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Last post by Transmute Jun 29 Aug 2007 18:06
Just thought I would share.
"A kiss from a rose" is finally finished! Yeah I can move on!
I have now made it a series called,
The Final battle,
Here is a taste of what I is about;
The final battle &Has only just begun, the war has ended with destruction of the alien being in the satellite, and the break down of Galactor and its scum.
They team have been able to slowly rebuild their lives, and they have been de commissioned, The ISO have given them all an ongoing retirement pension for their efforts to save the planet from total destruction.
But there is someone out there that still wants them all dead and the battle has been taken to a new level.
For Count Egobossler this is now personal, and will take the Science Ninja Team down one by one if he has to&
But he has a plan for them, and he wants them to fear him, and he will take them all by surprise, since no one knows he survived.
Now is the time to rebuild his empire and will rule the Earth like he was intended too&
The team will now have to fight for their families lives&
This series started after Gatchaman 2 Friends and lovers.
Oh, can't wait to read it!
On another note, I've finally managed to post a fanfic on the Clubhouse. Thank you so much Ebony! I wouldn't have done it without your help!
No worries Amy!
It is another good place for people to look at you stories and get feedback! We'll have a live chat there soon!
Ebony I loved reading a kiss from a rose and I am looking forward to this new one 
I loved the nuances of the fic and Joe's reaction to little Bayden had me giggling nonstop.
Such a beautiful ending!
I loved the nuances of the fic and Joe's reaction to little Bayden had me giggling nonstop.
Such a beautiful ending!
Ohh, I loved the last chapter from Rose. Will you return to Lightening now? Can't wait for Jun to meet Ego!. And they will meet, right!
Ebonyswanne
Gatchamaniac
posted 16 Aug 2007 02:11
Yes they do Amy...was not pleasant either. I have written that part already.
Thanks firebird!
It is actually further in the series the first 2 fics are;
Friends and lovers(end of Gatch2Ken and Jun)
Secret lives(how Joe met his wife and son and Egos need for revenge.)
I just decided to clarify the series and name it, and let people know were it was going, when I first started writing these stories I didn't make them an offical series, but they all spin off from one another and there are at least another 5 fics from this universe.
The next in the order is Child of Destiny.
But the" last mission" and "A beautiful day" which really belong earlier than this one are still drafts. But I will do them.
Transmute Jun
Queen of the Bird Missiles
posted 16 Aug 2007 07:49
I am so thrilled! Kiss from a Rose is a wonderful, swoony story, and I love the way it fills in what happened in Friends and Lovers!
I am really looking forward to this new series... it should be lots of fun!
Ebonyswanne
Gatchamaniac
posted 17 Aug 2007 02:10
I have drafts for plots and I go into Jinpeis first real love and Ryu and Jill come back too.
I figured that Kiss from a rose was a good way to start Ken and Jun's family...
Jun finds out some really interesting things about her parents in the next fic...it has some swooney stuff in it too
And of course Ego tries to scare them...he is using some different tactics now to get his revenge...they don't know it's him though.
I should get the wedding day done(Ken and Jun's), it has Ego's first attempt at them in it...ahhh to much to write too little time to do it in!
Originally posted by Ebonyswanne And of course Ego tries to scare them...he is using some different tactics now to get his revenge...they don't know it's him though. I should get the wedding day done(Ken and Jun's), it has Ego's first attempt at them in it...ahhh to much to write too little time to do it in!Ah, let me guess how,
... He'll wear a Zark disguise? No, he'll dress up like Nambu and give them a heart attack? Or has he found in his closets an even more stupid -looking mask than the white one?
Is he still after Madeline? Is he, is he?
My wonderfull Ego is back....#swoons#
Ebonyswanne
Gatchamaniac
posted 17 Aug 2007 04:09
Yes he is...He discovers she lived after all....there are a few fics to cover his plots and schemes..he is trying to build his own organisation now...
You may have to wait for me to write them, but like a good wine they time to mature!
Originally posted by Ebonyswanne Yes he is...He discovers she lived after all....there are a few fics to cover his plots and schemes..he is trying to build his own organisation now... You may have to wait for me to write them, but like a good wine they time to mature!
Take your time Ebony!
Ebonyswanne
Gatchamaniac
posted 17 Aug 2007 05:18
I don't type that fast!
But I will put together a an Ego series with this anyway...he will pop up from time to time...
clouddancer
Gatchamaniac
posted 17 Aug 2007 06:00
It sounds like you are really creating your own little universe Ebony.
I really like the sound of it.
All our Birdies paired off, some of them with families. Perhaps even Ego too, paired off and with young Helm.
Originally posted by clouddancer Perhaps even Ego too, paired off and with young Helm.Yes,but he still has to find a momy for his little clone!
Transmute Jun
Queen of the Bird Missiles
posted 17 Aug 2007 07:05
Oh, but Junie was *such* a nice nanny! 
Ebony, your story ideas sound wonderful! I can hardly wait to read it all!!!!
Ebony, your story ideas sound wonderful! I can hardly wait to read it all!!!!
Ebonyswanne
Gatchamaniac
posted 17 Aug 2007 14:50
Well Amy is the honoured woman who saved him! The whisked him of to Romania to recover.
She becomes his second, and he lives in Transylvania to recover and start to rebuild his army...
Amy word of warning though...this character is not nice as she IS out to kill birdies and wants Ego for herself, but he's doing a Ken and ignoring her at the moment especially when he finds out Joe's wife is Madeline...his focus is else where...so if you change your mind let me know!
Originally posted by Ebonyswanne Well Amy is the honoured woman who saved him! The whisked him of to Romania to recover. She becomes his second, and he lives in Transylvania to recover and start to rebuild his army... Amy word of warning though...this character is not nice as she IS out to kill birdies and wants Ego for herself, but he's doing a Ken and ignoring her at the moment especially when he finds out Joe's wife is Madeline...his focus is else where...so if you change your mind let me know!Well, she sounds just like me!
Ok, can I add a little character suggestions? She was well trained in combat arts and was an excelent marksman. She had connections with the first Gallactor being one of Katze's Devil Stars. After her master's death she left in charge with the Eastern Europe Gallactor Branch.
You can chose from here want you wish. And it can be as smutty as you wish!
But please don't made her a Mary Sue! And most important, don't keep Ego stalling her for too much. She's not at all a patient person.
Check to the Gatch F villains thread. I posted there the piccie with Ego and his laptop!
Transmute Jun
Queen of the Bird Missiles
posted 17 Aug 2007 15:43
Oh, Amy... you're going to make such a great Galactor villainess!!!
Originally posted by Transmute Jun Oh, Amy... you're going to make such a great Galactor villainess!!!It's was my dream ever since I saw the series. Mechandor & Kempler failed too ofter! And somebody has to do it right!
Ebonyswanne
Gatchamaniac
posted 18 Aug 2007 00:31
Ahhh I was making her a Devilstar!
Ohhh she's the one behind his plans and has an active role in confrontations...No she won't be stalled to long...enough to make the smut better and the tension to build up!
I'm ignorant of Mary Sues! what ever it means..I know naive me!
I'll do a character profile for you! She is a real BADDIE!
This is sounding better and better by the minute. Guess now all we need to do is give Ebony time to write it?
Looking forward to it Ebony
Ebony, FYI, a Mary Sue is a character you base on YOURSELF, who takes over the fic by being better than the main characters. Sometimes this works out well (like in the Miya Washio fics) and sometimes not. (like in the fics I wrote about myself and Duran Duran when I was 14 
)
If you want to see a classic one, there's a good fic on ff.net that really makes fun of the whole thing. Ooh, I see it was written by Crickett!
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3393391/1/A_Mary_Sue_Story
Enjoy!
)
If you want to see a classic one, there's a good fic on ff.net that really makes fun of the whole thing. Ooh, I see it was written by Crickett!
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3393391/1/A_Mary_Sue_Story
Enjoy!
Ebonyswanne
Gatchamaniac
posted 18 Aug 2007 21:48
Ohhh Its a term I am not familiar with!
I really stick to the canon characters being the main ones, everyone else is extra and is meant to hightlight the story and the plot.
I like to develop my original characters however to give them some depth, not just be cardboard cutouts to fill in space...
So I like to give thought to who they really are, and why they are there etc...
A mary sue style would be better as a separate story I think.
Originally posted by Ebonyswanne A mary sue style would be better as a separate story I think.Is Amy going to be in that one too?
Ebonyswanne
Gatchamaniac
posted 18 Aug 2007 22:20
If you want!
Originally posted by Ebonyswanne If you want!It's Ego in that one too? So I can help his a$$ out of trouble.
Ebonyswanne
Gatchamaniac
posted 18 Aug 2007 22:51
I have so much to write and so little time!
which one are you working on now? Lightenings? I think I'm going to sketch something today.... let's see what I have in my evil , naughty mind.....
Ebonyswanne
Gatchamaniac
posted 18 Aug 2007 22:59
Yeah I want to finish lightening first, so it is done and i can focus on the series, I want to get the forum fic done as well.
So you're not going to post one chapter after another as you did untill now?
I hope you'll finish it soon. I can't wait to see how Jun's and Ego's meeting will be like.... ouuuch! 
Ebonyswanne
Gatchamaniac
posted 18 Aug 2007 23:11
No I can't because of some of the plot twists...but I'm working on it totally now to get it finished so I can move on..
Cliffhangers? Ohhh, I love them..... Meanwhile, I'll go back to the next drabble.......
Transmute Jun
Queen of the Bird Missiles
posted 19 Aug 2007 07:16
Go, Ebony, go!!!!!! Keep writing!!!!!!! 
Ebonyswanne
Gatchamaniac
posted 20 Aug 2007 00:39
Well TJ you got sent the next chapter to you to beta- read!
I have a lot of the story done, there are just parts that have detail that affect the rest of the story...but it is over half way written...
There is a co-authored Springie and TJ ficcie that I am dying to read!
Transmute Jun
Queen of the Bird Missiles
posted 20 Aug 2007 09:21
Is that a hint? 
It's still very much in progress. But in the meantime, I'll post more Inhibitions today... as soon as I can catch up on all of the goings on here! It's amazing how much happens overnight what with these round the world members we have!
It's still very much in progress. But in the meantime, I'll post more Inhibitions today... as soon as I can catch up on all of the goings on here! It's amazing how much happens overnight what with these round the world members we have!
Ebonyswanne
Gatchamaniac
posted 20 Aug 2007 22:26
I know what you mean by ficcies on progress.
I am just doing a qucikkie to have a break from thinking about Ansty...so what do I do...a short other Ansty ficcie about an encounter with Ego!
Amy your in it an will see it first...just a shortie
Originally posted by Ebonyswanne I know what you mean by ficcies on progress. I am just doing a qucikkie to have a break from thinking about Ansty...so what do I do...a short other Ansty ficcie about an encounter with Ego! Amy your in it an will see it first...just a shortieA fluffy ficcie about Amy and Ego? Gimme, gimme, gimme
All this creativity going on! We certainly seem to be writing/drawing and producing a lot of stuff for everyone to enjoy.
We have two IF's on the go also and these boards seem very alive with talent. I am so happy to be back and getting infected by you all
Amy it is DONE called The Prize...I have emailed it to you for your approval before I post it anywhere...
Welcome to the fold Firebird!!!!
It's APPROVED!!!! 
More. Ebony I want more! You've got me addicted now 
hehehe, poor Eagle, what has Ego in mind for him?
More. Ebony I want more! You've got me addicted now hehehe, poor Eagle, what has Ego in mind for him?
I just posted it in Clubhouse...maybe I'll post in FFic tonight...
Amy it was a stand alone ficcie just for you...if you want more of a plot with it then it would be easy to do, and I will put it as a part of the Final Battle Series...
as Amy the Devilstar is a part of that series as Egos second...
This could be her introduction to being promoted to Leader of the Devilstars!
And the reason why she would have later saved Ego from the Satallite...
Ahhhh I do something simple and then I go and complicate it!!!!!
So she was one of his men that survived the battle with Sosai? Was she injured in the battle too? I's so curious to see how thier relationhip will evolve......
Ahem, she will take her prize from Ego, right? 
Ebonyswanne
Gatchamaniac
posted 21 Aug 2007 06:03
mmmm have not gotten that far yet! LOL
Transmute Jun
Queen of the Bird Missiles
posted 21 Aug 2007 07:29
I think it's a terrific story, Ebony! And Amy the Devilstar is certainly a character worth developing.
I'm glad you're having fun, Firebird! I am too... waaaaay too much fun. I go back to work on Thursday and it's going to be hard..... 
Originally posted by Ebonyswanne mmmm have not gotten that far yet! LOLOhhh, I hope there won't be any disturbances. Amy is not a patient person.....
Transmute Jun
Queen of the Bird Missiles
posted 21 Aug 2007 10:01
Originally posted by amyltrerWhich Amy?Originally posted by Ebonyswanne mmmm have not gotten that far yet! LOLOhhh, I hope there won't be any disturbances. Amy is not a patient person.....
Originally posted by Transmute Jun Which Amy?Mmmm, both.............
Transmute Jun
Queen of the Bird Missiles
posted 21 Aug 2007 12:55
Originally posted by amyltrerAs I suspected...Originally posted by Transmute Jun Which Amy?Mmmm, both.............
Ebonyswanne
Gatchamaniac
posted 21 Aug 2007 15:22
See what I can come up with...I'll work on it in between Lightening musing...
Ahem, since I totally loved Ebony's Prize fanfic, I tried to mace a piccie for it......And screw up as usually.
Now. ignore that thing behind Ego, she doesn't look even remotely like me, even I'm not that ugly. Ego is all that matters anyway. And Ken was supposed to be somewhere under his boot, but damn paper wasn't large enough......
Ebonyswanne
Gatchamaniac
posted 22 Aug 2007 01:15
Hahhaa I have her dressed in black leather!!!!
It's good Amy!
Geez, I hope she has a resemblance with the portrait you had in mind for her
It is good to see a pic of Amy, gives me an image to work with as I read the fics!
Ebonyswanne
Gatchamaniac
posted 22 Aug 2007 02:56
Amy was doing some drawings of Amy the Devilstar as well, I'll share them when I can scan things in again, I have to get a new scanner!
Me too Ebony. Mine is just ruining my work!
Transmute Jun
Queen of the Bird Missiles
posted 22 Aug 2007 07:45
I love the new picture, Amy! And FWIW, I think the picture Amy is perfect: pretty, but intent on her task of pleasing Ego....
Amy, I think you look great!! I love the shading you did...I'd love to learn how to shade like that! And Ego, looks awesome, as usual!!! Great piccie!
Originally posted by Springie Amy, I think you look great!! I love the shading you did...I'd love to learn how to shade like that! And Ego, looks awesome, as usual!!! Great piccie!What are you talk about, Springie? You draw & shade a looot better than I do.
Ahem, she doesn't look like me.... I have short cropped reddish hair, and I'm not that thin! 
I still agree with the others it is a great pic!
#Amy sighs in relief#
Now I'm wondering what the other Amy is doing out there with Ego 
Keep them comin' Ebony 
Keep them comin' Ebony
Transmute Jun
Queen of the Bird Missiles
posted 23 Aug 2007 13:45
Is the other Amy taking your place in Ego's affections??? How dare she???
Transmute Jun
Queen of the Bird Missiles
posted 23 Aug 2007 14:04
ITA with that! 
Ah, TJ, you want to keep the Swan for Eagle & Condor only.....
Transmute Jun
Queen of the Bird Missiles
posted 23 Aug 2007 14:08
You saw right through me! 
Springie
Her Royal Fluffiness...Swan of Swans...
posted 23 Aug 2007 14:25
(edited 23 Aug 2007 14:25)
Swannies have definite opinions about their crushes, don't they? I think I lean more towards the Eagle, although I love me some Condor, too... 
Originally posted by Transmute Jun You saw right through me!So not even a bit of Swannie for the Blue Boy? Mean, TJ, very mean. He deserves a woman after all. Now I have to bug Ebony to get to the smut!
Transmute Jun
Queen of the Bird Missiles
posted 23 Aug 2007 15:56
Hey, he's got all of those maids and Devilstars roaming around!!!!
Yes but the maids are all over 60 years and the Devilstars are psychpatic killers!
Ebonyswanne
Gatchamaniac
posted 24 Aug 2007 00:54
oohhh Amy! do think it will get smutty!
Maybe...I haven't written the rest yet!
Amy you are a smart devilstar...Egos better half...even if you are a bit posessive of him...
Well, he does semm a very posessive man too. He's such a ladies man....She she'll have to keep him under her boot
Ebonyswanne
Gatchamaniac
posted 24 Aug 2007 02:35
Since The Prize is at the time as Secret lives (a mission that Joe stands Madeline up at the restaurant chapter.)
She doesn't like Egos reaction when he hands her the picture of her next target..mmmm she's a smart Devilstar this one!
Originally posted by Ebonyswanne Since The Prize is at the time as Secret lives (a mission that Joe stands Madeline up at the restaurant chapter.) She doesn't like Egos reaction when he hands her the picture of her next target..mmmm she's a smart Devilstar this one!Lem'me guess, he's askin' her to kill Madeline, and she reads from his blue features he has some feelings for her.......
And she's all jealous.....awww
I hope he won't repeat the Eagle-Swan history! Or Amy will deliver him a swift kick in the backside as a Prize.......
Ebonyswanne
Gatchamaniac
posted 24 Aug 2007 04:47
I must now let you suffer until it is done!
The next chapter of lightening is up by the way!
Transmute Jun
Queen of the Bird Missiles
posted 24 Aug 2007 07:54
Originally posted by amyltrer and the Devilstars are psychpatic killers!Well, that sounds just like Ego! A match made in heaven... uh... hell...
Transmute Jun
Queen of the Bird Missiles
posted 24 Aug 2007 07:55
I think The Prize sounds really interesting! And I'm off to read more Lightning!
Amy asnd Ego are certainly sounding like the perfect match
Mary Sues are what happen when the author makes a new character that takes over the show. Often wish-fulfillment for the author, but not necessarily. Either gender. Can be evil or nice. Can be major or minor character.
Example of a Mary Sue
Well I am now up to chapter 8 of Lightening...ahhh getting there!!! I have the next 3 chapters done for it...so when I go and touch them up to be in line with every thing I have done up till now than I will post them....
I don't know if I would be very good at Mary sues!
Originally posted by Ebonyswanne Well I am now up to chapter 8 of Lightening...ahhh getting there!!! I have the next 3 chapters done for it...so when I go and touch them up to be in line with every thing I have done up till now than I will post them....Good, very good!
#Amy rubs her hands#
Enjoying Lighning Ebony, so cant wait to see the ending.
Originally posted by Firebird Enjoying Lighning Ebony, so cant wait to see the ending.Me too, albeit for other reasons
Transmute Jun
Queen of the Bird Missiles
posted 28 Aug 2007 06:50
It's a fantastic fic! I love all of the intricacies and plot twists that keep you hooked!!!!
Ebonyswanne
Gatchamaniac
posted 29 Aug 2007 02:16
I have so many plots in that ficcie(Lightening) I think I have out done myself!
I think I will have to clarify more what is going on between the three main birdies (Eagle, Condor,Swan) earlier than I wanted too just so it doesn't confuse the reader, I found that I have expose more of a character who is not acting the way you would expect her too....
I will post the next chapters once I have the plot twists for the dimension he is in ties up well and is hole proof, because then the rest of the underlying story comes it to play and the final plot twist in the story...
No It is not predicable as to how he leaves this dimension or what happens...I just have to make sure I am doing it right so it makes sense!
I am working on it though with help!
I am sure it will turn out well Ebony
Transmute Jun
Queen of the Bird Missiles
posted 29 Aug 2007 06:16
I know it will turn out.... Ebony is so good at these twisty plot threads!!!
Ebonyswanne
Gatchamaniac
posted 29 Aug 2007 16:46
Well it won't be until next week at least that post any more of it, I when it is posted I won't be changing the chapter...
Transmute Jun
Queen of the Bird Missiles
posted 29 Aug 2007 18:06
We can wait for your high quality of work, Ebony!!!!
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