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Firebird
Firebird Princess Firebird..... Goddess of Swannie Fics posted 28 Oct 2007 11:14
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So as mentioned in another thread I have this reoccurring idea for a fic that is making it impossible to sleep. I have tried writing it down but that has not solved it either. It is Gatch related but I think it is a bit off canon Here is an excerpt.. "Sokar Prime, home to a place worse than hell, a prison that few survive. It was here I ended up, here that I endured things far worse than I could ever imagine. When you arrive you are taken to a small room and 'booked in'. This involves being branded on the right shoulder and then taken next door and chained in the middle of the room while you are stripped and then beaten with clubs and whips until you pass out. Home for the rest of the stay is a small cell, two metres square, with a small hole in the middle of it. This is not even the beginning of the horrors I experienced here, horrors that I will live with for the rest of my life. " Is this something you guys would be interested in reading or can someone help me get this out of my head?
clouddancer
clouddancer Gatchamaniac posted 28 Oct 2007 11:22
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Ooh Cloud wants to know if this is one of our Birdies in there? And if it is, which one is going is going through this hell?
Springie
Springie Her Royal Fluffiness...Swan of Swans... posted 28 Oct 2007 11:51
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Very interesting! Sounds like something that would happen to our poor, unfortunate Condor...Condor
Transmute Jun
Transmute Jun Queen of the Bird Missiles posted 28 Oct 2007 12:41
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Hmmmm... this reminds me a lot of the description of the French prison from Catch Me If You Can (the book... in the movie they didn't show it very well). Of course, there was no branding there.
Hinotori
Hinotori Babbling Loonie posted 28 Oct 2007 14:45 (edited 28 Oct 2007 15:43)
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I had the feeling that this was someone being "recruited" as a goon. It was just the thought that crossed my mind when I read it... It could be very interesting. I think you should continue with the story and see where it takes you. I like drama/angst type stories, so, for me, I could see this as something I would read.
SJ_SwanJun
SJ_SwanJun Forum Goddess posted 28 Oct 2007 18:09
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Ooh FB ... I love the idea!! I am thinking one of the team? Anderson? Cronus? Ooh ... so much possibility. I'll collaborate with you!! Or ... care to make it a challenge for all of us? You know how to find me if you want to play with me.. SJ
Firebird
Firebird Princess Firebird..... Goddess of Swannie Fics posted 29 Oct 2007 04:07 (edited 29 Oct 2007 04:43)
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To answer questions: It is Princess going through this. Background as follows: the war ended but in a turn of events princess is seperated from the rest of the team and ends up working on another planet. There she is tried and convicted and sent to this jail. SJ if you are willing to collaborate I will PM you all the rest of the detail (there are parts that need fleshing out, explaining) and we can get this written. Will also need a beta reader on this no doubt. What do you think SJ? (PS will be a long one)
Tengu
Tengu Forum Legend posted 29 Oct 2007 05:45
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So its not Gatchaman, how did I guess? The idea of doing a collabouration on a fic that wont complete is a good one, I may put one of mine in the pot.
Transmute Jun
Transmute Jun Queen of the Bird Missiles posted 29 Oct 2007 06:41
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FB, I'm glad you're going ahead with this. It sounds really interesting! If you want collaborators I'll throw my hat in the ring, and if not I'll stand back and wait for the wonderful story that is sure to come out of this.
Ebonyswanne
Ebonyswanne Gatchamaniac posted 29 Oct 2007 18:44
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Originally posted by Firebird To answer questions: It is Princess going through this. Background as follows: the war ended but in a turn of events princess is seperated from the rest of the team and ends up working on another planet. There she is tried and convicted and sent to this jail. SJ if you are willing to collaborate I will PM you all the rest of the detail (there are parts that need fleshing out, explaining) and we can get this written. Will also need a beta reader on this no doubt. What do you think SJ? (PS will be a long one)
Oh this looks good! The plot twists and story you could build with this idea! The team could try and rescue her from this maybe...I wonder what the reasons were for her conviction? Was the planet another threat to Earth? Was she on a mission, something from a hunch and she went out on her own? Maybe something about her past made her go there? Does she still have her communicator? Maybe a shield prevents it from working.... I know why you can't sleep FB! I can't wait to read the story and see what direction and depth you build into it.
Firebird
Firebird Princess Firebird..... Goddess of Swannie Fics posted 30 Oct 2007 02:40
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Ebony to answer your points... Team wont be rescuing her...She was convicted according to their law for something she did. This planet is part of the federation War is over so she does not have her communicator
Firebird
Firebird Princess Firebird..... Goddess of Swannie Fics posted 30 Oct 2007 02:55
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been writing some more on this and currently seeing where it goes. SJ did email you. My only concern with the collaboration is that I might drive whoever helps nuts also and I would hate to do that to such nice people.
Ebonyswanne
Ebonyswanne Gatchamaniac posted 30 Oct 2007 03:21
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Well it looks good... I figure it will be complicated...but then you know me-I like complicated! I still feel you will have to bring the team into it though, just to add interest to the story. After all even with the war over they would still look out for each other (always 5 acting as one)and it will help with character development and depth. Marks reaction to what she did and Jason's, the Keyop who always looked up to her and Tiny. Princess was always strong but compassionate, I'm interested to see how she copes in this situation. And why she would put herself in such a situation. For Princess I think she would do it to protect a loved one, she would feel strongly about why she would did it. Mark being a boy scout would want to know why, and possibly reject her over it, but then maybe he might stand by her when he finds out the reason. Sorry FB I'm getting carried away in my own thoughts about the idea you have presented... It would have to be a long story to cover the plot you have in mind... I'm looking forward to seeing what you come up with!
Firebird
Firebird Princess Firebird..... Goddess of Swannie Fics posted 30 Oct 2007 05:08
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If anything my main concern about this is the dark turn in it. I would have to rate it for adults only and certainly not for the screamish. Things happen in it that are worse than some can imagine (no idea why I ended up with them) Team will be in there but it will be a while before they feature. The other thing is that some will behave in ways beyond the 'canon' for them.
Transmute Jun
Transmute Jun Queen of the Bird Missiles posted 30 Oct 2007 06:22
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Originally posted by Firebird been writing some more on this and currently seeing where it goes. SJ did email you. My only concern with the collaboration is that I might drive whoever helps nuts also and I would hate to do that to such nice people.
Well I can't speak for everyone, but I'm already nuts. Silly However, I respect your decision. Huggles
Transmute Jun
Transmute Jun Queen of the Bird Missiles posted 30 Oct 2007 06:23
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Originally posted by Firebird If anything my main concern about this is the dark turn in it. I would have to rate it for adults only and certainly not for the screamish. Things happen in it that are worse than some can imagine (no idea why I ended up with them) Team will be in there but it will be a while before they feature. The other thing is that some will behave in ways beyond the 'canon' for them.
FB, this is sounding more and more intersting! I am really looking forward to what you come up with! I am guessing that Princess got herself into some kind of Papillon/Les Miz situation in terms of breaking the law.
Firebird
Firebird Princess Firebird..... Goddess of Swannie Fics posted 30 Oct 2007 09:32
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If you are brave enough TJ I will send some of what I am referring to via email. I have been typing off and on and it is seven pages long now
Tengu
Tengu Forum Legend posted 30 Oct 2007 10:38
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Seven pages, is that all? Im trying to finish a fic (and G3 coincidentaly ends up in quod too) but its tricky I have a feeling, all sorts of things couldd go perry fruit shaped for the team after the war if not given help.
Firebird
Firebird Princess Firebird..... Goddess of Swannie Fics posted 30 Oct 2007 11:54 (edited 30 Oct 2007 11:55)
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I started writing it the day before I posted and have been doing little bits at a time to try to see if I can get away from one particular part of it but in the end I have decided to just put that part in and when done it can be marked up with a warning. Prior to that I wrote little notes that did not make a story because they jumped all over the place. This is more in story format now and is currently growning by the day.
Tengu
Tengu Forum Legend posted 30 Oct 2007 14:39
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I started a fic on Zoltar in full SM mode It wasnt even graphic but the implications were there so I scrubbed that one
Hinotori
Hinotori Babbling Loonie posted 30 Oct 2007 15:35
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Originally posted by Firebird Ebony to answer your points... Team wont be rescuing her...She was convicted according to their law for something she did. This planet is part of the federation War is over so she does not have her communicator
Ooh, FB, this sounds good! I love the whole "the cavalry doesn't always swoop in and save the day in a heartbeat" type stories. A little drama is nice (or in this case, alot of drama!) I'd be interested to see how Princess not only copes, but maybe gets herself either out or in a better position on her own. Of course I would expect the rest (or at least) some of her former teammates to come and rescue her, but not right off the bat. Sorry, I'm babbling again... Can't wait to see how this one goes for you! Hinotori
Transmute Jun
Transmute Jun Queen of the Bird Missiles posted 30 Oct 2007 16:38
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Originally posted by Firebird If you are brave enough TJ I will send some of what I am referring to via email. I have been typing off and on and it is seven pages long now
I am brave! Send me! Send me! Poke Grin
Transmute Jun
Transmute Jun Queen of the Bird Missiles posted 30 Oct 2007 16:40
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Originally posted by Tengu I started a fic on Zoltar in full SM mode It wasnt even graphic but the implications were there so I scrubbed that one
JMHO, but if that's the fic you want to write, why don't you? There are sites out there that accept these kinds of stories. Just because ff.net doesn't shouldn't cause you to give it up, if that's what you want to do.
SJ_SwanJun
SJ_SwanJun Forum Goddess posted 30 Oct 2007 17:00
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Got your email FB - it sent to Flash's email addy so I didn't get it until tonight. I'm feeling unwell due to some roofing being done across the road from the office for the past two days (I am pretty much at ground zero for the fumes - I hate the smell of asphalt) so I am calling it an early night, Will email you tomorrow with my thoughtd (which are all darn positive if you ask me!!) THis will be fun, and such a pleasure to write alongside ya!!! SJ
Ebonyswanne
Ebonyswanne Gatchamaniac posted 30 Oct 2007 23:46 (edited 30 Oct 2007 23:46)
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Well it sounds like a great idea FB and I look forward to reading what you come up with! It's great that it looks like it is not all straight forward in it's telling! Programming
Firebird
Firebird Princess Firebird..... Goddess of Swannie Fics posted 31 Oct 2007 00:45
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Originally posted by Transmute Jun
Originally posted by Firebird If you are brave enough TJ I will send some of what I am referring to via email. I have been typing off and on and it is seven pages long now
I am brave! Send me! Send me! Poke Grin
I sent that section.... Hope you still talk to me after
Ebonyswanne
Ebonyswanne Gatchamaniac posted 31 Oct 2007 02:19
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Whatis this story really about I wonder...you have me wondering now what you are going to do to the Swan...I only held back on a few things in Lightening because I would not have been able to post it in F.Fic or Archive...and it would have made the story more like a novel! Oh FB. If it is graphic then you may have to email it to me as well so I can read it...mmm I'm not shy with stories about prisons, after all one of my fav movies is the "Shawshank Redemption."and I'm a Monte Christo fan, and other prisoner based books and movies... I have a friend who works with prisoners and I hear the stories that don't make it to the papers, it would make your blood curdle as to what happens and no one hears about it... I'm just wondering what the plot is...it sounds different from other stories that would base it off Joe or Ken. I know that you going at a different angle with this. I guess thats why I keep throwing in questions.
Transmute Jun
Transmute Jun Queen of the Bird Missiles posted 31 Oct 2007 06:10
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Ebony, AFAIK there are no restrictions on the Gatchaman Fanfic Archives site (other than the standard no glorifying rape, no child porn, etc.). You just have to label the fic as 'adult'.
Transmute Jun
Transmute Jun Queen of the Bird Missiles posted 31 Oct 2007 06:11
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Originally posted by Firebird I sent that section.... Hope you still talk to me after
Ooh! Off to check...
Firebird
Firebird Princess Firebird..... Goddess of Swannie Fics posted 31 Oct 2007 08:39
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When it is finished will get it posed in the library here. May take a while though.
Transmute Jun
Transmute Jun Queen of the Bird Missiles posted 31 Oct 2007 09:05 (edited 31 Oct 2007 09:06)
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Originally posted by Firebird When it is finished will get it posed in the library here. May take a while though.
I know that feeling.... Doh Doh2
Ebonyswanne
Ebonyswanne Gatchamaniac posted 4 Nov 2007 02:47
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I'm looking forward to it! Most stories like that would be about the Condor or the Eagle. So Princess breaking the law would be interesting. I bet she had a good reason, since she was a member of G-Force, and her character was more outspoken in some ways then Jun's... But I guess I have to wait to find out...
Firebird
Firebird Princess Firebird..... Goddess of Swannie Fics posted 11 Nov 2007 08:38
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THis ended up on hold for a few weeks due to having to investigate a series of complaints at work. Should be back at it soon.
Ebonyswanne
Ebonyswanne Gatchamaniac posted 11 Nov 2007 19:13
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Cool I know what it's like to get held up in the middle of a story! I know you'll do a good job of it FB.
Firebird
Firebird Princess Firebird..... Goddess of Swannie Fics posted 12 Nov 2007 03:39
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its hell because most of the ideas I get I cant write down because I have to get reports done. Worst moment is getting them while on the phone to the complainant. I am typing up their details get an idea that I cant write down and by the end of the call Ive forgotten it!
Transmute Jun
Transmute Jun Queen of the Bird Missiles posted 12 Nov 2007 07:39
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That's okay, FB.... when all of this is over, just take a nice, long bath, and bring a pad of paper with you to write down your ideas. Relax and let them flow....
Ebonyswanne
Ebonyswanne Gatchamaniac posted 12 Nov 2007 19:14 (edited 12 Nov 2007 19:14)
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That sounds like a great idea TJ! I think I will do the same... I think I'll include a glass of wine as well...ahhhh
kimiko
kimiko Forum God posted 13 Nov 2007 04:19
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Damn I had some really wild dreams last night...not necessarily Gatch related but could be transformed into such....If only I could censored remember them!
Transmute Jun
Transmute Jun Queen of the Bird Missiles posted 13 Nov 2007 06:21
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Kimi, we would LOVE to see your fics! You have such wonderful (and smutty) ideas!!!!! Bowdown
Ebonyswanne
Ebonyswanne Gatchamaniac posted 13 Nov 2007 15:05
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mmm more smutty ideas huh...I'm waiting Magic 2
Firebird
Firebird Princess Firebird..... Goddess of Swannie Fics posted 14 Nov 2007 04:41
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ooh fics from Kimi! Now there is something to be distracted by
kimiko
kimiko Forum God posted 14 Nov 2007 05:52
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Are you guys assuming I had smutty dreams??? Spank We'll see if I actually get anytime to do any writing myself but I will throw out any ideas I get from my deranged nocturnal subconscious...that is if the left side of the brain is not stuck in neutral! I've been taking codeine for the cough so that may be where the dreams are coming from...
Transmute Jun
Transmute Jun Queen of the Bird Missiles posted 14 Nov 2007 07:14
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Wherever they're coming from, just make sure they don't stop! Wink
Springie
Springie Her Royal Fluffiness...Swan of Swans... posted 14 Nov 2007 13:03
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ITA with TJ! I'll be watching for your smutty ideas, Kimi! Wink3
amyltrer
amyltrer Gatchamaniac posted 15 Nov 2007 09:51
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Yesss Kimi, let your mind wonder free! Fanfics are quite therapeutic, you know. pileobricks
kimiko
kimiko Forum God posted 16 Nov 2007 05:02 (edited 16 Nov 2007 05:03)
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If I let my mind wander I'm afraid I'll lose it! Speaking of therapy (which I most definitely need), the company Xmas party is on Saturday...*searching purse and making sure the morning after pills are kept handy* I will need the therapy even more so....or bail money...depending if certain people don't behave themselves and learn to keep their mouths shut! *looks up at what she's typed (which hubby has pointed out to her Erm1 ) and quickly decides to CLARIFY...* The pills are Tylenol 3! Not them other kind o'pills...LOL...Now that would be some real gossip! gossip
Transmute Jun
Transmute Jun Queen of the Bird Missiles posted 16 Nov 2007 07:13
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You know, when you said 'morning after' pills, that's what I was thinking too!!!! It must be because of your smutty mind.... ROFL 2
clouddancer
clouddancer Gatchamaniac posted 16 Nov 2007 08:17
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Originally posted by kimiko The pills are Tylenol 3! Not them other kind o'pills...LOL...Now that would be some real gossip! gossip
Thanks for the clairification Kimi, That was not the morning after pills I was thinking of either.
Hinotori
Hinotori Babbling Loonie posted 16 Nov 2007 08:38
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Close one, Kimi! I was thinking the same thing (definitely not Tylenol!!) ROFL 2
kimiko
kimiko Forum God posted 16 Nov 2007 09:37
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Oh boy...hubby was very upset by my goof! Almost had a huge blow-out! I honestly didn't even think about what I was writing in that way and hadn't finished typing my post when he comes over to snuggle and reads it over my shoulder....Now he's all paranoid about me going to this party as he's not going. That was another thing he was upset about...because I didn't ask him if he wanted to go this year because he always refuses. So I didn't ask him, now he's insulted saying "It would have been nice if I asked him!" *shaking head* Sometimes I think I'm the man and he's the woman. LOL!
Transmute Jun
Transmute Jun Queen of the Bird Missiles posted 16 Nov 2007 09:56
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Hey, he obviously loves you. And that's what's important. Wink
kimiko
kimiko Forum God posted 16 Nov 2007 10:05
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Originally posted by Transmute Jun Hey, he obviously loves you. And that's what's important. Wink
I loves him right back as much. He's coming down with something... Cold So he's a little testy today...not to mention every TD&H is calling and waking him up. I would turn the phone right off but we are waiting for a specific call so.... Uh1
Transmute Jun
Transmute Jun Queen of the Bird Missiles posted 16 Nov 2007 10:36
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I hope your DH is feeling better soon, Kimi!
clouddancer
clouddancer Gatchamaniac posted 16 Nov 2007 13:06 (edited 16 Nov 2007 15:55)
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Kimi, I hope your DH is not getting what you had.
CricketBeautiful
CricketBeautiful Forum God posted 16 Nov 2007 13:17
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I wish Hubby's company would have parties again (and have told him repeatedly). The new (well, newish; it's been a few years) only organizes a lunch for employees. I really miss meeting his coworkers and their partners. I really enjoyed a coworker's recent wedding for that reason. The year they had to cancel the Xmas party after babysitters were booked (company looked at their bank statement), some employees called a restaurant and had one anyways and paid for ourselves, but overall I think the social committee were underwhelmed with the help she got once the company stopped paying, which is a real shame. I never used to volunteer to help with that sort of thing (the committees were always well-staffed where I worked), but now I know what a difference it makes, so I'd make sure at least something happened.
Ebonyswanne
Ebonyswanne Gatchamaniac posted 16 Nov 2007 22:16
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Hi Kimi... I've been away so I'm catching up on posts! I hope your DH is better by now. I'm going to more Xmas parties this year because I'm not working Saturdays (Full-time mum has to have it's benefits even if I am still flat out with my baby!) I guess I'll drive, I hate drinking to much anyway and I have a baby now. DH is soooo funny tipsy! I have so really good stories from our 20's when we used to go out more...Evillaugh but I must not tell...sigh. DH gets upset if I don't at least ask him to give him the opportunity to say "no." I guess it's the, I love it that you want me to go, even if I'm not interested in going and you know that..." I have to go...baby bath time which is sooo much fun! Duckie baby2 I'm liking this new job over the last...(Retail store manager...) *grins* I'll have to get my studio cleaned up so she can go in the rocker while I write my stories...I'll set up a play area as well. Thats whats stopping me from finishing Lightening...I got a dodgy monitor sighs again...
Transmute Jun
Transmute Jun Queen of the Bird Missiles posted 17 Nov 2007 07:23
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Originally posted by Ebonyswanne I have to go...baby bath time which is sooo much fun! Duckie baby2 I'm liking this new job over the last...(Retail store manager...) *grins*
Ah, but do you get to wear as much lingerie in this job, as in the last one? Grin
kimiko
kimiko Forum God posted 19 Nov 2007 05:47
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Well the party was so-so... Dinner was great, but the DJ sucked! I must getting old... I didn't know half of the songs he played and ones that I did know and like he cut off and couldn't mix worth shit! I at least got to see some folks I haven't seen in ages...
Transmute Jun
Transmute Jun Queen of the Bird Missiles posted 19 Nov 2007 06:29
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Ah, so did you need your morning after pill? Wink
kimiko
kimiko Forum God posted 19 Nov 2007 09:44
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I had to pull the T3's out before I went to the party! My migraines are triggered by weather changes, so with the flurry activity on Saturday, I wasn't feeling good at all. And it was really hot inside the hall that was rented. I ate quite a bit, perhaps too much too soon for my stomach to handle, and was totally noxious to the point I thought I was going to lose my dinner. One lady I work with also suffers from migraines, and she ended up being sick to her stomach, then in true roman orgy-style went back for seconds! (Ok more like she's diabetic and had to keep her glucose level in check, but she prefered the former!) I had wondered where she had disappeared to... So we were some what party-poopers..until the meds kicked in properly. Then I had two drinks, (yeah I'm a cheap date!) and tried to dance (to Sean Paul's "Get Busy") in heels which I haven't worn for quite some time. Probably looked like I was doing "the Elaine dance" from Seinfeld!
Transmute Jun
Transmute Jun Queen of the Bird Missiles posted 19 Nov 2007 10:07
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Whoo hoo! Go Elaine! I can picture it now... http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=5xi4O1yi6b0
Springie
Springie Her Royal Fluffiness...Swan of Swans... posted 19 Nov 2007 13:21
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pound pound pound OMG...I haven't seen that in a while...priceless! Go Kimi! Work that Elaine dance!! dancing
Hinotori
Hinotori Babbling Loonie posted 19 Nov 2007 14:11
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Wait, Kimi... You had your migraine meds AND a couple of drinks?? No wonder you were doing the Elaine dance!! dance
Ebonyswanne
Ebonyswanne Gatchamaniac posted 19 Nov 2007 16:28 (edited 19 Nov 2007 16:30)
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Originally posted by kimiko I had to pull the T3's out before I went to the party! My migraines are triggered by weather changes, so with the flurry activity on Saturday, I wasn't feeling good at all. And it was really hot inside the hall that was rented. I ate quite a bit, perhaps too much too soon for my stomach to handle, and was totally noxious to the point I thought I was going to lose my dinner. One lady I work with also suffers from migraines, and she ended up being sick to her stomach, then in true roman orgy-style went back for seconds! (Ok more like she's diabetic and had to keep her glucose level in check, but she prefered the former!) I had wondered where she had disappeared to... Are you dating the Condor right now??? Your such a Condor girl! So we were some what party-poopers..until the meds kicked in properly. Then I had two drinks, (yeah I'm a cheap date!) and tried to dance (to Sean Paul's "Get Busy") in heels which I haven't worn for quite some time. Probably looked like I was doing "the Elaine dance" from Seinfeld!
Are you dating the Condor at the moment? You are such a Condor girl, did I base a character off you recently by accident in a fic Kimi...heheheee I think I called her Elisa!
amyltrer
amyltrer Gatchamaniac posted 20 Nov 2007 05:09
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Originally posted by Springie pound pound pound OMG...I haven't seen that in a while...priceless! Go Kimi! Work that Elaine dance!! dancing
You know, Joe might like that type of dance! After all he never seem to stuck to the etiquette!
Transmute Jun
Transmute Jun Queen of the Bird Missiles posted 20 Nov 2007 06:26
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Somehow, I suspect that Joe has MUCH better rhythm than what is required for that dance... Grin
kimiko
kimiko Forum God posted 20 Nov 2007 07:00
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Originally posted by Ebonyswanne Are you dating the Condor at the moment? You are such a Condor girl, did I base a character off you recently by accident in a fic Kimi...heheheee I think I called her Elisa!
Huggles Ebony! Hey everyone ya hear that?? I'm f*cking famous now!!! photo photo photo photo photo *hip checks Paris Hilton into a wall* "Take that ya skinny ass no talent bitch! Just what the hell is a celebutant anyway?" *starts guzzling a 26er of JD and grabs Linsay Lohan by the hair* "This is how you do it! You amateur! What the hell are you driving under the influence for anyway? What you don't make enough to get a limo?" *jumps up on Britney Spears SUV, hikes her skirt and drops her panties for the paparazzi photo op* "OOOPS I DID IT AGAIN! HOW DID THAT HAPPEN?" *trips with panties around her ankles and does a header onto the red carpet, taking out a dozen or so paparazzi, who then try to sue her* *wrestles panties off her ankle and tosses them at Axl Rose* "Axl! Sign my ass please! ummm...like...What year IS Chinese Democracy going to come out??? And for F*ck's sake just kiss and make up with Slash & the boys, cuz ain't G'n'R anymore!" *takes a few steps back from the hissy-fit thrown by a 45 year old red-head (well mostly..what is with the braids anyway?)* *bumps into Colin Farell, hurls on his pant leg, and punches him in the face* *wakes up in the Betty Ford Clinic 2 days later with a huge shiner in the exact shape of Colin Farell's fist...* "What happened?"
Springie
Springie Her Royal Fluffiness...Swan of Swans... posted 20 Nov 2007 13:51
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pound pound pound amazing what fame does to a person...I'm scared now, Kimi! You're on a rampage! Outtahere
Ebonyswanne
Ebonyswanne Gatchamaniac posted 20 Nov 2007 13:56
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Kimi and the Condor...danger alert!
Transmute Jun
Transmute Jun Queen of the Bird Missiles posted 20 Nov 2007 14:16
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Wow, Kimi.... Bowdown
kimiko
kimiko Forum God posted 21 Nov 2007 06:45
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Originally posted by Springie pound pound pound amazing what fame does to a person...I'm scared now, Kimi! You're on a rampage! Outtahere
I don't particularly like having my picture taken...or having my privacy invaded..so I can see why some celebs would eventually snap being hounded by paparazzi. Especially if they have their kids with them! But if they're doing something COMPLETELY STUPID & IRRESPONSIBLE like driving with your kid on your lap or DUI..then then they deserve it with both barrels!
Transmute Jun
Transmute Jun Queen of the Bird Missiles posted 21 Nov 2007 07:42
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But face it, ALL of these people knew what they were getting into when they sought celebrity and fame. If they're out in public, I say it's fair game. Why do you think the KNT worked so hard to hide their secret identities? It wasn't Katse they were afraid of... it was the papparazzi! Just check out the Candi Wigglebutt fic series if you want proof. Wink
clouddancer
clouddancer Gatchamaniac posted 21 Nov 2007 15:33
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Originally posted by Transmute Jun Just check out the Candi Wigglebutt fic series if you want proof. Wink
Ummm.... Candi Wigglebutt. I can place the name, I just can not place the fics. Can any one point me in the right direction. Or give me a title.
Transmute Jun
Transmute Jun Queen of the Bird Missiles posted 21 Nov 2007 16:49 (edited 21 Nov 2007 16:49)
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clouddancer
clouddancer Gatchamaniac posted 21 Nov 2007 17:20
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Thank you TJ. I knew I knew that name. I had read most of those. Not the last one.
Ebonyswanne
Ebonyswanne Gatchamaniac posted 21 Nov 2007 21:09
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I know that fic TJ it is friggin hilarious!
amyltrer
amyltrer Gatchamaniac posted 22 Nov 2007 10:11
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Hehehe, Daddy Red got his a$$ kicked! But somehow I agree with Joe! Like father like son! Inverted1
amyltrer
amyltrer Gatchamaniac posted 22 Nov 2007 11:25
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Bwahaha, that was a perfect Eagle bashing series! I love it!
Transmute Jun
Transmute Jun Queen of the Bird Missiles posted 22 Nov 2007 14:36
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The second fic there (Sex and the Single Swan) was the inspiration for my first (real) fic: Discovery. I even borrowed a line from that fic for mine (with Ebonbird's permission). Of course, it took reading Springie's Blast From The Past that gave me the confidence to actually WRITE it and post it... ( Thanks Springie! Smooch2 )
Ebonyswanne
Ebonyswanne Gatchamaniac posted 22 Nov 2007 15:19
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I loved "Blast from the Past" I read it on her site ages ago and then found more of her stories on F.Fic! Go Springie you have a fan club!
Transmute Jun
Transmute Jun Queen of the Bird Missiles posted 22 Nov 2007 17:27
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ITA... I'm a long-time member of the Springie fan club!!! Her fics inspired me... I think they can inspire anyone!!!
Springie
Springie Her Royal Fluffiness...Swan of Swans... posted 22 Nov 2007 17:55
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Thanks Blushing I'm a member of your fan club, too!! Grouphug
Transmute Jun
Transmute Jun Queen of the Bird Missiles posted 22 Nov 2007 18:01
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Awwww...... Love fest!!!!! Luvu1 Luvu2 Luvu3 Luvu4 Luvu1 Luvu2 Luvu3 Luvu4 Luvu1 Luvu2 Luvu3 Luvu4 Luvu1 Luvu2 Luvu3 Luvu4 Luvu1 Luvu2 Luvu3 Luvu4
clouddancer
clouddancer Gatchamaniac posted 22 Nov 2007 19:05
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Animeluv animewink Animeparty Animevalentine I will chime in and say I love the stories both you girls have written. Animeluv animewink Animeparty Animevalentine
Transmute Jun
Transmute Jun Queen of the Bird Missiles posted 22 Nov 2007 19:45
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FWIW, I love the things I've read of yours as well, CD!
Springie
Springie Her Royal Fluffiness...Swan of Swans... posted 23 Nov 2007 04:58
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I love your stuff too, CD!! Luvu2
clouddancer
clouddancer Gatchamaniac posted 23 Nov 2007 05:13
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Blushing Thank you. I wish I could find the time to get back to writing though. Maybe next month.
Transmute Jun
Transmute Jun Queen of the Bird Missiles posted 23 Nov 2007 06:37
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I hear you on that, CD!!!!
clouddancer
clouddancer Gatchamaniac posted 23 Nov 2007 07:22
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Originally posted by Transmute Jun I hear you on that, CD!!!!
Just so long as you hear me and do not start Poke me.
Transmute Jun
Transmute Jun Queen of the Bird Missiles posted 23 Nov 2007 09:54
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Originally posted by clouddancer
Originally posted by Transmute Jun I hear you on that, CD!!!!
Just so long as you hear me and do not start Poke me.
But I'm already Kinky you!!!!
gatchgirl
gatchgirl Babbling Loonie posted 23 Nov 2007 10:12
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You both have written some great fics... and CD I have loved reading yours too, may December bring you many writing opportunities.
Ebonyswanne
Ebonyswanne Gatchamaniac posted 23 Nov 2007 14:05
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Like TJ's Chrissy challenge!
Firebird
Firebird Princess Firebird..... Goddess of Swannie Fics posted 25 Jan 2008 05:57
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IT is this fic that I have started posting in the fic library in case anyone wondered. It has developed some since it was discussed , there are some darker parts in it and I went through a phase of living it in my mind I guess.
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