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Last post by Transmute Jun 21 Dec 2007 18:16
I am amazed, but my gigantic fic is finally done! I will be posting it in pieces, and I hope you can all manage to stick with it until it is completed.
So sit back, relax, and tune in to today's installment of Invasion of the G-Force Snatchers !
Ahhh
TJ....I'm still reading part 8...you go so fast with things...I'm, exhausted trying to keep up with you! LOL
But this is a story with it all! I love it, and the plot is just getting better. I can tell you have a real flow with it...
Transmute Jun
Queen of the Bird Missiles
posted 28 Nov 2007 16:10
LOL... it will be awhile before I get to posting those bits. I still want your feedback! 
Gasp!
TJ is posting before she her beta readers have finished reading? What happened to NOT posting until the fic was finished?
Transmute Jun
Queen of the Bird Missiles
posted 28 Nov 2007 17:04
The fic is finished. I have been writing this for nearly 3 months and I wanted to start posting it. It was an albatross around my neck, I tell you!!!! 
Transmute Jun
Queen of the Bird Missiles
posted 29 Nov 2007 06:49
Okay, new chapters are up...
http://gatchfanfic.com/efiction/viewstory.php?sid=670&chapter=4
TJ will you post in on Fanfiction.Net too?
Ebonyswanne
Gatchamaniac
posted 29 Nov 2007 14:17
TJ you did well with this one. I don't think you have done a fic like this ever, and the plot is great!
Transmute Jun
Queen of the Bird Missiles
posted 29 Nov 2007 14:41
Originally posted by Ebonyswanne TJ you did well with this one. I don't think you have done a fic like this ever, and the plot is great!I'm not sure what you mean by 'a fic like this', but I have done an 'epic' one before (Sunset) and also a couple of 'take the mickey out of BOTP' fics (Exercise in Futility, Prom Night). But it is the first fic I have where Zoltar infiltrates G-Force.
Amy, yes, it is also at ff.net. I just think the archive site looks better.
Okay, new chapters...
http://gatchfanfic.com/efiction/viewstory.php?sid=670&chapter=7
TJ, I am really enjoying this and the confusion Zoltar has over
Panty Alerts, Ping Pong, etc.
And what has been done/added to Mark to keep him in line?
I'm anxiously waiting to read more. 
Transmute Jun
Queen of the Bird Missiles
posted 3 Dec 2007 06:27
And new chapters today, to celebrate the Fanfic Archives being back up...
Enjoy!
clouddancer
Gatchamaniac
posted 3 Dec 2007 14:24
Ummm, is it just me or is anyone else having problems getting the page to come up?
Even when I go to TJ's page , and look for the story it only shows 9 chapters are available. What am I doing wrong? 
clouddancer
Gatchamaniac
posted 3 Dec 2007 15:25
It's working, it's working. 
I am going to go do some reading.
I am going to go do some reading.
Transmute Jun
Queen of the Bird Missiles
posted 3 Dec 2007 15:37
Originally posted by clouddancer Ummm, is it just me or is anyone else having problems getting the page to come up? Even when I go to TJ's page , and look for the story it only shows 9 chapters are available. What am I doing wrong?Until they approve the fic, you won't see the new chapters listed. But if you follow the link I originally gave, it should work.
clouddancer
Gatchamaniac
posted 3 Dec 2007 16:00
Now when I click on the link it works. I get the text. Earlier all I was getting was a blank page. 
*Cloud shrugs* it must have passed inspection. Either that or by visiting the gatchafanfic sites main page I changed some setting on my computer.
Cloud thinks, hmmmm 
Maybe since the new site is up I should go empty my cache so I do not keep old info from the old site.
*Cloud shrugs* it must have passed inspection. Either that or by visiting the gatchafanfic sites main page I changed some setting on my computer.
Cloud thinks, hmmmm Maybe since the new site is up I should go empty my cache so I do not keep old info from the old site.
Transmute Jun
Queen of the Bird Missiles
posted 3 Dec 2007 17:44
Yes, they changed the URL, so make sure you update your bookmarks!
Thanks for the warning on the update bookmarks..
TJ I have throughly enjoyed reading this fic.... your confusion and changes of understanding are so real lifelike. Can't wait to see more!
Transmute Jun
Queen of the Bird Missiles
posted 4 Dec 2007 05:51
I'm glad you're enjoying it, GG! And if you want more, here it is!
http://gatchfanfic.com/viewstory.php?sid=670&textsize=0&chapter=13
Enjoy!
Transmute Jun
Queen of the Bird Missiles
posted 4 Dec 2007 15:25
Originally posted by Tengu Its great Zoltar has BLUE eyes, thoughThat he does. But on the mask they are often a green hue.
Transmute Jun
Queen of the Bird Missiles
posted 5 Dec 2007 07:13
More new chapters for your reading pleasure...
http://gatchfanfic.com/viewstory.php?sid=670&chapter=16
Ebonyswanne
Gatchamaniac
posted 5 Dec 2007 13:31
TJ this is one of your best stories, you go into such depth with the plot...and it's funny too.
Yipe! cross between a pogo stick and a model T ford!
scary!
Transmute Jun
Queen of the Bird Missiles
posted 5 Dec 2007 16:22
Originally posted by Tengu Yipe! cross between a pogo stick and a model T ford! scary!I know... I can barely picture it, but I just wanted a ludicrous image in the reader's mind... glad to know it worked!
Originally posted by Transmute JunWayOriginally posted by Tengu Its great Zoltar has BLUE eyes, thoughThat he does. But on the mask they are often a green hue.
Okay TJ, now it is happening on this site. When I use Safari, I see that blue question mark again, instead of your Katse image. In Firefox I get nothing, not even a sign an image should be in your post. Very frustrating. 
Sorry every one else can ignore this post it is just another topic TJ and I have been talking about.
clouddancer
Gatchamaniac
posted 5 Dec 2007 16:56
Well guess what, now that I have quoted your post, forcing my computer to acknowledge that link, the picture shows up both in my previous post and in your post
I really do not understand this. I guess I will just go back to my "I know nothing about computers and I am afraid of them frame of mind" and leave things be.
Cloud wanders off.
Transmute Jun
Queen of the Bird Missiles
posted 5 Dec 2007 20:17
Glad you could see it, CD! 
Transmute Jun
Queen of the Bird Missiles
posted 6 Dec 2007 06:30
More chapters for the day:
http://gatchfanfic.com/viewstory.php?sid=670&textsize=0&chapter=19
Aww, there is something so incredibly just about making Zoltar do Marks work....
Transmute Jun
Queen of the Bird Missiles
posted 6 Dec 2007 12:10
Originally posted by Tengu Aww, there is something so incredibly just about making Zoltar do Marks work....You know, that was the original idea for the fic. What if Zoltar could REALLY see Mark's life? How he has no money, lives in a beat-up shack, plays ping pong, has a mile-long tab at Jill's, etc. And even though the fic ended up deviating away from that, there is still a healthy dose of it. Zoltar is in power because of his birth and (perhaps) his way with words. Makr has power because of his abilities and personal character. There really is a big difference etween the two.
Transmute Jun
Queen of the Bird Missiles
posted 7 Dec 2007 06:30
Okay, the plot thickens... and takes a sharp right turn, in today's installments!
http://gatchfanfic.com/viewstory.php?sid=670&chapter=22
clouddancer
Gatchamaniac
posted 7 Dec 2007 07:27
Originally posted by Transmute Jun Okay, the plot thickens... and takes a sharp right turn, in today's installments! http://gatchfanfic.com/viewstory.php?sid=670&chapter=22ohhhh! And I have to wait until tonight.
Oh, my! Zoltar has cleaned Marks shack!
I never knew his depravity decended to such depths...
I wrote a fic in which an annoying third party intercedes between the LO and President Kane.
G force and Zoltars interference is not welcomed.
Transmute Jun
Queen of the Bird Missiles
posted 7 Dec 2007 15:43
Originally posted by Tengu I wrote a fic in which an annoying third party intercedes between the LO and President Kane.I don't think I've read that one. Can you provide a link?
Not finished yet, in fact Im not sure if it will finish.
But the idea of kane and the spirit sitting at a conference table is a nice one
Transmute Jun
Queen of the Bird Missiles
posted 8 Dec 2007 08:06
Does the Great Spirit 'sit'? Or is it Kane in a chair at an empty conference table and this giant viewscreen (with the chicken head on it) at the other end?
Or is it Kane in a chair at an empty conference table and this giant viewscreen (with the chicken head on it) at the other end?
clouddancer
Gatchamaniac
posted 8 Dec 2007 17:11
So is Mark and Xan's plan going to work out?
Will there finally be peace in the universe?
Tune in next time, .........
Transmute Jun
Queen of the Bird Missiles
posted 8 Dec 2007 19:55
Well, there is quite a bit to go. We will see if peace can be achieved....
Ebonyswanne
Gatchamaniac
posted 9 Dec 2007 14:35
I loved that part when Zoltar spring cleans the shack...
clouddancer
Gatchamaniac
posted 9 Dec 2007 14:41
And how is Mark going to feel about all this cleaning when he gets back?
Transmute Jun
Queen of the Bird Missiles
posted 9 Dec 2007 16:22
You know, I had originally intended for that to be a big joke, but with my changed direction, it's more left up to the imagination of the reader....
Ebonyswanne
Gatchamaniac
posted 10 Dec 2007 02:55
I know, but I didn't want to spoil it Damn it!
Can you just do a cameo for it...please....I did beg you to do it!
I thought it would be a funny thing, and I did tell you to do it...Alright...CD you'll love the ending...
Sigh...I'm trying not to give anything away with this...but I feel that is the a great plot with good twists...
I still go back and read parts of it...
Transmute Jun
Queen of the Bird Missiles
posted 10 Dec 2007 06:16
And for those of you intrigued, I've put up more...
http://gatchfanfic.com/viewstory.php?sid=670&chapter=25
Transmute Jun
Queen of the Bird Missiles
posted 10 Dec 2007 06:17
Originally posted by Ebonyswanne I know, but I didn't want to spoil it Damn it! Can you just do a cameo for it...please....I did beg you to do it!You know, I wanted to, I really did! But somehow, I just wasn't able to work it in and keep the story flow going...
Transmute Jun
Queen of the Bird Missiles
posted 11 Dec 2007 06:18
New chapters for today.
http://gatchfanfic.com/viewstory.php?sid=670&textsize=0&chapter=28
Transmute Jun
Queen of the Bird Missiles
posted 12 Dec 2007 05:36
clouddancer
Gatchamaniac
posted 12 Dec 2007 09:55
Oh dear! I got busy yesterday and forgot about this one.
Now I have 6 chapters to read tonight.
Originally posted by amyltrer TJ what had happen to the true swan?What!!!! Oh boy now I REALLY need to get home and catch up on my reading, if something has happened to the Swan.
Transmute Jun
Queen of the Bird Missiles
posted 12 Dec 2007 13:27
Originally posted by amyltrer TJ what had happen to the true swan?That will be revealed.... but let's just say that Mark's pretty much on the right track with his suppositions.
clouddancer
Gatchamaniac
posted 12 Dec 2007 14:45
Well I have just finished reading.
Great stuff so far TJ.
Mark is right when he says
?You don?t know the half of it.?
What a twisted web TJ weaves.
Ebonyswanne
Gatchamaniac
posted 12 Dec 2007 15:04
Originally posted by Tengu Its great Zoltar has BLUE eyes, thoughDid they change it for BOTP??? Sorry TJ I didn't pick up on that.
Transmute Jun
Queen of the Bird Missiles
posted 12 Dec 2007 15:34
Originally posted by clouddancer Well I have just finished reading. Great stuff so far TJ. Mark is right when he says ?You don?t know the half of it.? What a twisted web TJ weaves.LOL... when the plot changed, I had already been planning on having Mark switch with Princess.... and I just HAD to leave it in. Too much storyline potential to cut it out...
Transmute Jun
Queen of the Bird Missiles
posted 13 Dec 2007 07:02
Ebonyswanne
Gatchamaniac
posted 13 Dec 2007 15:18
You know I read that story for you over such a long time that I had to go ans read parts again just to make sure I didn't miss things.
I did read the last part a few times, just because it moved so fast...I got a bit confused when you switched Mark and Princess, but when I read it again it worked for me. I just didn't focus on it enough at the time I first read it.
But in your BOTP stories I love this one the most...
clouddancer
Gatchamaniac
posted 13 Dec 2007 15:26
Originally posted by Transmute Jun Mark to the rescue!Go Mark, Go! Return everything to its proper place. An interesting thought though. Mark must have really knock Zoltar out for him to remain unconscious for so long. Either that or the trip to Spectra and landing on the planet, did not take as long as I thought/felt it did.
Transmute Jun
Queen of the Bird Missiles
posted 13 Dec 2007 17:13
Originally posted by clouddancerI'm sure if Zoltar started to come around then Jason or Mark could easily put him out again.Originally posted by Transmute Jun Mark to the rescue!Go Mark, Go! Return everything to its proper place. An interesting thought though. Mark must have really knock Zoltar out for him to remain unconscious for so long. Either that or the trip to Spectra and landing on the planet, did not take as long as I thought/felt it did.
Transmute Jun
Queen of the Bird Missiles
posted 13 Dec 2007 17:15
Originally posted by Ebonyswanne I did read the last part a few times, just because it moved so fast...I got a bit confused when you switched Mark and Princess, but when I read it again it worked for me. I just didn't focus on it enough at the time I first read it. But in your BOTP stories I love this one the most...Well, it was meant to be a bit of a 'shocker' that Mark was now in Princess' body. So I couldn't really explain how it happened at first, because otherwise then it wouldn't have been a surprise... KWIM? I figured this story has already made the reader suspend reality for a bit, so what's a bit more for Mark to gain some great insights into Princess?
clouddancer
Gatchamaniac
posted 13 Dec 2007 18:29
Originally posted by Transmute JunI am sure they could. In fact I was kind of expecting it.Originally posted by clouddancerI'm sure if Zoltar started to come around then Jason or Mark could easily put him out again.Originally posted by Transmute Jun Mark to the rescue!Go Mark, Go! Return everything to its proper place. An interesting thought though. Mark must have really knock Zoltar out for him to remain unconscious for so long. Either that or the trip to Spectra and landing on the planet, did not take as long as I thought/felt it did.
either that or a discussion to occur. But I guess that is to happen latter..... I hope.... some sort of discussion between Mark and Zoltar, even if it is not one to bring about peace.
Transmute Jun
Queen of the Bird Missiles
posted 13 Dec 2007 19:30
There's a LOT more to go, so you never know what could happen...
Poor Princess, waking up in a body possessing the most beautiful hair in the galaxy....
No wonder she is traumatised.
Transmute Jun
Queen of the Bird Missiles
posted 14 Dec 2007 06:32
Originally posted by Tengu Poor Princess, waking up in a body possessing the most beautiful hair in the galaxy.... No wonder she is traumatised.She misses her lovely green color!
She can add some blue and she'll get it! However, I dubt Zoltar will be happy when he'll get his body back!
Ebonyswanne
Gatchamaniac
posted 14 Dec 2007 23:06
Originally posted by Transmute JunYeah that was well done! This story just flowed for you I can tell... So when I teach you how to do Tim tam explosions...we'll have to put it in a ficcie! it would be funny muses...Originally posted by Ebonyswanne I did read the last part a few times, just because it moved so fast...I got a bit confused when you switched Mark and Princess, but when I read it again it worked for me. I just didn't focus on it enough at the time I first read it. But in your BOTP stories I love this one the most...Well, it was meant to be a bit of a 'shocker' that Mark was now in Princess' body. So I couldn't really explain how it happened at first, because otherwise then it wouldn't have been a surprise... KWIM? I figured this story has already made the reader suspend reality for a bit, so what's a bit more for Mark to gain some great insights into Princess?
clouddancer
Gatchamaniac
posted 15 Dec 2007 06:59
TJ did not post the next chapters yesterday.
Cloud is upset. She was looking forward to something to read this weekend.
I guess I will have to watch some BOTP videos this weekend instead. 
Transmute Jun
Queen of the Bird Missiles
posted 15 Dec 2007 12:39
LOL... I was buried in exam grading yesterday. But I'll see what I can do to get something up this weekend, just for you, CD!
clouddancer
Gatchamaniac
posted 15 Dec 2007 12:48
That's okay TJ, it gives me time to do other things. (Like maybe writing.)
Transmute Jun
Queen of the Bird Missiles
posted 17 Dec 2007 08:21
Well, no more time because I was finally able to restore my missing stuff (a number of chapters disappeared) and now new chapters are posted!
http://gatchfanfic.com/viewstory.php?sid=670&chapter=37
Enjoy!
My, now Princess realises its Zoltar who put something expensive on Marks tab.
but at least she got her green hair back (bet Marks neglected it.)
Transmute Jun
Queen of the Bird Missiles
posted 17 Dec 2007 20:14
LOL.... I'm going to try and get some more chapters up... keep your fingers crossed!
And Zoltar can start conditioning his hair again...
And get fried by the LO...Mark really has put him in a tight spot.
You know I'm still reading over parts again...it is soooo funny!
I'll have to go mark it in my fav's on the sites that it's posted .
Finally caught up reading this TJ...I'm loving this to bits!! It really through me for a loop when the Swan got caught up in the switcheroo...Awesome!
Well, Zoltar's not fried yet, but you never know, with the trouble he's in. Will he survive?
We're coming towards the end of this....
Today's chapters....
Transmute Jun
Queen of the Bird Missiles
posted 18 Dec 2007 05:54
Originally posted by kimiko Finally caught up reading this TJ...I'm loving this to bits!! It really through me for a loop when the Swan got caught up in the switcheroo...Awesome!Glad you're enjoying it, Kimi! There are a few more hijinks yet to come...
clouddancer
Gatchamaniac
posted 18 Dec 2007 06:20
Originally posted by Transmute Jun Well, Zoltar's not fried yet, but you never know, with the trouble he's in. Will he survive? We're coming towards the end of this.... Today's chapters....I look forward to reading it this evening when I get home.
Transmute Jun
Queen of the Bird Missiles
posted 18 Dec 2007 16:35
Originally posted by kimikoWould you believe that was a total 'off the cuff' inspiration? I wanted to give him some ridiculous animal mecha captain costume. Lothar is so natty in the Invasion of the Space Center ep, and I needed to make him look more ridiculous...
Transmute Jun
Queen of the Bird Missiles
posted 19 Dec 2007 12:14
Okay, only 2 chapters today, but they're longer ones...
http://gatchfanfic.com/viewstory.php?sid=670&chapter=43
And for everyone who has seen/remembers Invasion of the Space Center... was my 'addition' for Mark and Princess okay? I know this is a pivotal scene in the BOTP series.
Transmute Jun
Queen of the Bird Missiles
posted 20 Dec 2007 07:07
And today, we have the big showdown!
Tomorrow... the end!
The end of the Giant Chicken! Spectra janitors will have a hard time with the cleaning-up!
Transmute Jun
Queen of the Bird Missiles
posted 21 Dec 2007 07:21
And finally, at long last....
The End
Hey, you didnt write Marks reaction to what Zoltar did to his hut!
Originally posted by Tengu Hey, you didnt write Marks reaction to what Zoltar did to his hut!I'm sure she can add a bit of ficcie. I'd like to see the Eagle's face too!
Yes, surley after defeating Cthulu he deserves pizza too?
Transmute Jun
Queen of the Bird Missiles
posted 21 Dec 2007 10:37
LOL... I had originally intended (waaaaay back, before it became a 'how the war ended' fic) that Mark and Zoltar would switch back, and due to the interference of the implant, neither one of them would remember anything. Then Mark would go back to his house to find a clean shack, a broken window, and mold in Tupperware in his fridge, not to mention a bizarre list next to his computer.
But with this ending, there just wasn't a place to put it in, and besides, Mark had pretty much figured out what had been going on in his absence anyhow. I tried writing it, and it totally disturbed the flow.
As for Zoltar... there wasn't much else to say. He's adored by his people and leading his planet without interference. And I'm sure Prin can send him a slice of pizza now and then.
And here is something else I have to do, before I leave on vacation in the wild northern regions of Ontario, finish this fic.
I am going to be very busy over the next 12- 18 hours.
(Cloud is also hoping to make it to 2100 posts before the evening is finished.) Without using only smilies in posts this time.
clouddancer
Gatchamaniac
posted 21 Dec 2007 15:44
TJ, this was beautiful.
I loved the ending.
It leaves me with a feeling of satisfaction.
Everything is "right" in the world.
You deserve a good rest after writing such a long story.
(Too bad we will not allow you to have it.) 
Transmute Jun
Queen of the Bird Missiles
posted 21 Dec 2007 18:16
LOL... I've been having my rest! I haven't been writing as much in the last few weeks, what with exams, Christmas preparation, formatting fics for posting, and preparing for my trip.
But soon... I've been hand-writing a few pages a day... I just have to get them typed up...
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