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[i]Oppsss... I started that bit in third person and for some reason thought... "Oh no its all in first person," and changed it. The didn't have time to go back and read it again...Sigh...[/i] Thats okay Becky, keep for material if you like. You could work on a universe for an IF, it looks like your very good at developing them and I found reading your was easy to picture for an IF.

[i]Okay, I'll have a go..." [/i] Mark snapped me out of it for a moment with an icy blue glare and a few harsh words ordering me to get up something was approaching them. None of his normal noble speeches I noted. Just black and white orders and resounding grief in the undertones of his voice for the open wounds of the planet and its population- and bleak unknown future and a sensless war we appeared to be lossing by the second. "Get ready for action," Mark barked, and pulled out a weapon I hadn't seen before now. "They're here," He'll never give up until he's in a grave, so neither will I. I thought with determination gripping my soul and driving me on.

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