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Last post by Ebonyswanne 28 May 2007 05:36
SJ_SwanJun
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posted 25 May 2007 19:18
And here it is.
Inspired by a single line in a CSI fic about Grissom and Sara, I penned this little mushy gem.
The line in question was "Go to Hell." Said by Sara to Grissom when he cornered her in the locker room ...
After that single line (on page 2 of the fic) I stopped reading it because madame muse decided to forgo the other idea she was begging me two write, to give me this idea.
I kind of like it.
So if you're interested .... you may find it here
Let me know what you think...
SJ
Wish you could see me with the most satisfied grin , stretched from ear to ear .
Nows there's a side of Mark that SHOULD have been portrayed in the BOTP!
The fact that he is sexually active and so confident in his sexuality completely banishes that damn annoying "effeminate celibate" quality that kind of pervaded his character in the series!@
Having said that, oh how much more frustrating would it have been for never -been kissed Princess to have her Commander accessible to everyone but her!
Can you blame the vulnerable girl for recklessly and disastrously trying to have a date after Mark monumentally screwed up, answering her tentative request for a date with him?
The flashbacks, set the scene for one horrendously disastrous and potentially dangerous night gone horribly wrong for Princess. All because of a "No".
Ass indeed. What Mark does to finally get through to Prin and explain himself is swoon worthy and redeems him. *grin*
You scored SJ with this piece girl. As always so eloquently written , with gems of humorous wit to make any reader smile. "That's the woman's line, we own it, so please don't."-Classic line and Gold!
And it was so good to see Shinji again ! That entire scene from the moment Prin talks to him till Mark and Jase catch up with him..is priceless.
As with all your other fics, you wont be hearing "NO" from me for this fic either...a Huge Yes ..Yes YES!
Ebonyswanne
Gatchamaniac
posted 28 May 2007 05:36
Swanjun,
I have been reading some of your stories in Le fanfic site and they are soooo good. I havn't finished reading this one yet(but will for sure) I have really loved it so far.
I can't predict the ending of it so I have to keep reading....
I like the fact that you keep her softer nature and make it a strenght...so many people think that for a woman to be strong she has to somehow act like a man...so not true!
The flash backs work well....let you know when I finish but you have a real talent for writing swanjun!
When are you adding more to "when the war is over11"...I'm hooked on that one and can't wait for more!!! Will you be posting it here when it is finished???
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