted by Ebonyswanne Hi Everyone I have just managed to get another chapter typed up again...I hope you like it Cheers! http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3924103/8/All_I_want_for_Christmas_is_five_birds_in_a_CageEbony I hope you do not mind I am leaving reading this one until it is all posted. I am in the middle of reading so many fics being posted in pieces, I am getting confused with what is happening in each one.
Transmute Jun
Queen of the Bird Missiles
posted 10 Dec 2007 15:13
I just want to see a drawing of Jun in that bathing suit!!!!
Ebonyswanne
Gatchamaniac
posted 10 Dec 2007 19:04
Thats OK CD, you won't have to wait to long...I just had to re type up from Chapter 7..
Ebonyswanne
Gatchamaniac
posted 10 Dec 2007 19:05
Originally posted by Transmute Jun I just want to see a drawing of Jun in that bathing suit!!!!You wait until you see what else he picked up...
Transmute Jun
Queen of the Bird Missiles
posted 10 Dec 2007 21:20
Originally posted by EbonyswanneOMG, I'm afraid to ask....Originally posted by Transmute Jun I just want to see a drawing of Jun in that bathing suit!!!!You wait until you see what else he picked up...
Ebonyswanne
Gatchamaniac
posted 11 Dec 2007 00:08
Well I'm getting to best parts again now, and I hope it will be finished early next week.
Transmute Jun
Queen of the Bird Missiles
posted 11 Dec 2007 06:10
We're looking forward to it!
I went to post the next chapter on F.Fic net but they are having issues...so it is Archives...
I have permission to use Katseama's picture of Katse dressed up in her evening gown for the story! It fits so well with the character of Miss Iceland.
http://www.gatchfanfic.com/viewstory.php?sid=673
Transmute Jun
Queen of the Bird Missiles
posted 12 Dec 2007 15:31
Oh, good, I thought I was the only one having issues posting chapters to ff.net...
Off to read your chapter, Ebony!
Ebonyswanne
Gatchamaniac
posted 12 Dec 2007 20:35
It's still not approved yet I noticed, hopefully by tomorrow it will be.
The link wasn't working...but I think I have it now...
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3924103/9/All_I_want_for_Christmas_is_five_birds_in_a_Cage
Here is some more for anyone who is still reading it.
Cheers Ebony.
Transmute Jun
Queen of the Bird Missiles
posted 13 Dec 2007 06:58
I'll be reading it this morning!!!!
Ebonyswanne
Gatchamaniac
posted 13 Dec 2007 14:24
It's not too far from being finished, I didn't want it to be a long ficcie.
Transmute Jun
Queen of the Bird Missiles
posted 13 Dec 2007 14:30
I managed to get some time to read it this afternoon, and the plot certainly is thickening! Katse is sooo vindictive...
Ebonyswanne
Gatchamaniac
posted 13 Dec 2007 15:05
Thats Katse for you! LOL
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3924103/11/All_I_want_for_Christmas_is_five_birds_in_a_Cage
But wait there's more! I have added more chapters since this post...
I hope to have it all posted by the middle of next week...
Cheers Ebony...
Transmute Jun
Queen of the Bird Missiles
posted 16 Dec 2007 16:44
I love this, Ebony! I want to see what the mini-Gatch team do to the Rudolph mecha!!!!
This is sooo funny... Why am I picturing a Gulliver's Travels kind of thing happening to Katse?
Ebonyswanne
Gatchamaniac
posted 16 Dec 2007 18:02
Well since I had to redo a lot somethings changed a bit from what I originally had in mind...
I'm glad your liking it!
Well I have the next chapter up...I'll see how much I can get done today,
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3924103/13/All_I_want_for_Christmas_is_five_birds_in_a_Cage
Katse Dolls, eh?
I have a Zoltar action figure, Berg, can I join Gallactor now?
Transmute Jun
Queen of the Bird Missiles
posted 18 Dec 2007 16:31
You know, I have a Zoltar doll too... the one with the removeable heads. Which is funny, because in BOTP Zoltar was never unmasked.
BTW, Ebony, I LOVE the latest chapter!
Ebonyswanne
Gatchamaniac
posted 18 Dec 2007 18:19
I just had this image of Katse getting upset that he was not a popular doll...but I'm almost done. I lost my notes for it so I had to draw on memory...your gonna love the ending and what happens at new year...
clouddancer
Gatchamaniac
posted 19 Dec 2007 19:15
I see this over on the Gatchaman Archives Ebony.
Is it done yet! Should I start reading it?
Now that TJ is nearing the end of hers and SJ has finished her Fic, I am in need of somthing else to sink my teeth into.
Maybe I will start reading tomorrow and hope you have finish by the time I get to the end.
Ebonyswanne
Gatchamaniac
posted 19 Dec 2007 19:30
It is almost done CD, so you are safe to start reading it. I want it all done soon as I;m going traveling to family over Christmas.
Transmute Jun
Queen of the Bird Missiles
posted 19 Dec 2007 20:02
I love this new chapter, Ebony! I was
at Joe's reaction to the G2's demise! Typical Condor!!!!!
at Joe's reaction to the G2's demise! Typical Condor!!!!!
Well I have posted chapter 16, it is a bit longer than I wanted it to be, but then I don't skim out on filling gaps in plots...sooo I put it from chapter 15 because the two were done today.
I have only 2 chapters left and it is all done...so enjoy!
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3924103/15/All_I_want_for_Christmas_is_five_birds_in_a_Cage
Transmute Jun
Queen of the Bird Missiles
posted 20 Dec 2007 07:06
I'm off to read!!!!!
LOL! Somehow I picture models being so catty as Katse!
Transmute Jun
Queen of the Bird Missiles
posted 20 Dec 2007 09:35
Awwww......
I'm crying... so sweet....
I'm crying... so sweet....
Ebonyswanne
Gatchamaniac
posted 20 Dec 2007 13:06
just 2 more chapters to go
Glad you liked it TJ.
Glad you liked it TJ.
clouddancer
Gatchamaniac
posted 20 Dec 2007 18:30
Ebony, I am on Chapter 13 and am loving this.
I have not stopped laughing.
Thanks CD!
I have posted Chapter 17, the Epilogue may have to wait, I'm flat out packing to go away to see the family for Christmas and we leave on Sunday. It's what happens on New Years eve and your gonna love it I know.
Anyway, you may have to read it in the links I give because in Archives- Transmute I may not have time to finish posting it...
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3924103/17/All_I_want_for_Christmas_is_five_birds_in_a_Cage
Transmute Jun
Queen of the Bird Missiles
posted 21 Dec 2007 07:20
Oh... so much to read... and I ahve to run! But I'm looking forward to it!
Ebonyswanne
Gatchamaniac
posted 21 Dec 2007 13:46
Yeah the last part did get lengthy...i just didn't want to cut it short thats all....
clouddancer
Gatchamaniac
posted 21 Dec 2007 15:26
Well I got around to reading the last few chapters this evening Ebony.
This has been a great read.
I am not sure if I will be able to read any more until after New Years, but I look forward to finding out what Katse has planned for the teams New Years Celebration.
Ebony - I was finally able to start reading your fic today. I'm up to Chapter 13 and I'm loving it!! It's so funny! I just love the whole Miss Italy/Condor "connection"! I can't wait to find out what happens when they both realize who the other was! And Ken's fashion sense is just hilarious! Two thumbs up! I can't wait to read the rest!!
Transmute Jun
Queen of the Bird Missiles
posted 21 Dec 2007 18:14
I love this last bit, Ebony... so sweet... and Katse is
! But what about the New Year's date... hmmmm?
! But what about the New Year's date... hmmmm?
Ebonyswanne
Gatchamaniac
posted 21 Dec 2007 20:54
I'll be posting it when I get back...it's a bit of twist in it, but one you'll love and it will finish it all off...
See ya soon TJ! *grins.*
Transmute Jun
Queen of the Bird Missiles
posted 22 Dec 2007 01:45
Ooh.... You're soooo evil!
Ebonyswanne
Gatchamaniac
posted 22 Dec 2007 02:55
OK its all finished I got the time to do it...so I hope you enjoy the ending and thanks for your comments and for reading the story!
Transmute Jun
Queen of the Bird Missiles
posted 22 Dec 2007 07:53
What a lovely ending... But Joe fell for Miss Italy AGAIN???? I guess those headaches are doing something to his common sense....
Ebonyswanne
Gatchamaniac
posted 23 Dec 2007 17:58
Well he always was a sucker for Galactor women...heheeee
Transmute Jun
Queen of the Bird Missiles
posted 23 Dec 2007 18:03
Great to see you, Ebony! How is your Christmas going so far?
Ebony, I loved your fic, poor Joe though.
Joe did have great sex...even if they didn't know it was the one person he hated the most, and she(Female Katse) didn't know it was the Condor....LOL I just wanted one of these innuendo's that the reader knew what was going on even if the characters didn't.
Thanks for reading guys. I cleaned it up more in the text. I found some minor errors..sigh. But I finally posted it here.
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