Cloud's Fic

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clouddancer
clouddancer Gatchamaniac posted 2 Oct 2007 19:47 (edited 2 Oct 2007 19:58)
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Okay here is the start of my fic that I have been promising. It has nothing to do with ESP. It takes place before Mark or the team even know of its existence. This is an event that occurs while the team are young and in training. Enjoy. (I am going to try the clicky thing for the first time.) Collision
clouddancer
clouddancer Gatchamaniac posted 2 Oct 2007 19:52 (edited 2 Oct 2007 19:59)
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(Ohhh the Clicky thing worked, I figured it out.) And here is the next part. Promises part 1 This is as far as I was able to read tonight and make a few minor adjustments/ corrections. I will see if I can get the rest up tomorrow. But I have staff meetings and all so I am not sure when that will be.
clouddancer
clouddancer Gatchamaniac posted 2 Oct 2007 19:55 (edited 2 Oct 2007 20:01)
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Now Cloud is going to run and hide, from all the voices that are saying you should not have done that, get it off the web now.
Transmute Jun
Transmute Jun Queen of the Bird Missiles posted 2 Oct 2007 19:58
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You should have done that, CD!!!!!! I am so happy!!!!!! Biglaugh3 Yay!!!!!
Transmute Jun
Transmute Jun Queen of the Bird Missiles posted 2 Oct 2007 20:08 (edited 2 Oct 2007 20:08)
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I just read through it, CD, and it is wonderful! You've really set up a very intriguing story, and are describing their normal, human (Rigan) misgivings very well. I find it interesting that Mark's voices seem to sound like yours.... kudos for using your won RL experiences in the fic! Bowdown
clouddancer
clouddancer Gatchamaniac posted 2 Oct 2007 20:14
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Originally posted by Transmute Jun I find it interesting that Mark's voices seem to sound like yours.... kudos for using your won RL experiences in the fic! Bowdown
That is probably because he is in my head, or I am in his, so much that I think and feel like him, or maybe I am him in a way. (Not sure I am really saying that right, but I think you will understand.)
Transmute Jun
Transmute Jun Queen of the Bird Missiles posted 2 Oct 2007 20:16
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I do understand, and to me that shows that you have terrific instincts as a writer. It is difficult to draw on your RL experiences that way, but you have done it beautifully. Huggles
amyltrer
amyltrer Gatchamaniac posted 2 Oct 2007 21:32
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CD, you have amazing writing skills. The ficcies are so detaliate. keep on writing, you do well. Groupwave
Ebonyswanne
Ebonyswanne Gatchamaniac posted 2 Oct 2007 21:41
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Quote; Oh, great! So you get to Command the team and use your marksmanship skills, Princess can demolish all objects in our way, Tiny will overpower our enemies with his strength and Keyop can sneak into bases and crack the codes. And what do I do? I will follow you all in and dance the enemies to death because, according to you, I am supple and flexible. They will die laughing. I ended on a sarcastic note. Cloudy that is a classic outburst from Mark! It cracked me up laughing as I imagined him saying it! It demonstrates that he has other skills that are being overlooked at this point. Jason's quick temper was demonstrated well here, I mean Mark acted impulsively but took responsibility for his actions which is so much like Mark...I guess it would have be a logical step to put Jason in command at this point because he is 2 years older than Mark(who is 15), at that age Mark really has not had the chance to prove his leadership skills or really develop them...Jason was concerned for his team, but his emotional outbursts would get in the way of his decision making... Well done Cloudy! I can't wait to read more! Cheerleader
amyltrer
amyltrer Gatchamaniac posted 2 Oct 2007 21:54
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I see they have started to use their Rigan powers!
Firebird
Firebird Princess Firebird..... Goddess of Swannie Fics posted 3 Oct 2007 00:40
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CD this was well worth waiting for! I love the way the characters are three dimensional and not flat and boring. Their feelings, the perceived way that they were portrayed (especially by that annoying robot) all become more real and realsitic for their age. Look forward to reading more and I now have a reason to do this! Snoopy Dance
clouddancer
clouddancer Gatchamaniac posted 3 Oct 2007 05:28
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Originally posted by amyltrer I see they have started to use their Rigan powers!
Ummm! TJ commented on that before. What Rigan power are you ladies seeing? I had not really intended them to show at this point. Them team do no not know about the powers or their existence until long after the run of the series. (No correct that, Mark gets a hint when he goes to Riga to find his father, and discovers Cronus is his father. But really that is only discovering that he is Rigan not that they have powers.) I am just worried that because I have played with their powers for so long I am bring them into the stories even now at the beginning. (But then the basic powers are ment to be instinctual so why would the team not use them without realizing it.)
amyltrer
amyltrer Gatchamaniac posted 3 Oct 2007 10:58
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Originally posted by clouddancer
Originally posted by amyltrer I see they have started to use their Rigan powers!
Ummm! TJ commented on that before. What Rigan power are you ladies seeing? I am just worried that because I have played with their powers for so long I am bring them into the stories even now at the beginning. (But then the basic powers are ment to be instinctual so why would the team not use them without realizing it.)
Indeed, there are hints of their presence. Will they be scared to find out about them? BTW, is Ken a pure-blood Rigan or a human half-breed? Why would affect him to know her's a Rigan? The Rigans were members of the Federation, not enemies.
Transmute Jun
Transmute Jun Queen of the Bird Missiles posted 3 Oct 2007 12:34
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I had originally thought that Mark's blackout in the plane was because he was instinctively trying to use one of his powers that he knew nothing about.
clouddancer
clouddancer Gatchamaniac posted 3 Oct 2007 13:43
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Originally posted by amyltrer Indeed, there are hints of their presence. Will they be scared to find out about them? BTW, is Ken a pure-blood Rigan or a human half-breed? Why would affect him to know her's a Rigan? The Rigans were members of the Federation, not enemies.
As far as I know Mark is not afraid of being Rigan, none of the team are, especially as they realize how useful their powers can be to help them defeat Spectra, evade capture and remain in communication with each other. All the team are full Rigan. In my universe there can be no reproduction across the species. In otherwords, no Rigan/Earth children or Rigan X children at all. ( at this time.)
clouddancer
clouddancer Gatchamaniac posted 3 Oct 2007 13:57
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Originally posted by Transmute Jun I had originally thought that Mark's blackout in the plane was because he was instinctively trying to use one of his powers that he knew nothing about.
I wondered if that was causing the confusion. I have to say I tried writing about how Mark got out of the crash, but it was not coming, I could not think of an appropriate way for Mark to go down in a burning plane and remain alive. My thoughts were the collision caused the blackout/concussion and even he is not sure how he got out of the wreak. All I keep thinking is other Rigan's were around, Cronus and his crew, and one of them may have used their Kinetic powers on Mark and hauled him out of the plane. Remember at this time no one on Earth is even aware of Rigan powers so the use of Powers (that can be seen by others) while on Earth is prohibited. Other Rigan's may have know and felt the use of powers during the collision, but they would not have talked about it to "an outsider." Leaving Mark and the others blind to Powers existance until Mark finds out during a long unauthorized absence on Riga. Now that I have spent so much time rambling on I will leave it there and go and read my story and see if I can post the rest tonight. I am glad everyone is enjoying this. BTW, I had a good night sleep last night, it shows I am either exhausted, or that the Condor was able to chase away all those ugly voices in my head, so I did not hear them all night.
Transmute Jun
Transmute Jun Queen of the Bird Missiles posted 3 Oct 2007 15:16
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WTG Condor !!!!! I am so glad that he chased the voices away! How does it feel, now that you've posted, CD? Huggles
clouddancer
clouddancer Gatchamaniac posted 3 Oct 2007 15:36
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Originally posted by Transmute Jun WTG Condor !!!!! I am so glad that he chased the voices away! How does it feel, now that you've posted, CD? Huggles
I read everyone's nice words and I feel ("Fantastic, Terrific, all day long" wave arm in air and pull sharply down while saying a big "Uhhhh!" Sorry Cloud got carried away. That is a chant we give our students so we do not get the typical 'okay' answer.) Then when I sit back and relax I feel like I am waiting for the fall out. The voices start wispering again, "You are no good, Nobody really likes it, They are just humouring you". *SHUT UP!!! Condor I need you Condor* But I am going to ignore them and post the last part of my story, later. I just have to complete my Weekend Course homework first. Then I can read the rest of my fic one last time.
Transmute Jun
Transmute Jun Queen of the Bird Missiles posted 3 Oct 2007 15:46
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I will be honest with you, CD. When I don't like a fic, I say nothing. I won't post bad things, because I don't like to make people feel badly, but I won't say I like something if I don't, KWIM? I don't want to make people feel badly, but I won't lie either. So when I say that i like your fic, I DO! A lot. Huggles
Ebonyswanne
Ebonyswanne Gatchamaniac posted 3 Oct 2007 16:00
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CD I like to let people know what I liked about it when I review a fic...the things that stood out about it to me. I'm not humouring you when I tell you I like something! Look it is a great start to writing your own stories and you are doing very well!
clouddancer
clouddancer Gatchamaniac posted 3 Oct 2007 16:09 (edited 3 Oct 2007 16:10)
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May be I said that wrong, I did not intend to make everyone think that is how I felt. That is one of the comments my voices have ALWAYS said to me, and ...... Oh forget it, I can't explain it very well. Just please be happy that the little voices have grown a lot quieter since joining this forum. I am happy about that part anyway.
Firebird
Firebird Princess Firebird..... Goddess of Swannie Fics posted 4 Oct 2007 00:35
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Sometimes those voices do whatever they can to shake your confidence even saying things that your heart does not believe can be true. It is wonderful that they are quieter now and I think people posted to help that continue rather than believing that is how YOU felt. A way to help fight them if you like. CD Like TJ if I dont like something I wont post feedback so take our words as more weapons against those voices because I know you dont feel that way. Huggles
Ebonyswanne
Ebonyswanne Gatchamaniac posted 4 Oct 2007 04:48
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I'm glad to hear the are going away and being replaced but good thoughts CD...I think at times it can become a habit to listen to negitive thoughts over feel good thoughts I guess that is why affirmations are soooo important, you just need to turn those voices into good positive stuff and your set for life! Not to say bad things at times won't happen or people will never say bad things to you that they have no right to say...just that you handle it better and it won't affect your self esteem... writing a story helps you get it all out I find...I bet it is doing the same for you...which means you are putting some depth into you stories too! Thank you for sharing your story! I want more of it now and to find out how Mark eventually becomes the Leader and how Jason handles the step down to second in command...
clouddancer
clouddancer Gatchamaniac posted 4 Oct 2007 05:17
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Sorry I did not get to finish posting the story last night. I got busy and homework interfered. Tonight after my appointments (dog, hair and dentist plus go to the stroy and get some stuff for Thanksgiving crafts for my students) I really hope I will be able to post. Ebony: I would love to know what happened to put Mark into the command position and get Jason demoted, too. (My muses have not shown it to me yet.) I do know when it happens. As for a reaction from Jason, I do know what ever the event is, that brings about the shift in Command, is what brings Jason's agressive, confrontational personality out.
Transmute Jun
Transmute Jun Queen of the Bird Missiles posted 4 Oct 2007 07:05
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I am looking forward to more story tonight, CD!!!!
Firebird
Firebird Princess Firebird..... Goddess of Swannie Fics posted 4 Oct 2007 13:11
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ooh! more fic from CD I cant wait!
clouddancer
clouddancer Gatchamaniac posted 4 Oct 2007 16:36
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Here it is the last part of Promises. Part 2 I forgot to say a thank you to TJ for Beta Reading for me. Thank you, and TJ in this part I made more adjustments than the last part. Next.......... Look forward to the pool scene from Cronus and Anderson's point of view.
Transmute Jun
Transmute Jun Queen of the Bird Missiles posted 4 Oct 2007 18:10
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You know... somehow.... pool scene and Cronus just don't go together in my mind.... Wink (I know... I know... smut on the brain....) You're welcome, CD. It was my pleasure to read your work. Just as it was my pleasure to Poke you into submission to get you to post it!!!!!
Transmute Jun
Transmute Jun Queen of the Bird Missiles posted 4 Oct 2007 18:13
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I should also say that I love this part too, and the way it illustrates a close relationship between Jason and Mark from a young age. I am also ROFL 2 over Mark using his boyish good looks to charm Jason with that 'innocent' smile!
clouddancer
clouddancer Gatchamaniac posted 4 Oct 2007 18:20
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Originally posted by Transmute Jun Just as it was my pleasure to Poke you into submission to get you to post it!!!!!
Submission? I'm not sure I agree about that. I will agree you used your Condor influence to get me to post. And many other people did too.
Transmute Jun
Transmute Jun Queen of the Bird Missiles posted 4 Oct 2007 18:44
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Yes, I did. And I am now very glad that I did so, because you are sharing your wonderful stories with everyone! Snoopy Dance
Ebonyswanne
Ebonyswanne Gatchamaniac posted 5 Oct 2007 03:55 (edited 6 Oct 2007 02:46)
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Ohh Cloudy! I must have misread the first part in some way because I had thought that Jason was already in command! Ahhh.... but I liked the way you described the team and how they fit in together, the strengths and weaknesses and the close friendship that Mark and Jason have and one that will carry them through in battle...great bonding with them becoming blood brothers at a young age. I can see were this is leading and how this bonding will help them keep their friendship even when it is tested big time when the Commander of the team is decided...ohhh it will be a test and a half and not without confrontations...I remember Jason always questioned at times Marks right to command the team...you have me going here CD...I want to see how this unfolds!
amyltrer
amyltrer Gatchamaniac posted 5 Oct 2007 05:19
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See CD, is not so hard to write. And you do have amazing writing skills. Just ignore the voices and the flamers!
Transmute Jun
Transmute Jun Queen of the Bird Missiles posted 5 Oct 2007 06:37
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ITA, CD! Keep going! You are setting up your story beautifully!
clouddancer
clouddancer Gatchamaniac posted 5 Oct 2007 06:39 (edited 5 Oct 2007 06:41)
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Thank you everyone, I feel all glowy inside. I am glad you like my work.
Transmute Jun
Transmute Jun Queen of the Bird Missiles posted 5 Oct 2007 07:15
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Ooh.... she's glowy inside.... let us know what your students think of that, CD!
clouddancer
clouddancer Gatchamaniac posted 5 Oct 2007 07:34
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I brighten up their lives. Rainbow2
amyltrer
amyltrer Gatchamaniac posted 5 Oct 2007 09:50
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Originally posted by clouddancer I brighten up their lives. Rainbow2
A series of A marks could do the job. That's what we're asking for when we catch our teachers in good moods. What do you teach, CD?
Transmute Jun
Transmute Jun Queen of the Bird Missiles posted 5 Oct 2007 12:40
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Originally posted by clouddancer I brighten up their lives. Rainbow2
Yooooouuuuu light up my life.... You give my hope To carry on....
Transmute Jun
Transmute Jun Queen of the Bird Missiles posted 5 Oct 2007 12:40
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Originally posted by amyltrer
Originally posted by clouddancer I brighten up their lives. Rainbow2
A series of A marks could do the job. That's what we're asking for when we catch our teachers in good moods. What do you teach, CD?
CD teaches Grade 1.
amyltrer
amyltrer Gatchamaniac posted 5 Oct 2007 12:41
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TJ since when you've started singing?
Transmute Jun
Transmute Jun Queen of the Bird Missiles posted 5 Oct 2007 12:48 (edited 5 Oct 2007 12:48)
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Oh, I sing lots... badly, mind you, but I sing lots. Just ask Springie. She's heard my karaoke... Singer I also enjoy making up bad lyrics to other songs. Let's see.... how about Frere Jacques? Swallow Jinpei Swallow Jinpei Where are you? Where are you? Killing the all the green goons Working at the Snack Jun Lots to do Lots to do
amyltrer
amyltrer Gatchamaniac posted 5 Oct 2007 12:50
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Hmm, I will refrain asking you to do one with Ego... Hell knows what you can came up with..... outofshape
Transmute Jun
Transmute Jun Queen of the Bird Missiles posted 5 Oct 2007 13:03
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Just give me a song title and I'll see what I can do.... Devil1
Springie
Springie Her Royal Fluffiness...Swan of Swans... posted 5 Oct 2007 13:07
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Originally posted by Transmute Jun Oh, I sing lots... badly, mind you, but I sing lots. Just ask Springie. She's heard my karaoke... Singer I also enjoy making up bad lyrics to other songs. Let's see.... how about Frere Jacques? Swallow Jinpei Swallow Jinpei Where are you? Where are you? Killing the all the green goons Working at the Snack Jun Lots to do Lots to do
She's awesome, I tell you...and talk about stage presence!! Cheeky
amyltrer
amyltrer Gatchamaniac posted 5 Oct 2007 13:08
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Originally posted by Transmute Jun Just give me a song title and I'll see what I can do.... Devil1
Uhm, Jingle bells?
Transmute Jun
Transmute Jun Queen of the Bird Missiles posted 5 Oct 2007 15:06
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Originally posted by amyltrer Uhm, Jingle bells?
Alarm bells Galactor spells Trouble for us all Ego's run away to hide Inside the mecha ball! Ego fell Now he smells of cow pies and of hay He went into the castle barn Through Saturnhofen's Gate Dashing through the snow The Galactors we will slay In Gatchaspartan we go Hypershooting all the way We'll get into a ring Tornado Fighter's light Will start to glow and then we'll whirl Around the castle heights Oh! Alarm bells Ego tells Everything he knows Sosai Z's run off to hide Before the Fencer glows By the hells Bombs and shells Are pummeling the foe Ego's dead, and Sosai's red And now we'll end the show! Okay, I know, that was bad... but that's what you get when you have 2 kids bugging you for snacks as you're trying to be creative!
gatchgirl
gatchgirl Babbling Loonie posted 5 Oct 2007 18:12
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Wow that was rather good if I do say so myself....
gatchgirl
gatchgirl Babbling Loonie posted 5 Oct 2007 18:22
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TJ did I ever mention that I had dedicated You Light Up My Life to Casey Kasem two different times when I was a young teenager.
gatchgirl
gatchgirl Babbling Loonie posted 5 Oct 2007 18:25
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CD.. You are starting off your posting in writing in a grand way... so can't wait to read more of them. I so know what you mean by the voices in your head saying both negative and some positive. I have become so accustomed to having a friendly but fearless Condor with me at all times. I really think it helps a lot, feel free to use him too!
Ebonyswanne
Ebonyswanne Gatchamaniac posted 6 Oct 2007 02:48
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Originally posted by clouddancer Thank you everyone, I feel all glowy inside. I am glad you like my work.
It feels good to post your story and share it! Can I join your class I promise I'll be good and you can teach me grammar and spelling...Wink2
amyltrer
amyltrer Gatchamaniac posted 6 Oct 2007 03:03
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Ok, TJ, The Eagle will suffer for this!
Transmute Jun
Transmute Jun Queen of the Bird Missiles posted 6 Oct 2007 07:18 (edited 6 Oct 2007 07:18)
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Originally posted by amyltrer Ok, TJ, The Eagle will suffer for this!
Yeah, yeah... but honestly, you're always making the Eagle suffer Amy. So I can't really see that changing if I'm NICE to Ego.... Biglaugh1 In any case, think of it as my rendition of the final Gatch F episode. Wink
clouddancer
clouddancer Gatchamaniac posted 6 Oct 2007 08:42
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Originally posted by gatchgirl CD.. You are starting off your posting in writing in a grand way... so can't wait to read more of them. I so know what you mean by the voices in your head saying both negative and some positive. I have become so accustomed to having a friendly but fearless Condor with me at all times. I really think it helps a lot, feel free to use him too!
Trust me I keep the Condor and Eagle's voices in my head all the time. It is just sometimes their voices are drowned out by the annoying voices of former classmates.
clouddancer
clouddancer Gatchamaniac posted 6 Oct 2007 08:46
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Originally posted by Ebonyswanne
Originally posted by clouddancer Thank you everyone, I feel all glowy inside. I am glad you like my work.
It feels good to post your story and share it! Can I join your class I promise I'll be good and you can teach me grammar and spelling...Wink2
When ever you want to viist Toronto you are welcome to come into my class. I am sure with you in there as the Swan we could frighten the kids into submission. In fact come in second term when I have decided to do a superhero's unit. I may introduce my children to BOTP at that time.
amyltrer
amyltrer Gatchamaniac posted 6 Oct 2007 10:18
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Originally posted by Transmute Jun
Originally posted by amyltrer Ok, TJ, The Eagle will suffer for this!
Yeah, yeah... but honestly, you're always making the Eagle suffer Amy. So I can't really see that changing if I'm NICE to Ego.... Biglaugh1 In any case, think of it as my rendition of the final Gatch F episode. Wink
But I 've been NICE with him in that fic! I knew I should have thrown him overbord! Ah, well ,he'll get it soon paddling
Transmute Jun
Transmute Jun Queen of the Bird Missiles posted 6 Oct 2007 14:50
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Originally posted by clouddancer It is just sometimes their voices are drowned out by the annoying voices of former classmates.
Obviously those classmates grew up to join Galactor... Galactor
Transmute Jun
Transmute Jun Queen of the Bird Missiles posted 6 Oct 2007 14:51
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Originally posted by amyltrer But I 've been NICE with him in that fic! I knew I should have thrown him overbord! Ah, well ,he'll get it soon paddling
REALLY? You were being NICE???? And here I thought the entire fic was an excuse to Eagle-bash.... Shrug
gatchgirl
gatchgirl Babbling Loonie posted 6 Oct 2007 16:57
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CD, I got the rare privaledge (sp?) of being able to tell some of those jerks off. Felt so good, I figured once out of school, they weren't allowed any control over me, though I let them have little in school. Heres a Huggles for you. Sometime if we can get a group together will go confront those a##holes from your high school!
amyltrer
amyltrer Gatchamaniac posted 7 Oct 2007 00:57
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Originally posted by Transmute Jun
Originally posted by amyltrer But I 've been NICE with him in that fic! I knew I should have thrown him overbord! Ah, well ,he'll get it soon paddling
REALLY? You were being NICE???? And here I thought the entire fic was an excuse to Eagle-bash.... Shrug
Noo, TJ, that was an opportunity to show you how kind-hearted Ego was and how much he cared for the well being of the planet!
Springie
Springie Her Royal Fluffiness...Swan of Swans... posted 7 Oct 2007 04:54
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CD, I commented over at the clubhouse...but you are a very talented writer! I am looking forward to more of this fic!!! Roll
Ebonyswanne
Ebonyswanne Gatchamaniac posted 7 Oct 2007 05:29
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Originally posted by Transmute Jun
Originally posted by amyltrer Ok, TJ, The Eagle will suffer for this!
Yeah, yeah... but honestly, you're always making the Eagle suffer Amy. So I can't really see that changing if I'm NICE to Ego.... Biglaugh1 In any case, think of it as my rendition of the final Gatch F episode. Wink
Huh you both make him suffer! TJ he suffers a lot in your fics! I am beginning to feel sorry for the poor Eagle!
clouddancer
clouddancer Gatchamaniac posted 7 Oct 2007 07:36
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Originally posted by gatchgirl CD, I got the rare privaledge (sp?) of being able to tell some of those jerks off. Felt so good, I figured once out of school, they weren't allowed any control over me, though I let them have little in school. Heres a Huggles for you. Sometime if we can get a group together will go confront those a##holes from your high school!
I wish I had the courage to go confront the jerks from high school. I stay as far away as possible from them and all memories of high school. University memories are much better.
clouddancer
clouddancer Gatchamaniac posted 7 Oct 2007 07:40
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Originally posted by Ebonyswanne
Originally posted by Transmute Jun
Originally posted by amyltrer Ok, TJ, The Eagle will suffer for this!
Yeah, yeah... but honestly, you're always making the Eagle suffer Amy. So I can't really see that changing if I'm NICE to Ego.... Biglaugh1 In any case, think of it as my rendition of the final Gatch F episode. Wink
Huh you both make him suffer! TJ he suffers a lot in your fics! I am beginning to feel sorry for the poor Eagle!
I agree Ebony they both make the poor Eagle suffer in different ways. Isn't it lucky you are a Swan who can take care of a suffering Eagle. Us Owls can only offer moral support to Eagles. Maybe I will become a Swan so I can comfort the Eagle too.
Transmute Jun
Transmute Jun Queen of the Bird Missiles posted 7 Oct 2007 09:18
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Originally posted by amyltrer Noo, TJ, that was an opportunity to show you how kind-hearted Ego was and how much he cared for the well being of the planet!
Uh... okay.... FTR, I don't think Ego cares a whit for the planet. What he cares about is not dying himself... Wink
Transmute Jun
Transmute Jun Queen of the Bird Missiles posted 7 Oct 2007 09:19 (edited 7 Oct 2007 09:19)
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Originally posted by Ebonyswanne Huh you both make him suffer! TJ he suffers a lot in your fics! I am beginning to feel sorry for the poor Eagle!
The only reason the Eagle suffers in SOME of my fics is because he has to pay for his lukewarm attitude (and occasional rebuff) toward Jun in the canon series!!! But then, I love to write an Eagle happy ending too.... Grin
amyltrer
amyltrer Gatchamaniac posted 7 Oct 2007 09:20
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Oh, c'mon TJ, I did wrote a happy ending for him too!
Transmute Jun
Transmute Jun Queen of the Bird Missiles posted 7 Oct 2007 09:20
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Originally posted by clouddancer Us Owls can only offer moral support to Eagles. Maybe I will become a Swan so I can comfort the Eagle too.
Oh.... comforting Eagles.... now that can be fun too. And comforting Condors... oh, the possibilities.... Devil1
amyltrer
amyltrer Gatchamaniac posted 7 Oct 2007 09:22
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Hey, TJ, seems you'll have some concurence at comforting the Eagle! But me, as an evil Gallactor I am, I will give you a lot of work to do!Devil1
Transmute Jun
Transmute Jun Queen of the Bird Missiles posted 7 Oct 2007 09:50
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Originally posted by amyltrer Hey, TJ, seems you'll have some concurence at comforting the Eagle! But me, as an evil Gallactor I am, I will give you a lot of work to do!Devil1
And I, brave Swan that I am, am up to the challenge of comforting the Eagle, for as long as it takes.... Angel1
Springie
Springie Her Royal Fluffiness...Swan of Swans... posted 7 Oct 2007 11:00
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...and I'll gladly help you! Heart Eagle
Transmute Jun
Transmute Jun Queen of the Bird Missiles posted 7 Oct 2007 11:20
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Originally posted by Springie ...and I'll gladly help you! Heart Eagle
Somehow, I knew that you would.... Smooch2
amyltrer
amyltrer Gatchamaniac posted 7 Oct 2007 11:56
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Originally posted by Transmute Jun And I, brave Swan that I am, am up to the challenge of comforting the Eagle, for as long as it takes.... Angel1
Oh TJ, but you know how rudely the Eagle will treat you! Ego on the other hand will never ignore a Swan!
Transmute Jun
Transmute Jun Queen of the Bird Missiles posted 7 Oct 2007 13:51
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Uh, yeah... and I think Ebony's fic demonstrated exactly how Ego would treat a Swan... Eek2
clouddancer
clouddancer Gatchamaniac posted 7 Oct 2007 14:31
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Originally posted by Transmute Jun
Originally posted by amyltrer Hey, TJ, seems you'll have some concurence at comforting the Eagle! But me, as an evil Gallactor I am, I will give you a lot of work to do!Devil1
And I, brave Swan that I am, am up to the challenge of comforting the Eagle, for as long as it takes.... Angel1
Cloud will join you with the comforting. I hope the Eagle can handle all this comforting.
Transmute Jun
Transmute Jun Queen of the Bird Missiles posted 7 Oct 2007 15:34 (edited 7 Oct 2007 15:34)
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Oh, I think we're the ones who will be (man)handling the Eagle.... Grin
Ebonyswanne
Ebonyswanne Gatchamaniac posted 7 Oct 2007 15:37
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Originally posted by amyltrer
Originally posted by Transmute Jun And I, brave Swan that I am, am up to the challenge of comforting the Eagle, for as long as it takes.... Angel1
Oh TJ, but you know how rudely the Eagle will treat you! Ego on the other hand will never ignore a Swan!
mmm I think she rather he did ignore her Amy!
Transmute Jun
Transmute Jun Queen of the Bird Missiles posted 7 Oct 2007 16:04
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Originally posted by Ebonyswanne
Originally posted by amyltrer Oh TJ, but you know how rudely the Eagle will treat you! Ego on the other hand will never ignore a Swan!
mmm I think she rather he did ignore her Amy!
You got that right, Ebony!!!!!
amyltrer
amyltrer Gatchamaniac posted 8 Oct 2007 11:10
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Originally posted by Transmute Jun Uh, yeah... and I think Ebony's fic demonstrated exactly how Ego would treat a Swan... Eek2
No she hasn't! Yet....
amyltrer
amyltrer Gatchamaniac posted 8 Oct 2007 11:14
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Originally posted by Transmute Jun Oh, I think we're the ones who will be (man)handling the Eagle.... Grin
TJ, why do I sense you want the Eagle to undergo another Zark treatment? I almost feel sorry for him.....
amyltrer
amyltrer Gatchamaniac posted 8 Oct 2007 11:16
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Originally posted by Ebonyswanne
Originally posted by amyltrer
Originally posted by Transmute Jun And I, brave Swan that I am, am up to the challenge of comforting the Eagle, for as long as it takes.... Angel1
Oh TJ, but you know how rudely the Eagle will treat you! Ego on the other hand will never ignore a Swan!
mmm I think she rather he did ignore her Amy!
Oh girls, you're sooo mean!
Firebird
Firebird Princess Firebird..... Goddess of Swannie Fics posted 8 Oct 2007 11:50
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Originally posted by amyltrer
Originally posted by Ebonyswanne
Originally posted by amyltrer
Originally posted by Transmute Jun And I, brave Swan that I am, am up to the challenge of comforting the Eagle, for as long as it takes.... Angel1
Oh TJ, but you know how rudely the Eagle will treat you! Ego on the other hand will never ignore a Swan!
mmm I think she rather he did ignore her Amy!
Oh girls, you're sooo mean!
This from someone who draws a pic of the eagle in his undies with zark? lol
Transmute Jun
Transmute Jun Queen of the Bird Missiles posted 8 Oct 2007 12:28
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Originally posted by Firebird
Originally posted by amyltrer Oh girls, you're sooo mean!
This from someone who draws a pic of the eagle in his undies with zark? lol
You tell her, FB! Grin
Transmute Jun
Transmute Jun Queen of the Bird Missiles posted 8 Oct 2007 12:29
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Originally posted by amyltrer
Originally posted by Transmute Jun Oh, I think we're the ones who will be (man)handling the Eagle.... Grin
TJ, why do I sense you want the Eagle to undergo another Zark treatment? I almost feel sorry for him.....
As long as I get to comfort the Eagle afterward, you can bash him as much as you want. Grin
Ebonyswanne
Ebonyswanne Gatchamaniac posted 9 Oct 2007 00:56
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Don't do it TJ now she has your permission to bash him!
Firebird
Firebird Princess Firebird..... Goddess of Swannie Fics posted 9 Oct 2007 04:45
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She may have TJ's but there are other swans here too Wink
Transmute Jun
Transmute Jun Queen of the Bird Missiles posted 9 Oct 2007 06:13 (edited 9 Oct 2007 06:13)
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Amy has my permission to let ME reap the rewards of comforting the poor Eagle. There, there, Eagle let TJ make it alllll better for you..... Bigkiss Bigkiss Bigkiss Bigkiss Smooch Over18
amyltrer
amyltrer Gatchamaniac posted 9 Oct 2007 06:17
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Originally posted by Transmute Jun Amy has my permission to let ME reap the rewards of comforting the poor Eagle. There, there, Eagle let TJ make it alllll better for you..... Bigkiss Bigkiss Bigkiss Bigkiss Smooch Over18
Ahh, Force! Now who do I have to bash to get that Ego smut ficcie from TJ! #Amy sighs and returns to her evil sketches#
clouddancer
clouddancer Gatchamaniac posted 9 Oct 2007 06:21
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Originally posted by Firebird She may have TJ's but there are other swans here too Wink
And an upset Owl as well.
amyltrer
amyltrer Gatchamaniac posted 9 Oct 2007 06:41
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But, CD, I did nothing to the Owl!
Transmute Jun
Transmute Jun Queen of the Bird Missiles posted 9 Oct 2007 07:04
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bash the Eagle, and you anger ALL of us. Amy!!!!!
clouddancer
clouddancer Gatchamaniac posted 9 Oct 2007 07:30
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Originally posted by amyltrer But, CD, I did nothing to the Owl!
You may have done nothing to the Owl but, This Owl will protect her Eagle too. Just remember Owls are silent and deadly killers. Demonic2
amyltrer
amyltrer Gatchamaniac posted 9 Oct 2007 12:49
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Originally posted by Transmute Jun bash the Eagle, and you anger ALL of us. Amy!!!!!
Oh, ok.... #Amy lifts her hands and asks for truce# Otherwise I feel Ego would suffer more from TJ! What wouldn't I do for my blue boy? Elffrown2
Transmute Jun
Transmute Jun Queen of the Bird Missiles posted 9 Oct 2007 13:06
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Amy, you are too funny! We're all happy for the truce... in true Galactor fashion, you're always the one waging the war! I have to say, when your war tactics include pics though, I love it!!!!!
Firebird
Firebird Princess Firebird..... Goddess of Swannie Fics posted 10 Oct 2007 10:55
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The pics were amazing Smile
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