I had a bit of spare time and did this Clicky!!! Ah yesss, I am being mean to the Eagle

Interesting take, Amy... but I wonder what happened to Ego...

My poor Eagle...*sigh* but he is an a$$ in this one...what's up with him? Is it the wheelchair?

I am not sure if I would say you are being mean to the Eagle. Just showing him defeated. But there is still hope as he is training a new Eagle. As TJ says what happened to Ego? Did he continue with his plans? Is this why a new Eagle is needed?

Originally posted by clouddancer I am not sure if I would say you are being mean to the Eagle. Just showing him defeated. But there is still hope as he is training a new Eagle. As TJ says what happened to Ego? Did he continue with his plans? Is this why a new Eagle is needed?

Why Ego is fine of course! Sosai should have picked him up and transport him somewhere safe. Yes, you've got it right CD! Somebody have to stand against him and Sosai!

Amy, this is good! I love the angsty-ness of it. The suffering of Ken and the twist of him being Mark's trainer... I haven't seen any of Gatch F (I'm still working on the original series), but the way you wrote it, I was able to follow and understand the story very well.

Originally posted by Hinotori I was able to follow and understand the story very well.

Thankee! I'm glad to hear this. Usually my English is very creepy. Or that's what my teachie tells me!

Amy, your English is NOT creepy. It's yoru stories that are creey! And I love them that way...

Originally posted by Transmute Jun Amy, your English is NOT creepy. It's yoru stories that are creey! And I love them that way...

And I was thinking to write something involving supernatural. I mean reaaaaally creepy!

Originally posted by amyltrer

Originally posted by Transmute Jun Amy, your English is NOT creepy. It's yoru stories that are creey! And I love them that way...

And I was thinking to write something involving supernatural. I mean reaaaaally creepy!

Clouds ears prick up.... Supernatural?.... I will look forward to that.

It's not going to be anytime soon, CD!

Well, just put it on the back burner then. Don't give it up!

Originally posted by amyltrer Thankee! I'm glad to hear this. Usually my English is very creepy. Or that's what my teachie tells me!

Amy, your English is great! To be honest, until I read in the Christmas card thread that you were from Romania, I had not idea that English wasn't your first language! Keep up the good work and don't worry about your English - you have a better understanding of the language than some native speakers I know!

that was good Amy, I liked the twist of Mark being the next generation...poor Ken...Ego kicked his butt badly!

Amy neat fic... Your english isn't creepy...it's all those naked blue guy pictures you keep drawing for your teacher! I guess your teacher isn't an Ego fan!

Amy, that was great. The way you merge the two seems natural and wow Kens emotions are so strong here. I dont see any problem with your english either. Going to write some more?

Originally posted by Firebird Going to write some more?

Eagle bashing? Why yes, just for fun!